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| "A Tale of Ever After" Reviews/Comments [ 303 ] | | Pages (11): [ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 › » ] | Reviewed By: inufan666 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2022 21:36 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've really been enjoying this and was thrilled to see its had
recent updates. Looking forward to future chapters
| Reviewed By: Silver.film26 On: August 28, 2015 21:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I tend not to review something unless it's really good or really
bad and this is astoundingly good. It reads like a great novel and
the detail is stunning. It feels more like the village is the main
character that sort of favors Inuyasha and Kagome. I don't know how
you keep track of all those characters but you really do and
flawlessly at that. It's so geniusly woven together that I can
hardly believe it's fiction. I know you haven't updated in a while
but I hope that doesn't turn away any new would be readers because
to pass up on a story like this is to miss out on something
extraordinarily special, you certainly have a gift for writing. I
do hope that things will clear up for you so that you will be able
to post again as I look forward to reading the rest of this great
story.
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2015 05:25 PST
Comment/Review:
So glad you were able to get this posted finally. Sorry about real
life being such a pain in the butt right now. Hopefully switching
to Wednesdays and Saturdays will work better for you, giving you
that extra day for the second chapter each week. At any rate,
thoroughly loved this update, as per usual. Can't wait to see what
Sesshoumaru has to say.
| Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2015 20:36 PST
Comment/Review:
I can't help but notice that three regularly scheduled new chapters
in a row have been missed, as well as several recent previous
chapters have been late. While part of me really wants to know what
is up with the bird demon, and people getting sick and all that,
the bigger part of me is starting to get worried about you. Is
everything alright? Have there been complications from you husband
surgery? Maybe the bad weather back East has knocked out your power
and you simply are unable to write or post. Or is life just
throwing you a lot of curveballs right now? Whatever is the case I
hope all will be well soon, and if not my thoughts and well wishes
are with you.
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2015 15:15 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice update. Better to have it a day late than skip an update
altogether! Do we have another naysayer in our midst? Although I
guess if you want to get technical, Denjiro's not far off in his
grumblings. It *is* Sesshoumaru's scent, and presumably Inuyasha's
as well, that lured that bird-youkai to them. But that's one youkai
drawn to them out of HOW many random pesky ones Inuyasha has chased
away? I bet even he doesn't know how many youkai attacks he's
prevented, because lower beasts and oni, I bet a lot of them just
smelled him (and Sesshoumaru) and decided against a confrontation,
heading the other way. Plus let's not forget how he comes in handy
during a bandit raid. Yes, it's unfortunate what happened to the
cow, but I think the bottom line here has got to be the fact that
all the local (and even not-so-local) kami are on Inuyasha's side
and say he belongs there. And now that Kagome's back, well sure
they might run into the occasional youkai trouble, but they've also
got a very powerful miko to help deal with it when it happens. Like
Tameo said, the kami gave them the right tools to do the job. You
know this is a great story when we can get a chapter that's 100%
original characters and it's still just as awesome as any other
chapter, LOL. That's quite the community you've created for
yourself. I'm definitely looking forward to seeing what happens
next!
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2015 06:03 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa...okay, was not expecting that! So it's explained well enough
that Sesshoumaru's father agreed to something or another that
created a magic spell that now binds him in the presence of at
least that yosuzume if not others, but why the hell would he do
that? She could have pecked at him had Jaken not been there!
At least we know why she's bothering the village now. 'Curiosity',
indeed. I guess the wording of the spell could have been intended
to be a promise that Sesshoumaru would never attack her,
never harm her, but damn, it shouldn't make him completely immobile
like that! Just prevent offense, not defense. Well I
bet Inuyasha isn't bound by that promise, since it sounds like
something that originally happened before he was born. Thank
goodness! And least he and Kagome can take that bitch out, if need
be. Sounds like Rin was indeed the target when the bird was
circling that field. Can't have that. I would say 'never a moment's
peace' but of course, this is months later after all the craziness
of the previous arc, so in reality they *have* had some peace
before this new development. Looking forward to seeing what happens
next!
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2015 19:48 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uh-oh...so much for Sesshoumaru rushing in to save Rin's life from
the dive-bombing bird-youkai, LOL. So Inu/Kag scared it off (or it
was just toying with them) and now it's gone to pick on
Sesshoumaru? Well, I suppose that hints towards it being the same
yosuzume that attacked Inuyasha before...unless there's a whole
family of them that have a bone to pick with the Inu no Taisho's
family, for some reason. Like Inuyasha said, there's always a
reason. It might not be a human reason, but there's a reason. Glad
nothing bad happened to Kimi, Tazu and Rin, I guess aside from Tazu
now having that same sore throat curse thingie that's still
affecting Nakao. I guess she'll be okay, though. How's that old
joke go? Doctor it hurts when I do this...well then don't do that,
LOL. So I guess if she's only just not 'allowed' to speak of the
bird-youkai, then she's fine otherwise. Still though, it'd
definitely be better if they could figure out how to cure that. And
I can feel Inuyasha's frustration with being that close and losing
his prey, but it was the right decision to not pursue at that
moment. I'm sure it'll be back...provided Sesshoumaru doesn't kill
it with a flick of his wrist, of course, LOL. Looking forward to
seeing what happens next!
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2015 19:54 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, good. Glad to see that we won't just have Sesshoumaru rushing
in to the rescue, but that Inuyasha and Kagome are right there by
Rin as well as the yosozume shows itself. Glad it showed itself at
all; much easier to catch that way. And dropping little treasures,
indeed. Good for Kagome, picking the feather up unafraid and
letting her powers zap it one. Her powers would definitely win out,
no doubt about it. Her arrow should take care of the whole bird
too, I'd imagine, provided Sesshoumaru gives her a chance to fire,
LOL. Looking forward to seeing what happens next!
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2015 17:51 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL, poor Inuyasha. My oh my but has he matured over the years, or
he never ever would've been able to keep his temper like that, LOL.
I'm not worried about the bird-youkai approaching Rin since we know
who else is approaching from the west. Hopefully Inuyasha
can pick up a scent trail. Even if he can't track it, especially
since it flies like he pointed out, if he can at least locate the
scent that'll confirm once and for all they're dealing with the
same type of youkai (or same exact youkai?) instead of it only
being a good hypothesis. Definitely looking forward to seeing what
happens next!
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2015 17:23 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, progress! I laughed when the adults were ignoring Nakao for a
minute there. Just like adults to ignore a child in such an
important conversation, but good for Nakao to speak up and get
himself noticed. Glad Kaede had been able to cure whatever spell
had been causing his throat to clamp up on him when he tried to
tell what he saw. After hearing what the scratches look like on the
cow we know it's definitely the same creature. I guess 'creature'
is the wrong word since the bird becomes a girl. But what the hell
does she want? Guess we'll find out pretty soon. Keep up the
awesome work!
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2014 17:24 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So glad you're back! What a crazy week, huh? Well, hopefully like
you said things will be calm now and you can be back on your twice
a week schedule. Loved this update, of course. Glad Kaede had
something to take care of Nakao's throat magically closing up on
him every time he tried to tell his story. That bird lady
definitely did that one too him when she glared at him, I'd say.
And was that a dig, Inuyasha, about you not having the power in
your glare to shut Kagome up? LOL. No, Kaede's right, he's not the
one in his family with that gift, our miko is! LOL. So glad we're
getting to the bottom of this, but damn, one of Toshiro's cows? I
guess a bird youkai's gotta eat, but seems to me she's picking on
them on purpose. But why? And IS she the same one Inuyasha saw as a
child? Is Inuyasha the reason she's there? I guess I'll find out,
LOL, but this is a lovely new arc you're shaping and the mystery is
fun! Keep up the awesome work!
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2014 16:55 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Does sound like it's all connected to me. Could be another of the
same species, but something tells me it's probably the same one.
But Inuyasha's not on her mountain, she's invading
his territory, so what the hell's her deal? And nobody's
heard of the feather magic, so that is definitely something new.
Then again, from Inuyasha's story, she just ran him outta town, so
it's not like he had a chance to learn all of the different tricks
she had up her sleeve. Not surprised that by Kagome's time, our
time, the legend of the yosuzume has become so toned down, warped
away from what they really were. Or maybe there are different
types, different levels, and the little sparrows are the weaker
ones. Whatever. Looking forward to getting to the bottom of this,
though! Keep up the awesome work. :-)
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2014 18:24 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All's forgiven for skipping Tuesday! This was a really good update!
Yosuzume, you say? *strokes chin thoughtfully* Very interesting. So
Nakao DID see a bird turn into a girl. We're dealing with a
bird-youkai...but what the heck does she want and why make the
peddler sick? How the heck did he wind up with a youkai feather
tied to his wrist? IS his rambling connected to that other peddler
in any way, or was that part just a coincidence? Or maybe he didn't
bump into that other peddler, but whatever messed with Hajime's
mind also messed with that other peddler. Except he just seemed
'off' in the head in a more normal kind of way, and he was a
stranger there and therefore didn't know Inuyasha. We can excuse
his reaction, if he is a touch crazy, is plagued by ghosts, and
legitimately fears all youkai and got spooked at the sight of him.
Hajime, he KNOWS Inuyasha, so it took a fever to make him
delirious. Perhaps there is some other youkai monster eating people
somewhere, and they're confusing Inuyasha for that monster. Well
whatever is going on, something tells me it's all
interconnected with everything else. Quite an interesting new arc
you're weaving. Keep up the awesome work!
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2014 16:21 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What's up with Nakao? Sounds like an actual, magical reaction, like
somebody or something's trying to stop him from telling what that
person or thing deems he should not be telling. Interesting twist.
And it's funny about Hajime not recognizing Inuyasha at all
despite his fevered state. You'd think he'd kind of remember
him. I guess he's just really, really out of it. Interesting theory
about somebody poisoning the local peddlers. Guess that means it
wouldn't be catching, if that's the case, although that first
peddler wasn't sick, just sick in the head. Could be he's the one
that filled Hajime's head with such nonsense and because of his
fever he believed it. Could even be that he didn't believe it at
first, but then got sick, and now not really being aware of what's
going on that peddler's warnings are somehow coming to the
forefront of his mind. Whatever's happening, something tells me
that bird-youkai woman thing Nakao saw might just play a part in
it. Good twists! Super looking forward to seeing what happens next!
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2014 19:26 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now I'm very curious, too! I wasn't expecting this twist. I just
figured Kagome was going to make her way to Kaede's and bump into
everyone else and the sick herb peddler. So there's a bird youkai
nearby? Did she have anything to do with the peddler's fever? If
she had mean eyes like a rooster before it charges, that's probably
not a good sign. I would think, like a bird, she was just glaring
if Nakao got too close to her nest, but Inuyasha usually does
patrols, I'm sure, so he wouldn't let a youkai that powerful make
roost so close to the village. Not unless they'd already had a
conversation in which she'd sworn she meant the local humans no
harm, and Inuyasha would've made sure the villagers knew she was
there so that a situation like this wouldn't happen. No, she's
definitely there uninvited, but what, exactly, is she up to?
Hmmmmmmm... Good twist! Looking forward to seeing what happens
next!
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2014 18:04 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Inuyasha, LOL. First that one crazy peddler, now this
peddler, who's even been there before and knows of Inuyasha
already! But, I suppose, we can excuse his delirium because of the
fever, and we already know the crazy peddler probably wove one hell
of a tail. Wonder if it was that poor child he helped that got him
sick? And they said there was a fever going around. Sure hope it
doesn't spread into something bad. Any of Daikoku's good luck still
hanging around? LOL. That's just too funny. 'Get the guard',
'You're looking at him' LOL. Wonderful first day on the job, ne,
Inuyasha? Looking forward to seeing what happens next!
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2014 14:41 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh dear, now what's happened? LOL, well, Inuyasha will definitely
earn his stripes. It's good that he agreed to become an official
member of the guard. He'd help out if the shit really hit the fan
anyway, so may as well make it official. Not that there's very
many, if any, people left in the village who still have a problem
with him, but it does also help give him a leg to stand on as far
as status and power goes. People *do* have to listen to him, at
least when it's his turn wielding the club. Of course technically,
he's higher status anyway, not that the naysayers paid his status
any attention. It's just so cool seeing him act like a part of the
community he is in fact a part of. I can understand how it still
feels a little weird to him, like when he realized they were just
teasing him about being late. He definitely had a good excuse for
why he was late, though, LOL. The opening scene was cute, too.
Damn...so close and yet so far, LOL. Now Kagome has to wait a whole
month to play with his human ears again. He better not think she'll
forget, either, LOL. All in all, a lovely little chapter. Looking
forward to seeing what happens next!
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2014 14:56 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwwwwwwwwwwww.. . So sweet! The opening bit with
Sesshoumaru was good, too. A little bit of insight. He doesn't even
realize how long he's staying away from Rin's perspective. Time
passes differently for youkai than humans, after all. Back with
Inu/Kag... AWWW! LOL. Seriously though, cute scene. So glad
they finally got to enjoy a new moon alone together. And with a
thunderstorm going on, no less. Awesome! I'm a sucker for a good
nighttime thunderstorm. Anyway, so awesome update, and keep up the
good work!
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2014 18:36 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww...lovely update. I love everything from the subtle information
on flowers (most lilies are indeed poisonous, especially to cats),
Kagome and Inuyasha's mature moment as she briefly brought up
Kikyou, to their speculations about Sesshoumaru and Rin. A
wonderful little scene of peace and calm. It was definitely a good
idea to avoid Tameo's place if they were discussing the peddler. I
can't blame Inuyasha for wanting to just put all that behind him
and forget about it. Looking forward to when the new moon night
gets here! :-)
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2014 13:10 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwww... Lovely update! So nice, the way you wove in that status
update on both Chiya and Maeme. Chiya was just being a spoiled
brat, so it looks like she finally learned her lesson and has
sucked it up, acting like the mature woman she ought to be. Quite
possible that one day, she might even look back on how much of a
bitch she used to be and actually realize she had been the one in
the wrong. Maeme...SO glad to know that she's doing okay, and maybe
even more than okay from the sound of things. If anyone
deserves it, she does. Lovely, lovely update. :-)
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2014 19:24 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cute update. Dang noisy bird, LOL, though I guess it was for the
best since Inuyasha got to speak with Miroku for a second before
they left town. I love all the little back and forth banter you
have Inuyasha participate in. He's come such a long way from the
closed off, lonely boy he used to be. Now he's a man, and a
husband, and part of a community. Definitely looking forward to
'tonight', in story time. Keep up the awesome work!
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2014 06:22 PST
Comment/Review:
I'm falling behind, shame on me! I blame Halloween weekend for
distracting me. I completely brain farted that Thursday's chapter
even existed, and as eager as I was to read your update yesterday
'real life' got in the way. What a pleasant surprise to find I have
two chapters to read this morning before leaving for work.
Chapter 299 was very sweet. So glad they finally made it home okay
and all the little details you threw in were just lovely. Subtle
things, like mentioning the fire in the firepit, which under normal
circumstances is supposed to be left burning even during the
summer. I loved Inuyasha's feeling of 'home' - he deserves it. And
Kagome made him a summer kosode? Awwww... Beige and blue plaid
sounds pretty. He can't be in fire-rat red all the time.
Their light joking of if he had stripped down to his fundoshi
during the shard quest was funny. I bet they weren't too far off on
what would have happened with Miroku and Sango, LOL. As for chapter
300 - and congrats on the big 300, by the way! - what a sweet
chapter it was. Awwwww, nice and WAFFy. Poor Rin. Even knowing
she'll eventually get her own happily ever after, it's sad to watch
her now as a child, lonely and missing Sesshoumaru so much. I guess
it's not really the daiyoukai's fault he perceives time
differently, but he definitely could make the effort to see
her more often, for her sake, even if to him the visits would seem
ridiculously frequent. It doesn't matter if to his perspective he
just saw her (last month), he needs to realize she's human
and do things according to her perception of time. Ah well,
that's a worry for another day I guess. At least Kagome cheered Rin
up in the meantime. Looks like Inu/Kag are about to enjoy some nice
rabbit for dinner, and then each other for dessert, LOL. Looking
forward to tomorrow's update... And I'll try to read it on time
this time!
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2014 14:24 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww...sweet update. I'd forgotten about Chika, silly me, but was
glad to see you'd thought about who would cat-sit while they were
away. Funny how Chika was jealous of Kirara. Just because she's not
demonic anymore doesn't mean her advanced intelligence left her. Oh
no, that Chika is a smart one. I think all cats are pretty smart to
begin with, but as a bakeneko she could *talk* and you know she
wouldn't forget a language skill once acquired; she understands
every word being said to and around her. Glad to see Kohaku's doing
all right. I bet it does still haunt him at times, but what's done
is done and nothing was really his fault. He's doing the right
thing, being a taijiya, working now to save as many lives as
possible. Can't bring back the ones already dead, but there could
be a whole lot more people dead in the future without him there to
save them, so every time he slays a troublesome youkai that
would've destroyed a village, that's added to his karma. He'll
atone, one day. Poor Inuyasha, smart Miroku, LOL. It's like jeeze,
do they have to spell it out for everyone, that they want to be
alone on the new moon night, just the two of them? LOL. Never hurts
to have ofuda on hand though, I suppose. Never know when those
might come in handy. Hope Inuyasha doesn't take Kagome's statement
the wrong way. It's not like she really needed to be away from
*him* for a while, she just needed quiet and boring for a while.
It's amazing she wasn't a total PTSD case and was able to do well
in school and act normally around her friends, after everything she
lived through. Anyway, looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Looks like pretty soon here we're gonna have some new moon snuggle
time, so definitely looking forward to that. :-)
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2014 18:08 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Still chuckling about that stupid peddler. Figures that after the
miko told him off, and told him 'the youkai' was her husband, he'd
still go and tell those boys that there was a monster about to eat
the children. Once somebody's got it in their head that the people
siding with the youkai are merely possessed, and that dark magic
has warped everyone's minds, there's no convincing them otherwise.
I thought it was a really nice touch that it didn't even dawn on
the boys that the peddler was talking about Inuyasha. I would say
'good riddance' but there's no getting rid of people with that kind
of attitude. At least their village is peaceful once again, for
now. And what perfect timing! Weren't Inu/Kag just wondering about
how they could go about having the new moon night all to
themselves? Well, now they don't have to be the ones to broach the
subject, asking Miroku and the others to stay away because they
want the privacy. That certainly worked out in everyone's favor.
Also love that you commented on Kohaku using a youkai-forged
weapon. I think everyone made a good point, though. Tessaiga is
youka-forged, made to protect humans, and even though the taijiya
created it, Hiraikotsu is made from youkai bones - and
apparently has sentient youkai spirits within it if that one arc of
the manga with the sage youkai and his vats of sake is anything to
go by. Looks like we're about to have some WAFFy Inu/Kag moments
coming up pretty soon here. Looking forward to it!
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2014 15:11 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
At least the peddler didn't turn into another Morio. Too funny! I
can see why Koichi was amused, but on the other hand I can see why
Kagome and Inuyasha weren't. It's one thing to get that sort of
thing while out on the road, but in their own home village? And
like Hisa said, they're known all throughout Musashi, so any locals
from any of the nearby neighboring villages know just who Inuyasha
is and they'd walk into Kaede's village knowing in advance that he
lived there. That guy was a tad touched in the head, I'd say. He
certainly didn't know when to shut up, LOL. I think Kagome handled
it very well, under the circumstances. I wonder if this was an eye
opener for some of the locals as far as what Inuyasha's had to deal
with his whole life until now, and maybe it'll help them realize
why he's as closed off as he is, and is as slow as he is to coming
around and being friendly with them all. I think all things
considered, Inuyasha's really come a long way, able to joke with
the guys on occasion, and having agreed to take up being on the
village guard. He's an active member of the community, and now for
the first time some of the people he's gotten close to have
experienced just why it is that becoming a member of the community
was a hard transition for him to make. Good chapter! Poor Inuyasha,
just barely getting home and then this. Home is supposed to be a
safe haven away from all that crap. Kagome's going to have to kiss
and make it better ;-).
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2014 17:24 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uh-oh...and just when I thought this was a nice and calm, easy
going chapter, LOL. Even Inuyasha's not as used to that reaction
anymore these days, although on the other hand the villagers' open
acceptance of him was still weird. I bet he bristled, stiffening
up, but in his mind was thinking something along the lines of 'here
we go again' or what have you. Kagome I can just imagine, LOL. Look
out! Pissed off Kagome coming through! Will she keep her cool?
She's not the same fly off the handle fifteen-year-old she used to
be. My Kagome would narrow her eyes, and with tight lips would
calmly, with a dangerous glow in her eyes, tell the man that she is
not purifying her husband. After all, they aren't in
somebody else's village where they might want to keep their
relationship on the down low. That, I could completely understand,
pretending he's just her youkai protector, an inugami of sorts. But
this man is in their village. On a side note, it's so funny
how we use the word 'purify' to mean 'kill'. Basically he was
saying, oh there's a man that looks like a youkai, I don't know
anything about your village whatsoever and nobody around seems to
be concerned but that can't possibly be right so yes, you must
murder him immediately without asking questions, LOL. I wonder what
Susumu, Koichi and everyone else's reactions are going to be? After
all, it's not just Kagome and Inuyasha there, but a bunch of other
people too, people who all call Inuyasha friend. Even if they just
try to calm the frantic man down as if his panic is understandable,
going 'it's okay, it's okay, Inuyasha is a good youkai,'
somebody with that strong of a reaction at first sight probably
wouldn't be calmed down too easily going 'oh, you know him? Oh all
right then.' This ought to be interesting...
| Reviewed By: Thayet [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2014 18:05 PDT
Comment/Review:
Another amazing chapter. Was the italicized area part of a
one-shot? It looked familiar and I've been rereading a lot of your
work recently. Just a thought, it might be nice to put a link to
the interconnected stories when they come up at the end. That way
if someone hasn't read it they can read it again. I can't wait for
next week's chapters.
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2014 14:54 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good update! I love how you incorporated that old New Moon one-shot
into this one. That's always been one of my favorites of your many,
many one-shots. I don't reread most of them, but that one I've
reread at least a couple of times. I know more or less those
one-shots represent the same universe as this story, although they
were like a trial run since that was so long ago and now
this is the final, official product. I hadn't even really
known when in the timeline that scene was supposed to have taken
place. So nice to see it woven in as having taken place during your
time jump. Yay! And you made it make sense in regard to that
bakeneko having been seeking revenge for Chika. Neat twist. You are
so very good at weaving, after all. And LOL on Inuyasha actually
being pickled out. I didn't think it was possible! I bet eating all
that vinegar while out on the road really does have health
benefits, and I'd like to say I'd rather eat the vinegar than be
sick, but even so, I think I'd definitely be ready for a change
once I was back home, too. Looking forward to seeing what happens
next!
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2014 22:11 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwww...sweet little reunion chapter. I'm not surprised at all that
they ended up collapsing onto the floor in a pile of clothing. Back
in the day, Inuyasha never knew what he was missing, but now that
he's got a wife waiting for him at home? Adds a whole new, much
more important reason why he'd get frustrated with his trips with
Miroku. If you don't count ye olde Bake Neko arc then I think this
marks his first trip away from home since Kagome came back, and
regardless of how many chapters it actually took to get through
that other day, it was only a single day in story time. He
wasn't gone over night, like he was this time, for several
nights. Glad they both made it back safe and sound, Inuyasha and
Miroku, not that I imagine there's too many things they couldn't
handle. I guess it really was all meant to be, and a good
thing they were there, since they did save that guy's
daughter, and were rewarded handsomely for it, too. All's well that
ends well. Looking forward to the next chapter!
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2014 12:53 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lovely chapter! I especially liked Inuyasha unable to resist
running to Kagome, grabbing her and spinning around like a love
sick fool, even right in front of Miroku. That would've been
downright inappropriate behavior in the village proper, but in
front of Miroku we all know it's okay. Still though, for Inuyasha
to be okay with showing that level of affection in front of
anyone, especially someone who loves to tease like Miroku
does, that really shows us not only how much Inuyasha has matured,
but how much he really loves Kagome. And proving he himself has
also matured, Miroku didn't even tease...Daitaro did. LOL, good ol'
Daitaro! I also loved the quick reference to kitsune lore, because
they do indeed exploit sexual tricks. Male kitsune, especially,
will take female form to seduce human men. It was cute the way
Shippou was like uh, I gotta go, LOL. He's not there yet, but he
will be someday. I bet he'll practice on Miroku first, LOL. But
that's fun for a few years down the road, story time. Even with
your time jump it's only been what, a couple of months since Kagome
arrived? Maybe three at the latest? We've still got a LOT of story
ahead of us, in this fabulous soap opera of yours. I can't wait!
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