| "A Sealed Fate" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] |
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Title: FINALLY! Shit.
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2016 06:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been screaming and cursing at my computer screen for over a
dozen chapters. I thought I was going to have a coronary if he
didn't run into her soon. I love this story, but have been so angry
at the Inu-tachi. Unfortunately, this is all too much like what
really happens in relationships. One gets hurt and the friends pick
sides, becoming uncommunicative with the significant other out of
anger - even if/when it harms the person they claim to be
protecting. UGH, this is so high school it hurts. In any case, this
fic is fantastic. I have put off reading this story for over a
month, but now I can't put it down. I just can't wait for the
coming reconciliation and for Kikyo to fucking die. *rages*
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2016 21:17 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read through this in a single sitting, it was so good! Well,
okay, so I got up a few times, but I read through it in a single
afternoon/evening. Really awesome story! Good job!
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2015 20:46 PDT
Comment/Review:
What a lovely story! Just the right amount of angst and tension,
balanced with tender romance. Great work! Can't wait to see what
else you come up with.
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Reviewed By: DeathDagger [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2015 10:02 PDT
Comment/Review:
Tell her you don't want her!!! Ewwww
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Reviewed By: CrimsonMaeLily On: May 15, 2015 14:11 PDT
Comment/Review:
I don't review often but sometimes you drove me nuts. I'd read a
chapter and then there wouldn't be another one up yet. I found that
every time I read another part I wanted to read the next one right
after. You did a good job of telling the story and kept it
interesting. Nicely written and well done. Hope you keep it up with
your future stories too. I look forward to reading more.
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Title: THANK YOU FOR THIS FIC!!!
Reviewed By: Serena08 On: May 15, 2015 11:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you so much for this amazing story, it has been a blast to
wait and read! Please continue to share your talent with us!!
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Reviewed By: chika_alternita On: May 15, 2015 06:51 PDT
Comment/Review:
nice eding!!! Congratulations on finishing your first fiction!!!!
it was a nice fluffy ending :)
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Reviewed By: chika_alternita On: April 22, 2015 12:06 PDT
Comment/Review:
well, Inu had to do what he wanted and could not wait until Kagome
got him a hat. I am looking forward to what Jiro will do, at this
point I still like him more than Inu as I feel he still has to make
up for his choices in the past. I am looking forward to your next
update. best
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Reviewed By: chika_alternita On: April 20, 2015 06:26 PDT
Comment/Review:
This last chapter I feel you moved things too fast, There was over
a year of separation and pain and they solved it on a couple of
sentences. I believe there are things yet to do before they can be
really happy. what about Kikyo, she will be in a rage
won´t she? and poor dear Jiro!!! I kind of really like
him, I feel he deserved a fighting chance. Everything worked out so
easy for Inuyasha, now they are already mated and
that´s that. He did tried to bed Kikyo on the first
new moon and he did choose her over Kagome everytime he left to
meet her. I believe he should had to work harder to get Kagome
back. :(
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Reviewed By: chika_alternita On: April 20, 2015 06:19 PDT
Comment/Review:
well, It was time Inu put things into perspective, and put Kikyo in
her place although I feel he has been to letient.
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Reviewed By: chika_alternita On: April 17, 2015 07:29 PDT
Comment/Review:
wow! Good for Jiro! he finally kissed her :) I am glad also that
inuyasha got to make his friends work for him as repayment for what
they did. I wonder if Kikyo will try to kill Kagome next time she
is around? If Jiro will follow Kagome to the well? keep it
going!!!!
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Reviewed By: oniguts On: April 13, 2015 23:43 PDT
Comment/Review:
oh Boy, just oh boy!
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Reviewed By: oniguts On: April 13, 2015 23:21 PDT
Comment/Review:
I am going to have an aneurism, if Inuyasha caves in and has sex
with mud.
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Reviewed By: oniguts On: April 13, 2015 23:14 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOO!!! Why oh why can't Kikyo just die. Again.For good.
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Title: Loving the story so far
Reviewed By: Serena08 On: April 13, 2015 15:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY, I check everyday for Updates....You are writing
this story with skill that I can't believe this is your only story
on this site. Please continue your wonderful writing!!!
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