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"Closer" Reviews/Comments [ 40 ]
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 Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 07, 2012 17:49 EDT
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What a wonderful chapter. It was well worth the wait. I would love it if u wrote another b/v fic. Update again soon please.
 Title: i know a great song that goes great with this theme!
Reviewed By: LavonyaVegeta lover [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 08, 2012 12:11 EST
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Artist: PUSSYCAT DOLLS Song Title: DON'T CHA Check it out! i just found it i could believe it when i was lisining to it it reminded me of this story. i love this story some of these thing i didn't even se comeing. heh heehe
 Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 14, 2012 17:04 EST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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What an interesting turn of events. I hope grace gets what's coming to her soon.
 Reviewed By: TFSrules [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 13, 2012 18:25 EST
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I feel like I missed something. And, Gracejust makes me want to vomit...ewww. Vegeta just needs to execute her, and her father... I'll re-read 'Sweet and Delicious', and try to figure out what's going on. I'm sure that it isn't your writing, I'm just an airhead...lol
 Title: Thanks
Reviewed By: Vegeta-Sugar-Sweet [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 27, 2011 09:49 EST
Comment/Review:
Thank you all for writing reviews. I never ask but am always appreciative. I plan to keep this fic going for at least 5 more chapters. It just may turn into an epic. Anyway, have fun out there and thanks for reading!
 Reviewed By: LavonyaVegeta lover [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 26, 2011 13:29 EST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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AWESOME! this is better that thier first time.Now, all you have to do is take out that horrible coniving bitch, and make him go SSJ and kill Frieza!
 Reviewed By: TFSrules [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 21, 2011 06:56 EST
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BRAVO!!! Omg, even better than their first time, and that was tremendous...WOW Great job! Now, take out that sneaky bitch!
 Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 21, 2011 01:04 EST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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I'm so happy that they are back together. Hopefully Grace and Zarbon won't be able to drive a wedge into their reunion. Love the lemon. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Please update soon and add more lemons, lol.
 Reviewed By: TFSrules [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 18, 2011 15:16 EST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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OMG! Please tell me that you plan to continue and finish this fic...I will be completely devastated if I am left hanging! Lol, seriously...
 Reviewed By: LavonyaVegeta lover [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 24, 2011 15:08 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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wow......this...is...AWESOME! i can't wait for an update! (hay that rhymes)
 Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 17, 2011 11:16 EDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Thank the lawrd, vegeta has his memories back! Now, maybe bulma can get a chance to kick grace's ass again. Loved this chapter. Hopefully we'll get some steamy b/v interaction soon. * wink wink* Anyway, this story is wonderful. I hope u keep writing and maybe update sooner or I'm gonna go thru withdrawls. Lol
 Title: My 2 cents....
Reviewed By: X0oBuffyo0X [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 15, 2011 03:05 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really like the uniqueness of the story. I had even forgotten and I read everything twice lol. It was still as good. Although, the whole fic says complete, I hope this isn't true. The last chapter was a tremendous cliffhanger as to how their relationship will turn out that I'm really hoping on some continuance of this story. Please write more. It seems as if it could only get better. (^^)
 Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 24, 2011 14:13 EDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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That was truly a bitter/sweet chapter. It's killing me that vegeta still thinks grace is his mate. I hope this all changes soon. Hope u update soon. U should totally put this fic on FFn, u would get a lot of reviews. Ur story is so amazing!
 Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 29, 2011 09:56 EDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Man, I can't stand that they're still not together. I hope vegeta remembers her soon. Update soon, please.
 Title: update soon please
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 01, 2011 19:37 EDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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God, this story is really good. I hope bulma doesn't give in to zarbon's advances. Hopefully b/v reunites soon.
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