| "True Torture" Reviews/Comments [ 40 ] |
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Reviewed By: otaku On: August 19, 2003 04:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another chapter finally but nasty cliffhanger!!!!!! Please post more soon!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: butterfly13 On: June 23, 2003 18:27 CDT
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still love this fanfic and still can't wait for the next chapter! The gummy bears thing was so CUTE! Please don't give up on this story!!! |
Reviewed By: Lychee SSJ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 21:13 CST
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Aargh! Next chapter please!! Very good so far. Dead boyfriend or no, if I had Vegeta helpless on a bed, well... ahem! Uh, next chapter please!! |
Reviewed By: Lupa On: February 22, 2003 11:19 CST
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Another great chapter! You're keeping Vegeta in perfect form - ruthless and angry- I fear for the planet after he adapts to the drug. LOVED the part about the gummy bears- so damn cute! Keep 'em coming! |
Reviewed By: B On: February 17, 2003 13:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, i love this fc. please have a new chapter ready really soon! please..thanx. |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2003 08:21 CST
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I love this story!! Very original. I could just see Vegeta envisioning himself mentally blasting himself just so he wouldn't have to listen to all the stupid humans anymore! can't wait to see what happens next time. |
Reviewed By: otaku On: February 17, 2003 04:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is very very good! I feel sorry for poor Veggie, he was through a lot!!! But I think he's the only Dragonball character that has true angst inside of him...MORE MORE SOON PLEASE!!! |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: February 08, 2003 23:37 CST
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mmm, psychological torture is ALWAYS the best form of torture... hee hee....
seems to me that vegeta respects her reason for torturing him. that's kind of scary. the part when they started talking about freeza was pretty scary too.
very awesome! i reaaaallly hope you update soon!!!! |
Reviewed By: LiLPixie On: February 17, 2003 12:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...your story is AMAZING! Why haven't I seen it on MM before? Argh, it's simply beautiful! The whole talking in her head, but she can't reply the same. Omg, and he's adapting! duhn, duhn, DUHN!!! what will happen to poor bulma? a lemon, i hope...LOL Anywho, continue your AMAZING writing of your AMAZING story....did I mention that it was AMAZING? |
Reviewed By: casy12 On: January 24, 2003 19:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When are you gonna UPDATE!!!!!!!! Pretty please with loads of sugar on top and 2 cherries!!! I have been on here all the time looking for an updated chapter of your fic. SO ORIGINAL! ONE OF THE BEST!!!! UPDATE FOR ME!!!! Frieza needs to enter soon! I WANT to know about Vegeta's past...so many UNANSWERED QUESTIONS!!!! |
Reviewed By: GoldFusion [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2003 21:05 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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It's nice to see a fic that involves both Vegeta and Bulma that doesn't take place during those mystical 3 years. Kodos for you on doing something different. Not sure if this is going to turn into a B/V but regardless of if it does or not, I think I'm officially hooked on this one. Please grace us with another chappie soon :) |
Reviewed By: butterfly13 On: January 02, 2003 19:54 CST
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This is by far my favorite fanfic at Mediaminer.Org. Please update more than a month at a time!!!! I can't wait that long!! I know you probably have so much more on your mind than writing all the time, but I can guarentee you more and more reviews the more chapters you put up!!!!! Keep on writing because this is by far the most original and creative fanfic I've seen. PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE!!!! I won't be able to stand it!!! I like how you put some insight into your story about Vegeta's past with Frieza. PLEASE UPDATE!! I don't want to sound like I'm begging.....wait.....i am BEGGING!!! MORE, MORE, MORE!!! |
Reviewed By: Moonshine On: December 16, 2002 17:29 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this so far. Quite original (though I am of course hoping for a B/V pairing in the end). Please keep writing. Consider me intrigued. |
Reviewed By: the Angel of death 87 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2002 10:22 CST
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nice peace of work, please continue! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: November 30, 2002 22:20 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG Bulma can hear his thoughts! Wait a minute... he bled alot so could it be that Bulma gave him some of her blood in a transfusion? Oh dear God, a different take on the blood bond thing-LMAO!! It may sound crazy but he also spit some food back at her...yeah saiyan spit could be lethal I guess. A spit bond? Watch Bulma grow a tail now. I'll be laughing for a week :D. As much as I love Veggie and the fact that he's has some terrible injuries, I don't feel sorry for him. I can still remember that episode where he wrecked havoc on alot of lives. I loved the way Bulma pissed him off repeatedly. She should've taken advantage of him and sat on his face and demand that he...oops, sorry about that. Some 12 yr old might be reading this O_o. Anyway, great update and of course I can't wait for the next riveting chapter. JB's gonna have alot of fun reviewing this one ^_^. Great job K!! |
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