| "Happi's Redemption" Reviews/Comments [ 28 ] |
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Title: Chapter 6
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2010 05:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent stuff like always.
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Reviewed By: borgrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2010 13:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Haiku fu: Gender bender-true Happosai IS Noriko A girl's feelings rise ‼☺♥☺‼☺♥☺‼& #9786;♥☺‼☺♥☺‼☺♥☺ ;‼☺♥☺‼ Great story so far!
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Title: Chapter 5
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2010 03:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ranma/Happosai is not a common pairing. Can't wait to see where you're going with this.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2010 01:20 EDT
Comment/Review:
chapter was not uploaded, only the title was there.
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Title: Chapter 4
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2010 10:03 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2010 23:29 EDT
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Stupid cliffhangers. Oh well, it's an interesting start, and the next chapter should be VERY interesting for the effects. In any case, update again soon, ja ne.
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Title: Chapter 3
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2010 02:52 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great work
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Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2010 18:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nothing to add to the review I gave you some time ago. It's interesting.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2010 23:57 EDT
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Hmmm, so far this sounds like a good setup, but no second chapter has been posted, only the prologue. Otherwise, could be good. Continue to update, ja ne.
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