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Reviewed By: LavonyaVegeta lover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2011 13:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME! this is better that thier first time.Now, all you have to do is take out that horrible coniving bitch, and make him go SSJ and kill Frieza! |
Reviewed By: TFSrules [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2011 06:56 EST
Comment/Review:
BRAVO!!! Omg, even better than their first time, and that was tremendous...WOW Great job! Now, take out that sneaky bitch! |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2011 01:04 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so happy that they are back together. Hopefully Grace and Zarbon won't be able to drive a wedge into their reunion. Love the lemon. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Please update soon and add more lemons, lol. |
Reviewed By: TFSrules [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2011 15:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! Please tell me that you plan to continue and finish this fic...I will be completely devastated if I am left hanging! Lol, seriously... |
Reviewed By: LavonyaVegeta lover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2011 15:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow......this...is...AWESOME! i can't wait for an update! (hay that rhymes) |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2011 11:16 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank the lawrd, vegeta has his memories back! Now, maybe bulma can get a chance to kick grace's ass again. Loved this chapter. Hopefully we'll get some steamy b/v interaction soon. * wink wink* Anyway, this story is wonderful. I hope u keep writing and maybe update sooner or I'm gonna go thru withdrawls. Lol |
Title: My 2 cents....
Reviewed By: X0oBuffyo0X [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2011 03:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the uniqueness of the story. I had even forgotten and I read everything twice lol. It was still as good. Although, the whole fic says complete, I hope this isn't true. The last chapter was a tremendous cliffhanger as to how their relationship will turn out that I'm really hoping on some continuance of this story. Please write more. It seems as if it could only get better. (^^) |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2011 14:13 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was truly a bitter/sweet chapter. It's killing me that vegeta still thinks grace is his mate. I hope this all changes soon. Hope u update soon. U should totally put this fic on FFn, u would get a lot of reviews. Ur story is so amazing! |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2011 09:56 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, I can't stand that they're still not together. I hope vegeta remembers her soon. Update soon, please. |
Title: update soon please
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2011 19:37 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God, this story is really good. I hope bulma doesn't give in to zarbon's advances. Hopefully b/v reunites soon. |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2011 20:00 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor bulma, I can't imagine how she must have felt seeing vegeta with grace. I hope she doesn't hook up with zarbon. I hope u update soon. This is getting good. |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2011 23:37 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bulma is going to be heartbroken when she sees Vegeta with Grace. I can't imagine how she'll feel when she finds out Grace is pregnant. I'm on pins and needles. I hope you update soon! |
Reviewed By: lell [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2011 21:39 EDT
Comment/Review:
Poor Bulma, she's been so strong and when Vegeta doesn't recognize her, I think it's going to break her. I hope Vegeta remembers her right away, but I have a feeling that, that is wishful thinking. |
Reviewed By: lell [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2011 12:16 EDT
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Great chapter. You still have me on the edge of my seat. Looking forward to seeing what Bulma's up to. Do you really plan to have Vegeta lose his memory? |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2011 23:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh! I hate Grace! I hope she isn't really pregnant with Vegeta's child. I hope you reunite b/v soon. I can't stomach Grace being with Vegeta. |
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