| "Closer" Reviews/Comments [ 40 ] |
| Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 ] |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2011 20:00 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor bulma, I can't imagine how she must have felt seeing vegeta with grace. I hope she doesn't hook up with zarbon. I hope u update soon. This is getting good. |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2011 23:37 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bulma is going to be heartbroken when she sees Vegeta with Grace. I can't imagine how she'll feel when she finds out Grace is pregnant. I'm on pins and needles. I hope you update soon! |
Reviewed By: lell [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2011 21:39 EDT
Comment/Review:
Poor Bulma, she's been so strong and when Vegeta doesn't recognize her, I think it's going to break her. I hope Vegeta remembers her right away, but I have a feeling that, that is wishful thinking. |
Reviewed By: lell [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2011 12:16 EDT
Comment/Review:
Great chapter. You still have me on the edge of my seat. Looking forward to seeing what Bulma's up to. Do you really plan to have Vegeta lose his memory? |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2011 23:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh! I hate Grace! I hope she isn't really pregnant with Vegeta's child. I hope you reunite b/v soon. I can't stomach Grace being with Vegeta. |
Reviewed By: lell [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2011 21:03 EDT
Comment/Review:
Can't wait to see what vegeta does to yamcha |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2011 21:10 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! Vegeta is going to kick yamcha's ass for what he did. Can't wait for next update. |
Title: update soon
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2011 16:27 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your description of the crime scene was so detailed. I wonder who kidnapped bulma, and who killed the king? Can't wait til your next update. Hopefully soon. You should put this fic on ff.net. I'm sure you will get tons of reviews. Anyway, job well done as always. |
Title: another great chapter
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2011 22:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wonder what grace and Yamcha are up to. Great chapter please update soon! By the way, the lemon was hot! |
Title: More please
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2011 00:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it that you made Bulma a fighter. I hope she doesn't let Yamcha weasel himself back into her life again. Please update soon. I really like this story. |
Title: chap 6
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2011 20:49 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm surprised u haven't gotten more reviews. I'm enjoying this story so far. Good flow to ur story. |
Reviewed By: thafallenangelunknown [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2010 19:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FABULOUS!!!! I LOVE YOUR FICTION...PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
|
Reviewed By: The_Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2010 16:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! Please update soon. The scene with friend was really gross... but very well written... it gave me goose bumps.
|
Reviewed By: PRINCESS_P [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2010 10:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooooooooo its good! are you new to mediaminer? please continue to update this story its really good and cant wait to see what happens!
|
Reviewed By: Violet62 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2010 08:22 EDT
Comment/Review:
I'm so happy to be the first to review this fics .You made a lot of efforts, please keep going until end. I'm always love B&V fics.
|
| Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 ] |
