| "When love and hate collide" Reviews/Comments [ 61 ] |
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Reviewed By: Naturi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2002 15:25 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWWWWW MAYUN!!!!!! You gotta finish this before I spontaneously combust......this is killing Trunks.......but man you're an awesome writer!!! |
Reviewed By: Hisaki [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2002 15:14 CST
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WAAAHHHH!!! =D It just gets better and better, don't it? Have I mentioned how much I LOOOVE this story and how much I LOOOVE you?!? XD lol!!! Please update ASAP!!!! Oh, and by the way!! I'm working on a piccie of Leilani, so don't think that the Goten pic was the only one I was gonna draw for ya!!! =D Ja!!! ^_^V |
Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2002 01:17 CST
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Ahh!!! You forgot my email reminder! I was lucky enough to be bored out of my mind...No offense JB...hehe...When I clicked over here to see if you had updated, and you had!! WOOHOO!!! As always, great chapter. Only one more to go? Well, as long as it's a good one and you start something else for us to read, I guess that's okay. Hope you have better luck with your computer in the future. Until next time, Peace and Out. |
Reviewed By: Vega Obscura the King On: November 03, 2002 17:00 CST
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Cliff hanger **Dies**
Damn it, hurry up! IF trunks kills himself, dont 4get bout the dragonballs, **sing-song tone** ~they can bring him Back~
lol...nice plan Goten, lets hope it works |
Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2002 23:35 CDT
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That was such a sad ending! I can't wait to read what's next! I can't wait for Trunks and Goten to be together and happy forever! This story is great! I guess that's all for now...I have a ton of work to do...Test and homework due in Cal III tomorrow...ewness...Laterz! Until next time, Peace and Out. |
Reviewed By: Hisaki [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2002 15:45 CDT
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NOOOOO!!! Don't leave Torankusu-kun, Goten-chan!!! NOOOO!!!! *sniffles and sobs* That was beautiful!!! You did great!!! MORE MORE MORE ASAP!!! =D
~*Hisaki*~
PS: I'll be sending you those pics soon, don't worry!! I'm working on them!!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Namek Kaia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2002 02:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoo hoo!! You go girl! I finally picked this back up and I'm glad I did. This has GOT to be one of the best fics I've EVER read. So full of angst. I totally LOVE it! And this last chapter!! Oh my gods! WHAT a lemon! I was out of breath! I'll never get to sleep now! Good going. ^^ I can't wait for you to update!! You're gonna update soon right? RIGHT?! This is definitely going on my favs list. ^^ Keep up the great writing!! Update update update!! |
Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2002 21:10 CDT
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Um...yeah...A whole chapter long lemon. For your first yaoi lemon, I think you did pretty well. What I liked were the Japanese words you used. I don't have much time right now, but I hope to be back soon to read more. Until then Peace and Out. |
Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2002 02:28 CDT
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Okay, first off, my heart is aching now from the ending of this chapter...wow...This is so sad and touching. You are really great at painting a picture with words. The imagery is unreal. You did do one thing that is a pet peeve of mine lately. Towards...The "s" bothers me. Don't ask, long story. There were a few other typos, but who am I to complain? I make a ton of them. I am really enjoying this story though. I thought the scene in the field was cute with Vegeta getting flowered, and Goku's reaction was so adorable. I have a request I'd like to make. Please email me when you update. I have a hard time keeping up with the fics I really like because of my busy schedule. My email is "marvaughan83@yahoo.com" Thankies! Peace and Out. |
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2002 22:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh! This is so great! I love it! |
Reviewed By: PK On: October 12, 2002 14:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! I totally love your fic. At frist I was like 'Trunks you F&^kin' BASTARD!!' But then I was like, 'ohhh, poor Trunks'. Your doin' a great job, I love it. Please update soon.
Princess Kitana |
Reviewed By: Rookie1166 On: October 10, 2002 16:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!!! I can't wait to read the rest of it! A friend of mine sent it to me and we both aren't too cool on Yaoi but i decided to give it a shot. I've read it this far and I'm finding myself checking every day to see if it's been updated! |
Reviewed By: shader On: October 05, 2002 15:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Youve got me hooked on this please write more it was a let down when father mcruary ended his dbz cop fanfic please write more dis is a good one its cool goten has a kid but all of them together/ what about krillin and 18 leave them as a couple please or are you gonna post something like 18 walks in with videl or krillin and some guy they are my fave couple please leave them be but a pan/marron couple wouldnt hurt. I LOVE THIS FANFIC MOST OF THE STUFF UPTHERE IS MINDLESS DRIBBLE!!!!! |
Reviewed By: HunBun111 On: October 05, 2002 10:37 CDT
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Well that was interesting. Is it finished or ru gonna write more? I liked it. But I don't think Goku and Vegeta are a good couple at all. The thought makes me kinda sick! Gohan or Piccolo either! I thought that they said Nameks were asexual so how does Gohan know what he is with! Lol well PEACE |
Reviewed By: kitten On: October 04, 2002 20:21 CDT
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AH! you can't just leave it like that! closure is needed! write more write more write more! this is a wonderful fic, and i'm enjoying reading it so much! update update update!! please!!! |
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