| "I Feel So..." Reviews/Comments [ 66 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2002 23:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is cool!
Waiting for when Vegeta and BUlma get locked in together and have lemony goodness!! ....
lemonade of coarse! ^^ |
Reviewed By: BlueMinx On: August 07, 2002 19:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
Cute idea....keep it going. |
Reviewed By: kasidi On: August 07, 2002 18:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
tight fic!( next time make sure bulma puts on lotion and deodorent after her showers *holds fingers over nose and fans air*). don't keep us wiatin for the 2nd!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: gmssgirl On: August 07, 2002 18:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nicccce!! get started on the 2nd already! me and 8 other peps are waitin!!!! |
Reviewed By: xtraruffrider On: August 07, 2002 17:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
what is with the mad mom? bunny never got mad. she alwayz took things as compliments. u spelled everything right, but the grammar was terrifying. i enjoyed the originality. so ya butt got an eight *little party noises in backround* good luck on second chappy:>) |
Reviewed By: C.A On: August 07, 2002 08:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is what I call a great fic. I love it! Please update it soon. Love the whole idea!!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: cherry On: August 07, 2002 03:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please continue!!! I soo love it!!!! |
Reviewed By: Starheart [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2002 10:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think that you did a great jobe at this story, and I hope that you plan to continue it soon. |
Reviewed By: RedEyeDragon2478 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2002 10:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
not bad dude hope to see the second chapter soon fox67859@yahoo.com email me there when your done |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2002 10:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
This was great. Update soon. |
Reviewed By: Sailor Mercury [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2002 07:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is SOOOOO good!!! Please continue soon!! And if you don't mind, could you e-mail me @ hodgins0418@cs.com when u update please??? Ja ne!!!
*~*~* Sailor Mercury *~*~* |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 05, 2002 01:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uh oh, looks like the bitchin' sessions are starting to get to Dr. Briefs and even his wife. I can't wait to see what this "punishment room" is all about. Good start to your story. |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2002 19:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
I gotta know what happens next! |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2002 04:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHAHAHA!! *wipes tear from eye*
YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE!! THIS IS GREAT!!
CONTINUE!!
you updated fast.....that's a good sign!! *wink*
CONTINUE SOON PLEASE!!
so you can get to the lemon part soon!! ^^ |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 08, 2002 04:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL!! Excellent! I can't believe they actually followed Dr. Briefs to the chamber. Bulma didn't bitch and Veggie didn't pulverize the old man O_o. The chains and the arm coming down and shocking our favorite saiyan were a nice touch. I love this. Please put up some more chaps. |
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