| "I Feel So..." Reviews/Comments [ 66 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2002 16:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.O Yamcha??? Tell Mr Briefs?? AHHHHHH!! STOP HIM!!! *runs after Yamcha and shoot him*
YEAH HAHAHHAHAHAHHAHA!! *wakes up from dream* DAMN!!
CONTINUE!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 13, 2002 15:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uh oh, I smell trouble...in the form of Yamcha. Then again Dr. B locked them in for the night, so I have to wonder if that was his way of getting them together ^_~. Good chap. Write more please. |
Reviewed By: cherry On: August 12, 2002 17:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow! Please continue! I want you to update soon, please! |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2002 16:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
This was awesome !please update soon! I know dr. Broefs won't be expecting Bulma and Vegeta to engage in sex? What'll be his reaction? |
Reviewed By: Lupin Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2002 11:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWWWWWW! OHH I want the next chapter to come out really bad! This is an awesome fic!!! ^-^ |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 12, 2002 02:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a pretty good lemon ^_~. I don't think B/V hate each other, they're just in denial. I wish Veggie hadn't wrapped her up in the towel. I can just about imagine the look on Dr. B's face in the morning-lol. Well I can't wait to read how they react to what happened when they wake up. Good job! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 12, 2002 00:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uh oh, those two are starting to get close ^_^. I think that Dr. Briefs has a sense of humor given the fact that he hid the pjs. Maybe he's got some hentai thoughts going through his head. Take your time with the lemon...they're just starting to communicate :D. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 11, 2002 02:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oops, there they go again. One problem though...Bulma never got to shower. That room will not be smelling any good. Poor Veggie, hehe. |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2002 00:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
This was a great chapter, what could happen next!/ |
Reviewed By: KoAL On: August 10, 2002 23:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like it! Keep up the good work and please....PLEASE make chapter 5 soon!!!!.. thanks!!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Aiko On: August 10, 2002 17:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i adore this fic! continue please! |
Reviewed By: Sailor Mercury [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2002 12:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oops...I meant to put
*~*~* Sailor Mercury *~*~*
*slaps her forehead* I'm such a baka... |
Reviewed By: Sailor Mercury [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2002 12:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
*grins* SO GOOD!!!! Please continue soon!!! Ja ne!!
*~*~* Anime Luver *~*~* |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2002 09:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
This was great! I love it so far. So when do the sparks fly? I must know! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 08, 2002 00:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hell, Bulma told Veggie off big time, and apparently the noise has angered Daddy. So is he gonna spring the room on them in the next chap? Oh yeah, good chap ^_^. |
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