| "True Torture" Reviews/Comments [ 40 ] |
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Reviewed By: kookie On: November 30, 2002 21:46 CST
Comment/Review:
very very interesting! I can't wait for more!
I love all your fics actually--thanks for continuing to write ^_^! |
Reviewed By: angelscaramel On: December 01, 2002 13:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely loved the twists! Good job. Can't wait for the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2002 21:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
JB: *looks at co-reviewer* Ah you're dead.
Yamcha: She would have to start at that part.
JB: Even so, I like where this is going don't you?
Yamcha: No way! I can already tell this is going to be one of those V/B things. Gag me! I hate those stories.
JB: Why's that?
Yamcha: Oh come on. You can't really buy all those fic. Who in their right mind would pass up me for Veggie boy? Those stories are almost as believable as...well um...Yajarobe and Bra! It's stupid really.
JB: *blinks* Yamcha you do realize you just proved yourself wrong right?
Yamcha: How's that?
JB: Well you said Bra. Bra is the child of Bulma and Vegeta so they must be together. Plus it's in the series.
Yamcha: *shakes head* That's a common misconception. Neither Bra nor Trunks are Vegeta's children.
JB: *wide eyed* You can't possibly think their yours. I mean Trunks can go super and evrything so he's obviously Saiyan.
Yamcha: *smiles knowingly* That's true Trunks isn't mine but Bra is. Trunks is Gohan's. Ever noticed how close they are?
Vegeta: *snarls* You are so dead human!
Yamacha: *screams like a bitch*
JB: *slaps forehead and shakes head* Oh God, now I'm going to loose another reviewer.
Vegeta: *proceeds to pick up Yamcha, punches him once in the face knocking him out, and throws him out the room before taking Yamcha's former seat next to JB*
JB: *blinks* That was a lot less violent than I thought it would be.
Vegeta: *shrugs* Your review was getting long and I didn't want to take up too much more of Kahlan's time.
JB: Oh, well, I'm still mad at you so just sit there and be quiet while I finish my review.
Vegeta: Don't tell me what to do! I'll be quiet because I want to.
JB: *sighs* Whatever. *turns to Kahlan* Looks like an interesting 'what if' fic and I can't wait to see how Bulma tortures Veggie head. This human blood thing sounds interesting *grins evily*
Vegeta: *growls* More like disgusting.
JB: *waves at Kahlan* See ya next chapter!-JB |
Reviewed By: catgurl On: August 14, 2002 21:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
GOD!! I LOVE THIS!! LOVE THIS!! LOVE THIS!!! I'll go crazy if you don't update soon!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Meow On: August 14, 2002 20:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This looks really interesting! It's so cool how the DBZ story can change so much just by altering one thing. Vegeta didn't get the chance to retreat, so now he's stuck on Earth...in the clutches of Bulma. *gasp* I'm really looking forward to the next chapter, so hurry up and write it! Poor Vegeta, as if he hasn't been through enough. I can definitely understand why Bulma would be pissed at him though. But STILL...don't make Bulma hurt him too bad! *cries*
On a side note, my stupid dad and little brother starting singing that western "Rollin Rollin raw hide" song out of nowhere while I was reading this. I have no idea why they were doing that...it was kinda just a little bit distracting. ;p
And that was a really good description of how much pain Vegeta was in. You really made me believe that he was hurting. He was hurt even worse in this story than he was in the show. He couldn't even move in this fic. (poor thing..;p) For some strange reason I like reading about Vegeta being hurt...or vunerable in some way. You'd think that since I'm such a huge Vegeta fan, I wouldn't enjoy those kind of fics..but I do. I dunno, I guess I'm just weird. o-O Anyways, keep it up. This is a great start! I really like it so far. |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: August 14, 2002 11:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love bulma this sadistic too! she should torture vegeta! that would be funny!!!! |
Reviewed By: IneiTenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2002 18:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wonderful! I'm addicted to your work now. ^ ^; Hmm.. Vegeta with some human blood in him... Is he going to get stronger than a full-blooded Saiyajin like a half-breed does? I hope so. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: little-princess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2002 07:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nice beginning, I loev it. Please write more soon! I really wanna know what'll happen |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 13, 2002 01:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well dang!! This is different. I always wondered what would've happened if Veggie never left earth after getting his butt kicked. So after he recuperates, will Bulma and Co. drag his fine ass off to Namek to get the dragonballs? I already love this and I have a feeling that JB will too. Keep up the great work. Can't wait for the next chap ^_^. |
Reviewed By: dbz728 On: August 12, 2002 22:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Continue, continue, continue!!!! I always wanted to know what it would be like if Vegeta was kept alive on earth with Goku and them. I love this!!! Continue soon!!! pretty please! |
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