| "The Storm" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: vegeta and future trunks [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2015 01:43 EDT
Comment/Review:
well im very interested in this story plz update soon!!! im curious
to see how vegeta will go about to bed bulma. Will we be expecting
a lemon any time soon?(crosses fingers) lol
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Reviewed By: TFSrules [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2011 23:13 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic...I do hope that you will continue. I have enjoyed many of your other fics, and look forward to following this one, too. |
Reviewed By: animefan011 On: May 29, 2011 05:00 EDT
Comment/Review:
So far its sweet and way different than Slave. Good. I hope there wont be any harsh BDSM stuff here. My stomach couldn't take more lol |
Reviewed By: PrettyLintu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2011 13:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I got the email telling me you'd added this to fanfic, I was glad to read it on here instead! I like the theme, and just know this will not be another straight forward VB :) x |
Reviewed By: Zakirya On: May 08, 2011 07:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful! And thanks for bringing back the ol' Bulma Briefs' fire! And nice touch with Vegeta coming out of the shower! Can't wait for the talk with Yamcha...thrills! |
Reviewed By: PRINCESS_P [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2010 23:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!! im so happy ur writing b/v again! this looks great i cant wait to see where it goes..im even more exited about how slave is gonna turn out though!!!! lol
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