| "Futanari Ranma" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: Futanari Ranma ch3+
Reviewed By: daranman [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2012 21:10 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I saw on your blog that you have more chapters done for this fic please keep posting them here |
Title: Chapter 2
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2011 23:34 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I see you're still alive. Nice chapter once again. |
Title: Love it!
Reviewed By: Arashihiriakotsu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2011 05:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story can't wait for more. I think bringing shampoo in would be great as well as a bit more extreme sex such as other fetishes and anal sex would be a good addition. Thanks for posting this I'll be waiting for more. |
Reviewed By: xepher [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2010 15:04 EST
Comment/Review:
It was good when can we expect more chapters |
Reviewed By: johndiablo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2010 15:55 EST
Comment/Review:
I like it I hope you cotninue to add more chapters. I liek to suggest that the amazons find and react pretty well. Maybe the amazons conisder it a blessing of sorts and changes things. they won;t try to force Ranam to coem tot he tribe but willingly and Shampoo becoems a mistress or sister sheild to Ranma and Akane. Thus becoems a form of athreesome, have her help Akane become a herm as well tempory or permeant up to you. Thus Ranma and Akane have Shmapoo in a sex sandwich . Twist is this is witness by two others, Nabiki and se fidns it hot and maybe Kodachi who has a secret fetish for such things. |
Reviewed By: Tai Khan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2010 13:29 EST
Comment/Review:
While an interesting plot that hasn't been attempted before (although the 'Ranma the Hermaphrodite' concept itself isn't new), the synopsis is misleading. Ranma has no real time to be worried about whether or not anyone will will want him because of his new cursed form, because Akane practically jumps 'hir' bones within moments of learning about it. I would have found it a more enjoyable read if one of the other girls had had the futanari fetish, like Nabiki, Shampoo or Ukyo, rather than Akane (while it can be used to explain some of Akane's past behavior, it still comes off as seeming 'forced' just to keep the two together). With Nabiki, it would have gone a long way in explaining her lack of any 'real' interest in either boys or girls romantically. Ukyo, it could have revealed that she'd suffered some mental problems of her own from having lived as a 'boy' for so long. With Shampoo, she could just be revealed to be a bit 'kinky' (although I've noticed that you seem to have a strong dislike for the Amazons in general in most of your stories). Overall, not bad, but seriously hampered by your own fondness for the Ranma/Akane pairing and your tendency to immediately smooth over any problems they may face.
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Title: Chapter 1
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2010 03:01 EST
Comment/Review:
This one's really different. Funny in a way, although Ranma should have a more normal sized dick I think. That one is really too large.
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