| "True Torture" Reviews/Comments [ 40 ] |
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Title: pretty cool
Reviewed By: jambacute [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2009 02:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow!!! i love this story!! its a whole another take on an love story. anyways please continue to update this story. its the best i've every read.
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Reviewed By: o0kittyblue0o [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2009 21:19 CDT
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*shakes you* continue writing the storyyyyy! Or..or I'll have to spork your eyes out or something!
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Reviewed By: El *not logged on as Elenek* On: September 11, 2004 11:51 CDT
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You are on my favorite authors list so I'm not sure how I missed this story but I'm glad I got the auto notify. Please tell me that you were lying when you said that you did not know where this was going. It's very very in.ter.es.ting. I like it. Thank You for writing -El-
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Reviewed By: Lexicon Devil [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2004 08:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I didn't think you'd update this story again, nevertheless I was really happy you did. The new chapters are -once again- well written and I do still enjoy the mood you're setting. I hope you'll write more soon!
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Reviewed By: Veglma, The Insane Wolf-jin On: September 07, 2004 22:35 CDT
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.........GRRRRRRRRR!!! Xiahou Fumi: Why do I have a feel that when Frieza dieds, Veglma will start dances on his dead body? Komachi Ayako: Hm...I wonder what the plan is going to be? ....I hope for their's sake it a good plan.... Xiahou Fumi:*Reads Chapter 7*....So that the plan. Komachi Ayako: It look the plan is working. what ever game Vegeta is play...It better work! for his sake...It has to work.
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Reviewed By: Veglma, The Insane Wolf-jin On: September 03, 2004 21:02 CDT
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Vegeta is/was Frieza's WHAT!?...Must...KILL... Frieza! *is thinking of ways to torture Frieza* Xiahou Fumi:*Stares*....Sweet Mother of Vegeta! The Earth got destroy! Komachi Ayako:....Was Vegeta's mother even sweet? Xiahou Fumi:Um...I don't know. The next chapter will be interesting to read. Komachi Ayako:*Shuggs*...Yeah, it will be.*Look at Veglma, who's eyes are now glowing red*...Um... *Is REALLY MAD* I swear Frieza! I will make you die a agonizing death if I get my hands on you!
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Reviewed By: catgirl112 On: May 30, 2004 01:12 CDT
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Hey, I just found this story of yours and really like it!!! Hey, if you ever run out of ideas, I know fellow authors would be glad to help you out! Please update this story soon for me! Thanks.
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Title: more?
Reviewed By: Brity On: February 01, 2004 19:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is super fantastic! I absotively posilutely love it to pieces...also loved it when I read it last year O_o...please update >_
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Reviewed By: wow! On: September 23, 2003 18:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god!!!! i adore this fic! you have no idea how much i love this story. the idea is wonderfully original and your writing style really makes the story come alive (forgive me for sounding corny lol). i neeeeed chapter 6 soon or i might spontaneously combust! i just can't wait!
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Reviewed By: Laina On: September 09, 2003 19:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pleeeeeeaaaaassssseeeeee update REAL soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Zorella_ On: September 05, 2003 01:26 CDT
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HA! Love it! Love everything about. Got yourself another regular reader ;) |
Reviewed By: christabeleve61 On: September 04, 2003 22:31 CDT
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I just found this jem and you have been posting since Nov. I love how you made Bulma dark and yet believeable. I can wait for them to wake up too. |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2003 16:34 CDT
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Holy crap!! Earth's gone??!! Oh my goodness. I'm too shocked to even write a worthwhile review. O.o Can't wait to see what happens on Namek. |
Reviewed By: Laina On: August 31, 2003 20:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UGH!!!!!!!!!! This is SO NOT fair, I wonna know what happens next NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I HATE cliffhangers, but I guess at the same time I love them. Please update soon!!!!!! I mean, PLEASE UPDATE REALLY REALLY SOON!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker On: August 20, 2003 09:04 CDT
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Glad you updated! Bulma's in a predicament, isn't she? I'm not sure I want to know what Vegeta's going to do to her. O.o Oh wait, yes I do! *will be patiently awaiting the next update* |
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