| "Closer" Reviews/Comments [ 40 ] |
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Reviewed By: rennysusanto [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2013 23:49 EDT
Comment/Review:
Love it... love it... love it... die you Grace n Jesper... Die frieza!! Muahahahaha... |
Title: Yeah!
Reviewed By: TFSrules [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2012 21:22 EDT
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Omfk...eeeeeeeeeeee! I am SO goddamned happy! Gracie is d-d-d-dead! And her god-awful daddy, too! Too bad about Yamucha...NOT! Now for the celebratory sex, and the happily-ever-afters...so, YEaaH! Lol...bravo, lady...BRAVO!!! XD |
Reviewed By: rychefan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2012 23:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww poor bulma....why can't Grace die already....love this story keep up the great story |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2012 19:01 EDT
Comment/Review:
Awe man! I hope u update a little sooner. I want to know what happens next. |
Reviewed By: TFSrules [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2012 15:46 EDT
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Too short! Omk, I So happy that you've updated... Grace is a slutty snake, and Vegeta needs to snap her fucking neck! I know that you won't let anything else happen to Bulma.. Right? Update again.. As soon as you can, please! XD |
Title: great chapter!!
Reviewed By: green integration [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2012 15:42 EDT
Comment/Review:
OMG you updated I have been waiting for this! I absolutely love this story!! So when grace was walking to her doom, I was snickering but my god it didn't turn out right what the hell Bulma just let vegeta kill him! Why does Grace have to ruin everything arghhhhh just when they were mated!! great chapter and update soon! |
Reviewed By: rychefan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2012 01:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the way you write your stories pull me in from the first word to the very last one....keep writing and i will keep reading... i cvouldn't stop reading till the end |
Title: update this work of beauty!!!
Reviewed By: green integration [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2012 20:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHH this is just amazing I loved the plot I was so relieved when he finally came to his senses! But I want more damn it I want to see graces reaction when vegeta announces bulma as queeen!!! You have to update this soon pleaseeeee! |
Title: PERFECT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: LavonyaVegeta lover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2012 16:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have to agree with every one on how this is great!! i liked the wedding and poem!!! |
Reviewed By: TFSrules [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2012 16:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this as soon as it was posted, but, since I temporarily forgot my username(like a dumbass), I couldn't review. Now that my brain has returned, however, I am ready to review. Although it was quite short, it was worth it, since we got to bare witness to Vegeta and Bulmas wedding ceremony. It was beautiful, and, now for the beat down of that insipid bitch and her SOB father...here's to no one else dying needlessly, except for the aforementioned assholes... Lol Looking forward to the next installment...anxiously XD |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2012 17:49 EDT
Comment/Review:
What a wonderful chapter. It was well worth the wait. I would love it if u wrote another b/v fic. Update again soon please. |
Title: i know a great song that goes great with this theme!
Reviewed By: LavonyaVegeta lover [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2012 12:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Artist: PUSSYCAT DOLLS Song Title: DON'T CHA Check it out! i just found it i could believe it when i was lisining to it it reminded me of this story. i love this story some of these thing i didn't even se comeing. heh heehe |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2012 17:04 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What an interesting turn of events. I hope grace gets what's coming to her soon. |
Reviewed By: TFSrules [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2012 18:25 EST
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I feel like I missed something. And, Gracejust makes me want to vomit...ewww. Vegeta just needs to execute her, and her father... I'll re-read 'Sweet and Delicious', and try to figure out what's going on. I'm sure that it isn't your writing, I'm just an airhead...lol |
Title: Thanks
Reviewed By: Vegeta-Sugar-Sweet [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2011 09:49 EST
Comment/Review:
Thank you all for writing reviews. I never ask but am always appreciative. I plan to keep this fic going for at least 5 more chapters. It just may turn into an epic. Anyway, have fun out there and thanks for reading! |
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