| "I Feel So..." Reviews/Comments [ 66 ] |
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Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2002 20:29 CDT
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Yes this is suspicious! I must know what happens! |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2002 12:35 CDT
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This chapter was so cool! Update soon. :) |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 18, 2002 02:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was such a sweet chapter...I feel warm and fuzzy inside *sighs*. Veggie can be so affectionate and caring when the mood strikes him. Bulma is one lucky lady ^_^. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 17, 2002 20:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was some dream. Veggie was so sweet to take care of her like that so that no one else would know whats really going on. It really doesn't matter anymore cause a few people know what they're up to in there. Oh yeah and the lemon was really good. I love their playfullness and the way they screamed into each others hands so that noone would hear them. Good chap!! |
Reviewed By: cherry On: August 17, 2002 10:33 CDT
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Its so awesome! Please update soon!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 16, 2002 21:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Looks like their plan worked ^_~, and I love the fact that Veggie doesn't care if everyone else finds out what he and B have been up to. I think it ended just fine. A nice talk between the two and we all know where that's heading :D. |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2002 19:26 CDT
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This was great! How will Dr. Briefs react when he finds out his creation did more than it was designed to? |
Reviewed By: rose yuy On: August 16, 2002 15:27 CDT
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y arnt u wrighting more?
plz reght more plz plz plz |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 16, 2002 00:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Looks like the only way those two can get some privacy is to end up in the Punishment Chamber. Can't wait to see what Bulma comes up with to start a fight ^_^. Good chaps. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 16, 2002 00:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, Bulma's mom is perceptive, and here I thought she was a complete idiot 24/7. Veggie, being his secretive self, doesn't want anyone to know what happened between him and Bulma. That treehouse looks inviting. I wonder if Veggie will be tempted to go up there and keep Bulma company ^_~. |
Reviewed By: Big VEE On: August 16, 2002 00:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I gave the story a 10/10 for the following reasons; I thought the idea of Gohan interupting Bulma and Vegeta was comical and original, the idea of making the two former enemies stay inside the Punishment chamber was original,and Vegeta's way of seeing things was definetly intact in the storyline. However, I found the constant use of the lines "I'll Kill You,I hate you,etc a bit repeative. Although I could care less as long as I see some more of this story in the future and hopefully a little more action with some more descriptive/dirty words used. |
Reviewed By: Sam On: August 16, 2002 00:14 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Damn! I was reading one story and when I go back to the main screen I relized you updated again. Well thank goodness you don't take as long as other Authors. Well N*E wayz, update soon. |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: August 15, 2002 09:43 CDT
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the end of chapter five was soooo cute!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 15, 2002 02:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn that Yamcha for being such a troublemaker. I'm glad Briefs didn't believe him, at least for now. Looks like Bulma has bitten more than she can chew. First being Veggie's lover and now she has to cook for him? I can't wait to see what else they fight about so they can end up in the Punishment Room ^_~. |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2002 18:35 CDT
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Oh man! That dork Yamcha's always ruining the fun! *huffs* Update soon. :) |
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