| "Purity Redux: Fruition" Reviews/Comments [ 128 ] |
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2017 17:35 PDT
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I go away on vacation and have so many chapters waiting!! So
exciting! I love everyone's Halloween costumes! My daughter loves
the count so having Ben dress up as him... I definitely laughed out
loud. Now we just have to find out who the hell this chick is!
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Reviewed By: Nani? On: June 12, 2017 11:27 PDT
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Wait, what?!?!?!?! WTF was that? OMG, totally not flaming you but
daaaaaaaaamn! Ok now i will admit that i can usually sit patiently
and wait for your mind but that was just cruel *bursts out in
tears* Poor Charity!! and just how is that skanky woman?! I don't
care how well you know someone you shouldn't just bust on in and
get your groove on with someone that you haven't seen in years!
because if you had, you would have been mentioned in the first 17
chapters, and you were NOT! Oh come on, sue, don't leave us
hanging! *bursts into more tears* Soooooooooooobbles!!!
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2017 03:12 PDT
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That was/is cruel Sue...who the hell is Manami?!
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Reviewed By: Rae On: June 11, 2017 23:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you're posting again, Sue!!! Please keep up the great
work!!! :)
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Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2017 11:45 PDT
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Sigh, I just love the way you write. It all just melds perfectly
like one of Cain's paintings would. I remember when you wrote about
when Gin and the twins made their dads and brothers pretty, I
laughed so hard that I almost pee'd myself. being gifted with a
vivid imagination, I could just see it happening. Like when
InuYasha was in the tree with a very young Toga, very upset, and
Toga shoved his Moko Moko in Inu's face offering to let him snuggle
it cause it always made Toga feel better when he was sad. I have
100,000 wonderful memories of moments from each of your stories
that bring me pleasure when they are triggered. I am very happy you
are posting again. I hope you dont have to stop again. I would be
so sad. Welcome back.
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2017 01:16 PDT
Comment/Review:
Oh my goodness, antique balls! I was chuckling away as I read the
chapter and managed to draw a couple of stares. I love the fact you
wove this joke in. Kagura is pregnant, I do wonder if it will be a
girl or a boy. Toga is a great dad, I'm sure Charity will be so
pleased when she realises what he's done. Thanks for the update
Sue.
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Title: Love it
Reviewed By: Anna On: June 07, 2017 13:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I started reading your stories when you first wrote "Purity"---I
was in middle school. I've followed your stories throughout high
school, college and now I'm 26 years old and I still completely
love your style of writing and how you bring these characters to
life. Thanks so much for sharing your talents :)
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2017 22:47 PDT
Comment/Review:
25 years...Ben has been shuffling his feet for 25 YEARS. Good
grief, all of this is so long overdue and honestly I do not blame
Charity for being hesistant/worried. Her self confidence has taken
a beating. I love that Toga and Sierra are still so playful with
one and other. Thanks for updating Sue
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2017 16:10 PDT
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So Eddie deserves a raise...
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2017 05:51 PDT
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Yes I am! I thought I sent you some pics to your email back in 2014
when I last deployed. I remember doing so at least. This deployment
isn't nearly as exciting in terms of port visits so I haven't been
taking that many pictures. On another note. I bought 4 of your
original works and I saved the PDF files to my external hard drive
which shit itself recently so now I have to hope they are still on
my old kindle along with all the PDF's of the purity stories that I
had so I could read them offline when I was on the ship.
unfortunately my kindle is back home in America and I'm hell far
away, I only brought my ipad this time and use the kindle app
because its easier not to have a bunch of different chargers, but
most of the purity stories and all of your original books that I
bought are missing. I was really wanting to reread vendetta also. I
was so hurt when I saw they weren't there. but I wont be able to
read them until I get back home. :'( But anyway its great to hear
form you. I just printed this chapter and I'm about to log off and
read it.
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2017 07:57 PDT
Comment/Review:
Hey SUE!!!! Been a long time. I'm actually back on deployment now.
My last one. sorry I haven't been able to review. internet is not
always reliable and I usually cut and paste the chapters so I can
read it when I have time just in case the internet goes down. I
absolutely love this story so far. I always wanted to see what
would happen between Ben and Charity. I hope you get you mojo back
for Mikio's story because I really would like to know how his story
plays out especially since he is so different from Inuyasha and
Kagome's other children. I remember back when you were having
similar feeling about Evan's story due to what you were going
through back at that time. But I hope you find your way back to it.
Because as you know I've been a fan of all your stories for over a
decade and I'm always excited to read them from start to finish.
I'm anxiously awaiting chapter 13! Also I was intrigued to see you
began a continuation to metamorphosis, which was a very emotional
story. I love it! I hope this review finds you in good spirits and
I can't wait for the next update! ~Love OB
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Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2017 14:22 PDT
Comment/Review:
Inu is blushing cause Kagome wants another baby, thats so freaking
cute...Your lips are flapping...Sue, you crack me up. I love yours
stories and Inu taking the baby so she won't cry because of Cain. I
love this story, I love all your stories and I can't wait for your
next post.
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2017 12:08 PDT
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I'm so happy for Ben and Charity but I've got to say, Bas getting
Sydnie a glass of milk tugged at my heart strings. She does have
someone to bring her milk all the time. Thanks Sue
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2017 02:36 PDT
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Yes, yes, yes!!! Go Charity, there is that Inutaisho spirit. I had
a thought while considering all that has unfolded so far, on a
scale of 1-10, how much of a hard time is Sesshoumaru going to give
Ben once he learns of his interest in Charity? 11.
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2017 12:13 PDT
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Thank God for Chelsea, without her this could go on for a while
sense there both so oblivious! Maybe the visit won't go well so
they have a out. Or it's gonna go so extremely well. Could go
either way lol anyways look forward to more :)
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