| "Purity Redux: Fruition" Reviews/Comments [ 128 ] |
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Title: Loving this story!!
Reviewed By: rhmarie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2017 21:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so enjoying this story. I somehow missed some of the other
ones and so I started at the beginning again. So I'm reading this
one (love love love it) and am on Purity 3 now but have to admit I
went from 2 to Purity 8 Vendetta and read it from start to finish
and now I'm hard pressed to contain myself and go back to 3. Lol.
You are such a good writer and I just wanted to let you know how
much I'm enjoying this story and rereading your past stories once
again. I'm thinking Ben's brother needs a strong woman ... maybe
Chelsea? :-) I can't wait for the next chapters. (Patience when I'm
reading is not one of my virtues. Lol) Anyway, thank you and I
can't wait to continue reading and I'm hoping we see some of the
past characters all come together and both the men and women kick
some upstart butts. These men need to see that keeping things from
the women is just plain stupid. They should be partners in keeping
themselves and the children safe. Communication is key. Heck, they
all need special gadgets and gizmos to communicate with everyone
regarding security. Okay ... I'm stopping now. You're the writing
genius so I'm sure you have this mapped out in your mind and if you
don't I'm sure your characters will speak to you themselves. :-)
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Title: Loving this story!!
Reviewed By: rhmarie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2017 21:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so enjoying this story. I somehow missed some of the other
ones and so I started at the beginning again. So I'm reading this
one (love love love it) and am on Purity 3 now but have to admit I
went from 2 to Purity 8 Vendetta and read it from start to finish
and now I'm hard pressed to contain myself and go back to 3. Lol.
You are such a good writer and I just wanted to let you know how
much I'm enjoying this story and rereading your past stories once
again. I'm thinking Ben's brother needs a strong woman ... maybe
Chelsea? :-) I can't wait for the next chapters. (Patience when I'm
reading is not one of my virtues. Lol) Anyway, thank you and I
can't wait to continue reading and I'm hoping we see some of the
past characters all come together and both the men and women kick
some upstart butts. These men need to see that keeping things from
the women is just plain stupid. They should be partners in keeping
themselves and the children safe. Communication is key. Heck, they
all need special gadgets and gizmos to communicate with everyone
regarding security. Okay ... I'm stopping now. You're the writing
genius so I'm sure you have this mapped out in your mind and if you
don't I'm sure your characters will speak to you themselves. :-)
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2017 15:29 PDT
Comment/Review:
I like how Ben and Hecht seem to have built some sort of
relationship in a short period of time and I can't believe that
Inuyasha is taking him in without a fuss. Kagome's influence I'm
sure. So is it safe to assume that now that Ben has been let into
the men's family camp he's going to get his act together to
marry/mate, now that Charity has forgiven him I'm sure she won't
need much convincing. Though with Kyouhei's latest message the
threat to them all still stands so I guess no wedding for now.
Thanks for the chapter Sue.
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Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2017 09:25 PDT
Comment/Review:
So, no separate bedrooms for Ben and Charity, I like the way Ben
thinks. LOL, Hecht wound up being both confused and decent, which
pleased me, and the family is going to help him get a new life. I
love the happy endings for people in your stories.
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2017 16:11 PDT
Comment/Review:
So many emotions in this chapter, such bravery and kindness shown
by Charity not only in pursuit of her children but to a stranger as
well. I'm guessing after this Hecht's dad will be cheering for the
dissidents state side. Though there's a siliver lining to all this,
Kurt and Hecht will be keeping each other company at family events
going forward. We all knew keeping it a secret would blow up
eventually but I'm starting to believe that Ben likes being in the
dog house. Hopefully he can get out of it. Thanks Sue.
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2017 09:43 PDT
Comment/Review:
Go charity!!! Shits about to go down, especially if toga gets there
in the day few moments too! There is hell to pay when you steal a
mommas babies!
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Reviewed By: Moe On: July 05, 2017 06:23 PDT
Comment/Review:
There are too many thoughts over the last few chapters to handle
and a broad range of emotions to go with them. First off though,
I'm truly sorry to hear that you've lost someone so dear and so
needlessly. I hope healing can make its way into the hearts of
everyone who loved her. As for your story, I love that things are
progressing quickly but at the same time, they're not rushed. The
backstory for Ben and Kyouhei is both devastating and horrific.
Charity and Ben are being open and honest and it's refreshing to
watch Charity's reactions and witness her owning her TRUE
self-worth. As for this chapter, Hecht's realizations of his
childhood and pain come through as a palpable thing. Such
devestation is left behind in trying to prove to himself that his
parents are wrong and were wrong all along. But he better start
praying because holy shit, Charity is there, and momma is pissed on
the ultimate level!!!! Something tells me he'll concede, but we
shall see. And last but not least, on the InuYasha/Toga/Zelig/Ben
front I have always loved that these wonderful youkai/hanyou men
will drop everything to protect in your stories. The lengths they
will go to is incredible. And the women/children they fight to
protect are also strong, so that dynamic has always been whole for
me and such a beautiful example of mutual respect and dual concern.
Love your writing as always, and to quote another author I love,
there's "so much scope for the imagination". Thanks so much, Sue
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2017 00:40 PDT
Comment/Review:
And there she is, the granddaughter of the Inu Taisho, niece of
hanyou of legend and she is ready to protect her babies. Plus Toga
and Ben are on thier way, I kind of feel sorry for Hecht and Deigo
(who I'm sure is lurking somewhere). Great chapter Sue.
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2017 22:04 PDT
Comment/Review:
I am sorry about your niece of the heart. You and her family have
my deepest sympathy. I feel a bit of a car to have enjoyed these
chapters so much after that. But I am going to review them and let
you know how much I appreciate your work. I enjoyed seeing Charity
and Ben getting so close, very nicely done. I am feeling even more
sympathy for Kyouhai. He is in such an impossible position. And
then poor Charity gets drugged and her babies stolen. Do they even
know she is Toga's daughter? I doubt it, they would have had a
better plan if they did. At least I hope so. I loved that Toga knew
something was wrong with the twins before Ben did. I feel a little
sympathy for Hecht but not much, he should have thought it through
more before he took the babies. He now faces the most dangerous
creature in the world, an angry mother defending her young and
trained by Inuyasha. I wonder if there will be much left by the
time Toga and Ben get there.
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2017 16:35 PDT
Comment/Review:
Oh no... I'm so sorry hun. My prayers are with you. And Ben better
get his ass back and quick..
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2017 15:32 PDT
Comment/Review:
My condelences Sue. Talking about what I enjoyed about the chapter
seems irrelevant in the face of your news. Nevertheless I
appreciate you posting the chapter and all the hard work that went
into it.
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2017 15:14 PDT
Comment/Review:
Finally,finally,fina lly. I'm so happy that Ben just came out with
it. Though at the same time due to the impending danger highlighted
by Kyouhei's injury I find myself tallying who would be able to
fight if it came down to it. Mikio would feel like such a burden if
he knew. Plus there are so many young babies and children to
consider and protect. So many threads to weave together, I'm
looking forward to wherever you're taking us Sue.
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2017 09:51 PDT
Comment/Review:
I am glad that Ben finally told Charity that he wants her as a mate
but I still think she is going to be furious that he didn't confide
all the trouble to her. I am looking forward to what happens next.
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2017 15:25 PDT
Comment/Review:
L.o.l. Charity is beginning to remind me of Gin. Nice young men
indeed. The insight into Ben's parents in this chapter really
reveals why he left. Though I wonder if his 'abandonment' gave them
reason to become even more volatile and restrict Kyouhei more so
than they did with Ben. I'm looking forward to seeing what the nice
5 days bring in the Fruition universe. Thanks Sue.
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2017 08:06 PDT
Comment/Review:
I LOVE your final thoughts. I doubt that Charity would be so
charitable if she knew one of those "nice young men" was after her
babies. I loved the toy descriptions and Ben's thoughts about them.
I do feel sorry for Ben's brother though. I hope it all works out
best for him and his friend.
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