| "Paternity of a Princess" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Title: Chapter 7
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2010 15:04 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent once again though I skipped the scene where Ranma was telling Usagi about the training journey. I've read that one so often that I usually skip those parts.
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Title: Chapter 6
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2010 06:12 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great like always.
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Title: chapter 5
Reviewed By: borgrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2010 22:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Does anyone know how to make a carriage return stick? I liked this chapter. It was better than pedantic exposition and advanced the story. It will seem kind of mean, if Ranma steals Tux-boy from Usagi, especially considering healing of brain damage, the 'completion' of the catfist, and flying. Lots of people would consider it a fair trade for birth gender. May RL and your Muse be kind.
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Reviewed By: borgrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2010 22:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story‼ We'll see if html tags work. Haiku fu: You differ enough/ Think not little of your fans/ I'll try to review/ • ‼☺♥☺‼☺♥☺‼☺ϖ 9;☺‼☺♥☺‼☺♥☺‼ 786;♥☺‼☺♥☺‼ • Great Story‼
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Title: Chapter 5
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2010 05:18 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Slow chapter but interesting nevertheless.
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Reviewed By: Narsil [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2010 21:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
A good read so far. The writing gets a little dry sometimes, and Ranma occasionally get too wordy for how I see him (or her, in this case), but an interesting plot more than makes up for the minor problems reading it. For how it tracks with Fist of the Moon (one of my favorite fanfics), I wouldn't worry about it - considering how many Ranma fanfics have been written, it'll be the rare story indeed that is totally original. This story is different enough right off the bat to keep me following it (especially the fact that this time Sailor Moon locked Ranma's curse by a totally unnecessary mistake).
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Title: Chapter 4
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2010 13:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: Shadow2040ad [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2010 05:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its interesting
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Title: Chapter 3
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2010 09:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'd like to read more of this. I just think you're exaggerating when it comes to Ranma's feelings. I doubt she'd seriously consider suicide. The thing that bothers me a bit is the Ranma/Endymion pairing. Honestly, I can't see it happen, but that's just a minor thing. I'd continue reading this story anyway.
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Title: Ancalador
Reviewed By: Ancalador [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2010 04:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have enjoyed the story so far but I don't think I will continue if Ranma ends up with Endymion. Ranma is rabidly against relations with any male in Canon, as his reaction to being kissed by Mikado of the Golden Pair. Also in The Fist of the Moon Ranma doesn't regain his male gender, it is implied that Usagi uses Spring of Drowned Man.
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Reviewed By: ianmajor [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2010 01:56 EDT
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I find this one the most interesting so far, following by Soul divide, then happi, I loved Fist of the Moon, and I would love to see how this goes.
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Reviewed By: PCHeintz72 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2010 01:07 EDT
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Hmmm.... Just read chapter 3 Well, it is obvious Sailor Pluto set Ranma up, or at a minimum put Ranma and Usagi in this situation by deliberate inaction, and is now only giving half the info. As such, even if Ranma reacts as Pluto wants toward the senshi, and even if you intend Ranma to be permanently locked as indicated by author notes, I would hope Ranma goes on a lifelong quest to make Pluto's life as miserable as is possible by any means nessecary in retaliation for what was done to him/her. Otherwise, justice is not being served and a criminal gets away with her crime. Because it is all but certain Usagi and others did not seem of a mind to do anything to Pluto at the end of that scene.
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Reviewed By: wolf40k [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2010 20:45 EDT
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???? I'm pretty sure that this is the wrong story you updated.
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Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2010 18:55 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy it so far. Can't wait for more. I don't mind if you got inspired by 'Fist of the Moon' for Ranma's curse removal. Great job.
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Reviewed By: ianmajor [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2010 22:01 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this start, even though it greatly resembles one of my other Favorite Ranma as a Senshi fics, but off the 3 I like this the best.
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