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"A Sealed Fate" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ]
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 Reviewed By: chika_alternita  On: April 13, 2015 05:47 PDT
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I feel bad for Inu, but in the end I believe it will help him see how important Kagome is for him and how badly he had treated her. Also I am starting to believe he has to be blind and stupid to let Kikyo continue with her games, how could he stand by and let her treat everyone like they are dirt underneath her shoes??And I know is evil but I hope Jiro makes a stand this month before the new moon to see if Inu would respect the wishes of her heart as she had respected his in the past. I am soo looking forward to your next update!!! :)
 Reviewed By: soliea0death [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 13, 2015 03:58 PDT
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It kind of bothers me that they kept all this from Inuyasha. Once again they're making decisions for him. Kagome thought it would make him happy just to leave so she goes without even talking to him only because of how much it would hurt her. Then she goes back, but only sees her friends and asked not to say anything. Then they act all selfish seeing her during the new moon, ignoring what's happening to him and how much he really misses her. Yes, he wanted to help Kikyou, even after all she did, but every one else had helped someone that was considered an enemy at some point or has hurt other people. Kohaku, Maya, Kouga...They act like he deserves to be punished, and they should keep Kagome all to themselves, and then share her with Kouga! Now that he knows the truth, I wouldn't blame him for taking a good smack out of each of them. They just think he only wants Kikyou but never ask or talk to him and just write him off. I'm very interested in whats going to happen next! Can't wait for the next chapter. When is he finally going to see Kagome?
 Reviewed By: chika_alternita  On: April 10, 2015 06:28 PDT
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well I really hate manipulative kikyo, and that Inuyasha is thinking he will be responsible if she kills herself just because he is not her slave. I understand that 6 months have passed but I was looking forward to hear what Kagome might say to Miroku´s comment about Inu needing her. Maybe in a flashback? anyway I am glad to hear they will meet again soon. I feel bad for Jiro, he seams like someone who could make Kagome happy, even support her in the shard hunt. An I hope Koga is okay, he is a loveable character. as always great work :)
 Reviewed By: chika_alternita  On: April 09, 2015 09:28 PDT
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well I feel sorry for Inu, and it is sad that their friends lied to him. I understand that they did it because of their promess to Kagome but still. Now I am looking forward to what Kikyo is going to do. hopefully Inu will see her as she is and stop feeling sorry for her, it was not his fault that she died!
 Reviewed By: chika_alternita  On: April 07, 2015 08:10 PDT
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well thank good Inu could not do it. Although I still think he needs to grow a pair. I like that he ends up calling for "his bitch" (poor Shippo :P) and wonder what Kikyo will say about it. :)
 Reviewed By: Riss  On: April 06, 2015 22:20 PDT
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I'm addicted to this story, I started reading it and just could not stop! It's a very entertaining read, keep up the awesome work!
 Reviewed By: chika_alternita  On: April 06, 2015 08:57 PDT
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OMG!!! I feel like vomiting after kikyo las sentence (shuders) I can not believe Inuyasha is going to do that, please tell me he cant!!!! I mean tomorrow he will smell kagome on the things she gave to their friends and probably feel like a fool or angry with them for not telling him. But he can not be with Kikyo pleeeasse. I can not wait to your next update!!!
 Reviewed By: chika_alternita  On: April 01, 2015 07:42 PDT
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haha, Kikyo is pissed! and I love how Inu is repulsed by her smell. But I think he needs to grow a pair and tell her how he feels and his plans. and what about Jiro? also what about the shard that was discovered in the future, its past self is still out there so does it really count? does it mean they fail?
 Reviewed By: FlightoftheTabby  On: March 31, 2015 10:52 PDT
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Aw man, this was such an awesome chapter, you've really got me hooked! Thanks for the update! :)
 Reviewed By: chikaalternita [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 31, 2015 06:21 PDT
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such a sweet chapter!Both are thinking about seeing the other. Kikyos comment about being lovers with Inu made my skin crawl! And Jiro turned out to be a sweetie :) I am so looking forward to your next update
 Reviewed By: chikaalternita [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 27, 2015 05:53 PDT
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Loved this chapter. Inuyasha introspection and plans are so sweet! I absolutly adore that Kagome can handle herself so well in the face of danger and I am also sooo looking forward to Jiros questions!! please keep it going! :)
 Reviewed By: chika_alternita  On: March 25, 2015 06:03 PDT
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I am loving your story so far! and Jiro is turning out to be a very intriging character. I love that inuyasha is realising his mistake in mistreating Kagome. I am really looking forward to your next update! :)
 Reviewed By: chika_alternita  On: March 20, 2015 08:18 PDT
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I find your story very interesting, and I can see how 2 people in love can hurt themselves by not opening up and expresing their feelings. Of course Kikyo could be less selfish and selfcentered. I will be waiting for your next update! best :)
 Reviewed By: chikaalternita [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 16, 2015 08:59 PDT
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great work here I loved the angs and the feelings of our favorite couple. I will be looking forward to your next update!!
 Reviewed By: FlightoftheTabby  On: March 05, 2015 23:33 PST
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Love the story so far, thank you for posting! :) Can't wait to see how everything turns out! ;3
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