| "Shared Wishes, Shared Lives" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lerris On: October 31, 2008 19:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
The biggest problem with this fic is your central premise. Yes, if you set it up right having Ranma and Belldandy view each other's memories might have worked well, but having everyone do the memory lane thing did not work. You are trying to vastly shortcut character development with a hack.
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Reviewed By: ChaosRune [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2005 04:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the fanfic, but please, dont make it a Ranma/Akane fanfic, it would destroy the whole fic, anyone of the other girls would be a lot better, and I mean it
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Reviewed By: Doodle Penguin On: December 05, 2004 02:26 CST
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I really like what you have here. You should update it. Like soon. Because I wanna see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: ranryu26 On: October 08, 2004 09:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i enjoied the story please write more
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Reviewed By: A Reader On: October 03, 2004 21:14 CDT
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I enjoyed this story for the most part. While it was horribly ooc, and had massive changes in personality happen almost instantly for little to no reason, it was entertaining. Gah, don't make this a Ranma/Akane fic. While it's a valid pairing (unfortunatly,) the Akane in this fic is a piece of trash. The only way that a R/A pairing could occur is to force it.
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Reviewed By: nameless author On: March 27, 2004 21:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like this fic a lot. please continue it. and yes you did make that mistake. also kuno wouldn't attack his pig tailed goddess. he would try to grope her and molest her instead of attack her. anyhow... please make more chapters.
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Reviewed By: White Fox 612 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2004 20:46 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why haven'y you updated yet?! I can't take it anymore!! PLZ update as soon as you can!!!
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Reviewed By: Korax [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2004 12:37 CST
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This story is a damn good read, I hope ya don't give up on writing it. I just have to say tho that in no way should this be a R/A match up.
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Reviewed By: Samus Aran On: November 27, 2003 00:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Frist you bash Akane, then you turn around and tells that she will get Ramna. WTF? You have five people to match Ramna up too. Use one of them to be with Ramna not Akane.
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Reviewed By: revlon On: October 31, 2003 16:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed it,having ranma get support from not only the three goddess but nabiki as well.I really hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Adorable akane On: October 17, 2003 01:14 CDT
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the damn computer erased the rest of the stuff I was gonna say! well heres my email address and please email me when you decide to update? K? I know I'm repeating myself. Sorry. Ja Ne! silversaori@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: Adorable Akane On: October 17, 2003 01:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love Nabiki's characterization in this fai! I don't think I spelled that^ right, to bad. Anyway please update soon and please email me when you finally do!!! K? PLEASE?!
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Reviewed By: Sterling On: October 15, 2003 00:48 CDT
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This has been a fun fic to read I hope you continue this at some point. I'm interested in seeing a wrap-up chapter or two for this fic Thanks
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Reviewed By: Sean McRae On: September 24, 2003 20:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this fanfic its well writen and as far is ive seen original, but i most say if you are planning to make thi into a Ranma/Akane I'm very sorry, you did well writing her the same wat i see her to be, buts its asking to much to pair them up i think, they jut dont go together. But like i said Loved the fic, PLEASE keep going
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Reviewed By: America Nightmare On: September 04, 2003 12:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good Fic even though you leave a lot open to question though especially the Ranma and Ryoga thing and I hope that you give a decent explaniation then the bread fued and Ryoga side of things. The Ranma and akane pairng seem really hard to see with the link that ranma has with the goddes and nibiki. |
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