| "I Feel So..." Reviews/Comments [ 66 ] |
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Reviewed By: Foxie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2003 22:07 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Plz go on. yur story is great. i think its kind of funny how they got 2 gather. if u update soon let me no at. larry2991@earthlink.net |
Reviewed By: Legana On: October 30, 2002 08:24 CST
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hm, the lemon wasn't that good, too short. |
Reviewed By: Legana On: October 30, 2002 07:45 CST
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the fight was good girl, they had nice arguments, escpecialy bulma at the last. |
Reviewed By: Sheena On: October 01, 2002 05:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story had so much humor, making me laugh many times which believe me is a feat in itself. I really enjoyed the positions you put Vegeta and Bulma in I mean the 'punishment room' that one of the best ideas I heard in a while. In a way a bit simple by the overview of everything, as you didn't go to deep through the story, emotion wise. Overall a amusing and enjoyable fic, but be warned that your spelling and grammar really needs to be upgraded with major accidents throughout the story you might say.
Oh well, I think you are a great writer and look forward to any other stories you have written.
Sorry for some of the flames but I give honest opinion and can be strict in reviews, but only for the reason to help you out.
Well, bye bye and keep writing. |
Reviewed By: cherry On: January 02, 2003 21:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story!!! it was so sweet and romantic...i loved it. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 21, 2002 17:11 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, when I reviewed the last chap I was gonna request another, but decided that maybe I was being too greedy. Well, I'm glad you changed your mind cause this last chap was excellent. I like the fact that Veggie was ooc and teased Yamcha about his marriage to Bulma. Again, I hope you're proud of your story b/c you did a great job writing it and I had a blast reading it ^_^. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 21, 2002 02:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a nice ending, even though I'm sorry that it was the last chap. Looks like everyone took the news rather well, with the exception of Yamcha, of course. You did a super job with this story!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 21, 2002 02:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah! Bulma's pregnant. If Veggie thought he was up a creek before, wait till he hears the news ^_^. |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2002 20:19 CDT
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To bad this had to end, this was great! :) |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2002 17:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH POO.
It's over. *sob*
Damn. Well good job!! I really enjoyed this fic!!!
Write more!!! ^^ |
Reviewed By: Chibi-Dacras babysitter [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2002 08:39 CDT
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Yup my first review for your story...wish i did last night though, i love this fic and can't wait for each chappie to come out |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2002 07:19 CDT
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Yay! Bulma's pregnant! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 20, 2002 02:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Looks like my suspitions were correct. I wonder how Veggie is gonna react. He must be losing it, after all he told Mrs. Briefs that he LOVED Bulma. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 20, 2002 02:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, Bulma's eating like there's no tomorrow. Could it be that she's pregnant ^_~? Only one way to find out. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 20, 2002 02:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, 3 chaps in one day. How lucky can a reader get ^_^. Anyway, it's good to see B/V together in his bedroom instead of the Punishment Room. Now I see he's having second thoughts, so on to the next chap to see where he takes this. |
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