| "True Torture" Reviews/Comments [ 40 ] |
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Reviewed By: Zorella_ On: September 05, 2003 01:26 CDT
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HA! Love it! Love everything about. Got yourself another regular reader ;) |
Reviewed By: christabeleve61 On: September 04, 2003 22:31 CDT
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I just found this jem and you have been posting since Nov. I love how you made Bulma dark and yet believeable. I can wait for them to wake up too. |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2003 16:34 CDT
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Holy crap!! Earth's gone??!! Oh my goodness. I'm too shocked to even write a worthwhile review. O.o Can't wait to see what happens on Namek. |
Reviewed By: Laina On: August 31, 2003 20:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UGH!!!!!!!!!! This is SO NOT fair, I wonna know what happens next NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I HATE cliffhangers, but I guess at the same time I love them. Please update soon!!!!!! I mean, PLEASE UPDATE REALLY REALLY SOON!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker On: August 20, 2003 09:04 CDT
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Glad you updated! Bulma's in a predicament, isn't she? I'm not sure I want to know what Vegeta's going to do to her. O.o Oh wait, yes I do! *will be patiently awaiting the next update* |
Reviewed By: otaku On: August 19, 2003 04:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another chapter finally but nasty cliffhanger!!!!!! Please post more soon!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: butterfly13 On: June 23, 2003 18:27 CDT
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still love this fanfic and still can't wait for the next chapter! The gummy bears thing was so CUTE! Please don't give up on this story!!! |
Reviewed By: Lychee SSJ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 21:13 CST
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Aargh! Next chapter please!! Very good so far. Dead boyfriend or no, if I had Vegeta helpless on a bed, well... ahem! Uh, next chapter please!! |
Reviewed By: Lupa On: February 22, 2003 11:19 CST
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Another great chapter! You're keeping Vegeta in perfect form - ruthless and angry- I fear for the planet after he adapts to the drug. LOVED the part about the gummy bears- so damn cute! Keep 'em coming! |
Reviewed By: B On: February 17, 2003 13:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, i love this fc. please have a new chapter ready really soon! please..thanx. |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2003 08:21 CST
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I love this story!! Very original. I could just see Vegeta envisioning himself mentally blasting himself just so he wouldn't have to listen to all the stupid humans anymore! can't wait to see what happens next time. |
Reviewed By: otaku On: February 17, 2003 04:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is very very good! I feel sorry for poor Veggie, he was through a lot!!! But I think he's the only Dragonball character that has true angst inside of him...MORE MORE SOON PLEASE!!! |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: February 08, 2003 23:37 CST
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mmm, psychological torture is ALWAYS the best form of torture... hee hee....
seems to me that vegeta respects her reason for torturing him. that's kind of scary. the part when they started talking about freeza was pretty scary too.
very awesome! i reaaaallly hope you update soon!!!! |
Reviewed By: LiLPixie On: February 17, 2003 12:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...your story is AMAZING! Why haven't I seen it on MM before? Argh, it's simply beautiful! The whole talking in her head, but she can't reply the same. Omg, and he's adapting! duhn, duhn, DUHN!!! what will happen to poor bulma? a lemon, i hope...LOL Anywho, continue your AMAZING writing of your AMAZING story....did I mention that it was AMAZING? |
Reviewed By: casy12 On: January 24, 2003 19:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When are you gonna UPDATE!!!!!!!! Pretty please with loads of sugar on top and 2 cherries!!! I have been on here all the time looking for an updated chapter of your fic. SO ORIGINAL! ONE OF THE BEST!!!! UPDATE FOR ME!!!! Frieza needs to enter soon! I WANT to know about Vegeta's past...so many UNANSWERED QUESTIONS!!!! |
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