| "Training Skills" Reviews/Comments [ 95 ] |
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Reviewed By: Aria On: May 03, 2003 07:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while. I had been caught up in writing my own fics and midterms and bunches of other crap. I have just gotten away from it and I made my way back here and saw the story was updated. I hope that you write again soon and I want to know the end of this fic and everything has to turn out okay. You have to let the two of them live happily ever after, and I am glad that Nida isn't such an ass anymore. By making him and Squall solve the problems you made him much mor likable. Write more and I will always review. I will give full ratings at the end of the story, but I will tell you this now, unless you make a total dive-bomb with this story you will have straight 10's.
Love ya,
Aria |
Reviewed By: Akurei13 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2003 02:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
I read this all the way through.... I got a kick out of the Gravitation references. It's so weird in the show how Ryuichi changes from childish to really sexy when he sings. Update soon! |
Reviewed By: Angel~Rinoa [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2003 17:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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I am at loss for words, once more. Rain, you are THE best! Boy, do I feel insignificant! Just kidding! I'm okay... but man, I think this is my fifth favorite scene. The first- um, I can't remember. ^^;;; Gomen! It's almost over?!! Whoa, you're working hard, gal. Keep it up! The arc idea sounds really good. ^__^
- Rinoa ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Nayna On: April 13, 2003 06:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
come on, come on.....hurry up, when will you update a new chapter?? |
Reviewed By: Angel~Rinoa [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2003 17:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
... you are cruel. So MEAN!!! Pretty, PLEASE hurry with the next chapter!!! ^____^ Wonderful as always! Oooh, hint:
Okay, Squall's got the- erm, 'thing' her borrowed from Nida- somehow... insert chocolate sauce in there with whipped cream. Just SOMEHOW insert that in there! It might come out good, but if you don't want to,
save it for another chapter! #^.^#
- Angel ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Aria On: March 01, 2003 08:31 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!! You updated I am so happy! I was waiting and hoping you would update soon! I like the rewrite of chapter 21 (even if Nida doesn't get tortured) it is much more realistic than my thumbscrew idea. (Even if I still say Nida deserves it for the pain he caused) In the end though I think you made the right decision with them. I wanna know whats gonna happen next! What other kinds of toys can Seifer intro Squall too? Cock ring? OOOOHHHHH!!! That will be fun and interresting to see! I cannot wait until you update again!
Love ya,
Aria
P.S. I hope you update your other ficcie again soon! It is going great! |
Reviewed By: Yohko On: February 27, 2003 10:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God damn! You really are amazing!! Amazing I tell you!
I mean, I nearly cried when Nida put all these images in Squall's mind, and Squall was so sad! And And And!
You HAVE to keep on writing!
Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Sailor Sun Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 10:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
noo! you can't just stop there!!! X.x Go go go go go!! HURRY!!! Write MOOREEE!!!! ^^;; soo good, write more nowww!!! and btw, i think ch. 21 is better now ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Sailor Sun Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2003 13:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I find it funny, and sad, and then funny, and then sad, and then confusing *hands clutching tissues in death grip* you haaaveeee to finish it!!! i wasn't really ever interested in ff8, but now i am *grins* more pleasseeeee |
Reviewed By: Ariel-chan On: February 17, 2003 20:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the new chapter! Please keep updating quickly! Okay, so I really just reviewed because you had 69 reviews and I couldn't take it... ^_^;; ~*Ariel*~ |
Reviewed By: Aria On: February 11, 2003 11:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an absolutly fantastic fic! It took me two hoursa to read the whole thing and I can tell you I was on the edge of my seat the whole time.
I'm glad that you didn't make Rinoa a total bitch in this fic, although I have seen it before it is nice to see that maybe she isn't as bad as she has been portrayed. (Although I do find her very annoying at times.)
Anywho, what to do with Nida! I saw you kill the bastard, but I think that Seifer would prefer some kind of torture. I think that thumbscrews would be an interesting form of punishment! That is where the person getting tortured has his/her nails ripped off their fingers. It does not cause death, (sadly) but it does cause excuciating pain. Which is what I think he deserves!
The way you have Seifer portrayed is perfect! I love the way you are making him out to be such an asshole sometimes! It is very funny, not to mention it gets him in a shitload of problems with the ones he cares about the most!
Squall......excellent job on him too! He is cold and silent and it is like talking to an iceberg! I always though that if he fell in love (with anyone) it would be a total and complete kind of love that overrules everything! The kind of love that we all dream of having for ourselves! I'm glad he will get a chance to be happy with Seifer. I have one question, what happened to him at the end of Chap 21? Did he faint or was it from the pain? I kinda can't picture Squall doing either.
Anywho the whole point of this very long review was to say pretty much one thing, POST MORE SOON PLEASE!!
Love ya,
Aria |
Reviewed By: Rue Zokorai On: February 11, 2003 21:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! An update! I've been waiting! I'm so glad you updated!! ^_^ Yes, Nida is quite the stupid one. But, I kinda felt bad for him...until he insulted Squall and told him that he killed Seifer, transferring all the guilt to him. That made me angry at him. Grr...Nida...come, my minions! ::summons evil spirits:: Drag the worthless one away! ::evil spirits drag Nida to their chambers:: Hehehehehe...oh... ::looks around nervously:: You probably think I'm insane now...umm...I'm not...I don't think ^^;; Anyway, please continue soon! I love this story soooooo much!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Sili [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2003 12:01 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm sorry, but that last part of chapter 21 made me laugh so hard. Everything was all dramatic, Seifer was 'dead', and then... "I'm not dead, you idiot." XD
I can't wait for chapter 22. ^__^ |
Reviewed By: Angel~Rinoa [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2003 18:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa... uhh... damnm, whoulda thunk that Nida could go THAT far?!! Yeah, I know what you mean. You have one of those days when a chapter doesn't feel right... but all in all, it was still good. ^^ Hope everything goes well for Seifer AND Squall!
- Angel ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Goldy Gems On: February 14, 2003 21:21 CST
Comment/Review:
You nearly gave me a heart attack! I hope things get better in the end. Please continue writing! |
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