| "Between Darkness and Light" Reviews/Comments [ 70 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2003 13:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
Is THAT where Kikyou was?!
Some of the word choices are a bit unusual.
The anime Inuyasha fights better when Kag's around, but this one is distracted. It makes sense with a bit of twisting.
So Miroku was once out for vengeance... I am intrigued. |
Reviewed By: Inu-fan On: June 26, 2003 16:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You got the charachters perfectly.This the best fanfic I've ever read. Great job. |
Reviewed By: ssjprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2003 14:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'd like to add an amendment to my previous post.
Please notify of future updates, or to just email me at....
ssjprincesss@hotmail.com
Sorry, I forgot to do that in the earlier review. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: ssjprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2003 13:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have just finished reading this fic through to the latest chapter and I am blown away. This is a splendedly written fic! The plot has left me spellbound. I'm left with a distinct need for more!
Now for the constructive critique... The only fault I found was with your grammer. You seem to have a problem with tenses. It was noticable, but I could correct it myself as I read, so it wasn't to bad. Maybe you could get yourself a beta reader to proof for errors. I could do it if you have no one else, just let me know. Now, the constructrive criticism is over so you can stop hating me. ^_^
Again, I am completely captivated by your story, and hope you update this soon. I am so curious about a few things.... Like, Why is Kikyo so obsessed with Inuyasha? Had they met in the past? Or is she just upset because Kagome is living the life that, she, herself longed for? And what about Souta? Wasn't he brought back to life by Naraku? How is Kagome going to react to that? And will he still blame her for his death? Another thing, who betrayed the exterminators village? UGH!! Do you see! I'm filled with so many questions!! You have to update, so I can fill in the blanks.
I think I figured one thing out though, Kagome is carrying the jewel, isn't she.... ^_^
Update soon!
~**ssjprincess**~ |
Reviewed By: cursed_jax [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2003 17:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome story, i just hope you'll update soon. good luck with the rest |
Reviewed By: Come oooooooooooonnnnnn!!! On: May 05, 2003 20:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I LOVE this fic so very much and I really wish you would continue with. |
Reviewed By: Angel BlueFlame [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2003 19:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow!! This fic is amazing!! Keep it up! PLZ PLZ PLZ Update soon!!
L8rz!
~*~Angel~*~ |
Reviewed By: girlygirl On: April 07, 2003 18:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love this fic soo much, I put you on the number two spot( basically, you only havta compete wid' three peeps, but, hey, u number two!! Keep writtin' and you might make it to numbah one!
----Chow! |
Reviewed By: OMG On: March 13, 2003 19:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Geez, I think this 1 is the best 1 yet. I mean it, it is so kickass. I just got through reading it and it reminded me of Queen Of The Damned. That movie is so cool. ENwayz, you HAVE TO write more; I'm, like, going totally insane, like. Like, girl, you like, really need to start writting. Like. |
Reviewed By: Soudesuka_Shurikens On: March 09, 2003 16:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ROUGH SEX > IS THERE A BETTER WAY. I AGREE WITH THIS FIC > IT'S ALL JUST ONE BIG TURN ON...THIS ALSO TAUGHT ME SOMETHING DON'T GET BEDA WITH HEAD POSTS>> |
Reviewed By: Teeny On: February 28, 2003 18:02 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh......this is so awesome. Please update! |
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2003 05:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm a Huge fan of Inu-Yasha and a really really Huge fan of Anne Rice me it her Witches or her Vampires and I usally can only read vampire storys written by her but you story caught my attation and held it until the very end (or what you have written so Far) PLease update soon I'm dieing to know how this will end |
Reviewed By: demonic_cupcake On: February 25, 2003 19:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow ! this story is great ^^ ! right now im in this phase where i am really into vampires as well so it was great to see this type of fic up! hope you keep reviewing becuase im really interested to see what happens next to inu and kagome (you know the blood ordeal)!keep up the great work ! |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2003 16:35 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this version of Kikyou. Usually I'm not a fan of reflexively-evil Kikyou, but this one is complicated enough to be interesting and spunky enough to respect. Her interest in Inuyasha mirrors the actual Kikyou's jealousy of Kagome, "If I had lived, I would have been the one to heal his heart, etc. etc." It's an extremely nice touch.
Other cool thing: That is one interesting way to keep up the sexual tension even after the two protagonists have had sex. |
Reviewed By: jenna On: February 25, 2003 15:34 CST
Comment/Review:
I really liked this fanfic!!!! so much fluff!! |
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