| "A Sealed Fate" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] |
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Title: So sweet
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2016 10:13 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was such a sweet, inclusive ending. The way you wrapped
everything up didn't seem at all forced. I love this fic.
💛 Now to go see what else you've written~
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Title: FINALLY! Shit.
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2016 06:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been screaming and cursing at my computer screen for over a
dozen chapters. I thought I was going to have a coronary if he
didn't run into her soon. I love this story, but have been so angry
at the Inu-tachi. Unfortunately, this is all too much like what
really happens in relationships. One gets hurt and the friends pick
sides, becoming uncommunicative with the significant other out of
anger - even if/when it harms the person they claim to be
protecting. UGH, this is so high school it hurts. In any case, this
fic is fantastic. I have put off reading this story for over a
month, but now I can't put it down. I just can't wait for the
coming reconciliation and for Kikyo to fucking die. *rages*
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2016 21:17 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read through this in a single sitting, it was so good! Well,
okay, so I got up a few times, but I read through it in a single
afternoon/evening. Really awesome story! Good job!
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2015 20:46 PDT
Comment/Review:
What a lovely story! Just the right amount of angst and tension,
balanced with tender romance. Great work! Can't wait to see what
else you come up with.
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Reviewed By: DeathDagger [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2015 10:02 PDT
Comment/Review:
Tell her you don't want her!!! Ewwww
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Reviewed By: CrimsonMaeLily On: May 15, 2015 14:11 PDT
Comment/Review:
I don't review often but sometimes you drove me nuts. I'd read a
chapter and then there wouldn't be another one up yet. I found that
every time I read another part I wanted to read the next one right
after. You did a good job of telling the story and kept it
interesting. Nicely written and well done. Hope you keep it up with
your future stories too. I look forward to reading more.
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Title: THANK YOU FOR THIS FIC!!!
Reviewed By: Serena08 On: May 15, 2015 11:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you so much for this amazing story, it has been a blast to
wait and read! Please continue to share your talent with us!!
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Reviewed By: chika_alternita On: May 15, 2015 06:51 PDT
Comment/Review:
nice eding!!! Congratulations on finishing your first fiction!!!!
it was a nice fluffy ending :)
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Reviewed By: chika_alternita On: April 22, 2015 12:06 PDT
Comment/Review:
well, Inu had to do what he wanted and could not wait until Kagome
got him a hat. I am looking forward to what Jiro will do, at this
point I still like him more than Inu as I feel he still has to make
up for his choices in the past. I am looking forward to your next
update. best
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Reviewed By: chika_alternita On: April 20, 2015 06:26 PDT
Comment/Review:
This last chapter I feel you moved things too fast, There was over
a year of separation and pain and they solved it on a couple of
sentences. I believe there are things yet to do before they can be
really happy. what about Kikyo, she will be in a rage
won´t she? and poor dear Jiro!!! I kind of really like
him, I feel he deserved a fighting chance. Everything worked out so
easy for Inuyasha, now they are already mated and
that´s that. He did tried to bed Kikyo on the first
new moon and he did choose her over Kagome everytime he left to
meet her. I believe he should had to work harder to get Kagome
back. :(
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Reviewed By: chika_alternita On: April 20, 2015 06:19 PDT
Comment/Review:
well, It was time Inu put things into perspective, and put Kikyo in
her place although I feel he has been to letient.
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Reviewed By: chika_alternita On: April 17, 2015 07:29 PDT
Comment/Review:
wow! Good for Jiro! he finally kissed her :) I am glad also that
inuyasha got to make his friends work for him as repayment for what
they did. I wonder if Kikyo will try to kill Kagome next time she
is around? If Jiro will follow Kagome to the well? keep it
going!!!!
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Reviewed By: oniguts On: April 13, 2015 23:43 PDT
Comment/Review:
oh Boy, just oh boy!
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Reviewed By: oniguts On: April 13, 2015 23:21 PDT
Comment/Review:
I am going to have an aneurism, if Inuyasha caves in and has sex
with mud.
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Reviewed By: oniguts On: April 13, 2015 23:14 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOO!!! Why oh why can't Kikyo just die. Again.For good.
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Title: Loving the story so far
Reviewed By: Serena08 On: April 13, 2015 15:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY, I check everyday for Updates....You are writing
this story with skill that I can't believe this is your only story
on this site. Please continue your wonderful writing!!!
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Reviewed By: chika_alternita On: April 13, 2015 05:47 PDT
Comment/Review:
I feel bad for Inu, but in the end I believe it will help him see
how important Kagome is for him and how badly he had treated her.
Also I am starting to believe he has to be blind and stupid to let
Kikyo continue with her games, how could he stand by and let her
treat everyone like they are dirt underneath her shoes??And I know
is evil but I hope Jiro makes a stand this month before the new
moon to see if Inu would respect the wishes of her heart as she had
respected his in the past. I am soo looking forward to your next
update!!! :)
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Reviewed By: soliea0death [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2015 03:58 PDT
Comment/Review:
It kind of bothers me that they kept all this from Inuyasha. Once
again they're making decisions for him. Kagome thought it would
make him happy just to leave so she goes without even talking to
him only because of how much it would hurt her. Then she goes back,
but only sees her friends and asked not to say anything. Then they
act all selfish seeing her during the new moon, ignoring what's
happening to him and how much he really misses her. Yes, he wanted
to help Kikyou, even after all she did, but every one else had
helped someone that was considered an enemy at some point or has
hurt other people. Kohaku, Maya, Kouga...They act like he deserves
to be punished, and they should keep Kagome all to themselves, and
then share her with Kouga! Now that he knows the truth, I wouldn't
blame him for taking a good smack out of each of them. They just
think he only wants Kikyou but never ask or talk to him and just
write him off. I'm very interested in whats going to happen next!
Can't wait for the next chapter. When is he finally going to see
Kagome?
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Reviewed By: chika_alternita On: April 10, 2015 06:28 PDT
Comment/Review:
well I really hate manipulative kikyo, and that Inuyasha is
thinking he will be responsible if she kills herself just because
he is not her slave. I understand that 6 months have passed but I
was looking forward to hear what Kagome might say to
Miroku´s comment about Inu needing her. Maybe in a
flashback? anyway I am glad to hear they will meet again soon. I
feel bad for Jiro, he seams like someone who could make Kagome
happy, even support her in the shard hunt. An I hope Koga is okay,
he is a loveable character. as always great work :)
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Reviewed By: chika_alternita On: April 09, 2015 09:28 PDT
Comment/Review:
well I feel sorry for Inu, and it is sad that their friends lied to
him. I understand that they did it because of their promess to
Kagome but still. Now I am looking forward to what Kikyo is going
to do. hopefully Inu will see her as she is and stop feeling sorry
for her, it was not his fault that she died!
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Reviewed By: chika_alternita On: April 07, 2015 08:10 PDT
Comment/Review:
well thank good Inu could not do it. Although I still think he
needs to grow a pair. I like that he ends up calling for "his
bitch" (poor Shippo :P) and wonder what Kikyo will say about it. :)
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Reviewed By: Riss On: April 06, 2015 22:20 PDT
Comment/Review:
I'm addicted to this story, I started reading it and just could not
stop! It's a very entertaining read, keep up the awesome work!
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Reviewed By: chika_alternita On: April 06, 2015 08:57 PDT
Comment/Review:
OMG!!! I feel like vomiting after kikyo las sentence (shuders) I
can not believe Inuyasha is going to do that, please tell me he
cant!!!! I mean tomorrow he will smell kagome on the things she
gave to their friends and probably feel like a fool or angry with
them for not telling him. But he can not be with Kikyo pleeeasse. I
can not wait to your next update!!!
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Reviewed By: chika_alternita On: April 01, 2015 07:42 PDT
Comment/Review:
haha, Kikyo is pissed! and I love how Inu is repulsed by her smell.
But I think he needs to grow a pair and tell her how he feels and
his plans. and what about Jiro? also what about the shard that was
discovered in the future, its past self is still out there so does
it really count? does it mean they fail?
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Reviewed By: FlightoftheTabby On: March 31, 2015 10:52 PDT
Comment/Review:
Aw man, this was such an awesome chapter, you've really got me
hooked! Thanks for the update! :)
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Reviewed By: chikaalternita [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2015 06:21 PDT
Comment/Review:
such a sweet chapter!Both are thinking about seeing the other.
Kikyos comment about being lovers with Inu made my skin crawl! And
Jiro turned out to be a sweetie :) I am so looking forward to your
next update
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Reviewed By: chikaalternita [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2015 05:53 PDT
Comment/Review:
Loved this chapter. Inuyasha introspection and plans are so sweet!
I absolutly adore that Kagome can handle herself so well in the
face of danger and I am also sooo looking forward to Jiros
questions!! please keep it going! :)
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Reviewed By: chika_alternita On: March 25, 2015 06:03 PDT
Comment/Review:
I am loving your story so far! and Jiro is turning out to be a very
intriging character. I love that inuyasha is realising his mistake
in mistreating Kagome. I am really looking forward to your next
update! :)
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Reviewed By: chika_alternita On: March 20, 2015 08:18 PDT
Comment/Review:
I find your story very interesting, and I can see how 2 people in
love can hurt themselves by not opening up and expresing their
feelings. Of course Kikyo could be less selfish and selfcentered. I
will be waiting for your next update! best :)
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Reviewed By: chikaalternita [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2015 08:59 PDT
Comment/Review:
great work here I loved the angs and the feelings of our favorite
couple. I will be looking forward to your next update!!
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