| "I Feel So..." Reviews/Comments [ 66 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2002 17:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH POO.
It's over. *sob*
Damn. Well good job!! I really enjoyed this fic!!!
Write more!!! ^^ |
Reviewed By: Chibi-Dacras babysitter [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2002 08:39 CDT
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Yup my first review for your story...wish i did last night though, i love this fic and can't wait for each chappie to come out |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2002 07:19 CDT
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Yay! Bulma's pregnant! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 20, 2002 02:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Looks like my suspitions were correct. I wonder how Veggie is gonna react. He must be losing it, after all he told Mrs. Briefs that he LOVED Bulma. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 20, 2002 02:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, Bulma's eating like there's no tomorrow. Could it be that she's pregnant ^_~? Only one way to find out. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 20, 2002 02:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, 3 chaps in one day. How lucky can a reader get ^_^. Anyway, it's good to see B/V together in his bedroom instead of the Punishment Room. Now I see he's having second thoughts, so on to the next chap to see where he takes this. |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2002 20:29 CDT
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Yes this is suspicious! I must know what happens! |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2002 12:35 CDT
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This chapter was so cool! Update soon. :) |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 18, 2002 02:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was such a sweet chapter...I feel warm and fuzzy inside *sighs*. Veggie can be so affectionate and caring when the mood strikes him. Bulma is one lucky lady ^_^. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 17, 2002 20:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was some dream. Veggie was so sweet to take care of her like that so that no one else would know whats really going on. It really doesn't matter anymore cause a few people know what they're up to in there. Oh yeah and the lemon was really good. I love their playfullness and the way they screamed into each others hands so that noone would hear them. Good chap!! |
Reviewed By: cherry On: August 17, 2002 10:33 CDT
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Its so awesome! Please update soon!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 16, 2002 21:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Looks like their plan worked ^_~, and I love the fact that Veggie doesn't care if everyone else finds out what he and B have been up to. I think it ended just fine. A nice talk between the two and we all know where that's heading :D. |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2002 19:26 CDT
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This was great! How will Dr. Briefs react when he finds out his creation did more than it was designed to? |
Reviewed By: rose yuy On: August 16, 2002 15:27 CDT
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y arnt u wrighting more?
plz reght more plz plz plz |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 16, 2002 00:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Looks like the only way those two can get some privacy is to end up in the Punishment Chamber. Can't wait to see what Bulma comes up with to start a fight ^_^. Good chaps. |
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