| "I Feel So..." Reviews/Comments [ 66 ] |
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Reviewed By: Susan On: August 16, 2002 00:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, Bulma's mom is perceptive, and here I thought she was a complete idiot 24/7. Veggie, being his secretive self, doesn't want anyone to know what happened between him and Bulma. That treehouse looks inviting. I wonder if Veggie will be tempted to go up there and keep Bulma company ^_~. |
Reviewed By: Big VEE On: August 16, 2002 00:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I gave the story a 10/10 for the following reasons; I thought the idea of Gohan interupting Bulma and Vegeta was comical and original, the idea of making the two former enemies stay inside the Punishment chamber was original,and Vegeta's way of seeing things was definetly intact in the storyline. However, I found the constant use of the lines "I'll Kill You,I hate you,etc a bit repeative. Although I could care less as long as I see some more of this story in the future and hopefully a little more action with some more descriptive/dirty words used. |
Reviewed By: Sam On: August 16, 2002 00:14 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Damn! I was reading one story and when I go back to the main screen I relized you updated again. Well thank goodness you don't take as long as other Authors. Well N*E wayz, update soon. |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: August 15, 2002 09:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
the end of chapter five was soooo cute!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 15, 2002 02:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn that Yamcha for being such a troublemaker. I'm glad Briefs didn't believe him, at least for now. Looks like Bulma has bitten more than she can chew. First being Veggie's lover and now she has to cook for him? I can't wait to see what else they fight about so they can end up in the Punishment Room ^_~. |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2002 18:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh man! That dork Yamcha's always ruining the fun! *huffs* Update soon. :) |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2002 16:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.O Yamcha??? Tell Mr Briefs?? AHHHHHH!! STOP HIM!!! *runs after Yamcha and shoot him*
YEAH HAHAHHAHAHAHHAHA!! *wakes up from dream* DAMN!!
CONTINUE!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 13, 2002 15:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uh oh, I smell trouble...in the form of Yamcha. Then again Dr. B locked them in for the night, so I have to wonder if that was his way of getting them together ^_~. Good chap. Write more please. |
Reviewed By: cherry On: August 12, 2002 17:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow! Please continue! I want you to update soon, please! |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2002 16:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
This was awesome !please update soon! I know dr. Broefs won't be expecting Bulma and Vegeta to engage in sex? What'll be his reaction? |
Reviewed By: Lupin Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2002 11:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWWWWWW! OHH I want the next chapter to come out really bad! This is an awesome fic!!! ^-^ |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 12, 2002 02:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a pretty good lemon ^_~. I don't think B/V hate each other, they're just in denial. I wish Veggie hadn't wrapped her up in the towel. I can just about imagine the look on Dr. B's face in the morning-lol. Well I can't wait to read how they react to what happened when they wake up. Good job! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 12, 2002 00:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uh oh, those two are starting to get close ^_^. I think that Dr. Briefs has a sense of humor given the fact that he hid the pjs. Maybe he's got some hentai thoughts going through his head. Take your time with the lemon...they're just starting to communicate :D. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 11, 2002 02:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oops, there they go again. One problem though...Bulma never got to shower. That room will not be smelling any good. Poor Veggie, hehe. |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2002 00:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
This was a great chapter, what could happen next!/ |
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