| "Training Skills" Reviews/Comments [ 95 ] |
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Reviewed By: Instructor Quistis On: November 30, 2002 22:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this still. i'm so sorry I havent had a chance to keep up with it. And you really do need to post things a little faster. On a side note, I'm not sure if you got my e-mail. I started your story. it's called My shining star and it's on FFN. looking forward to having you read it. only the first three chapters. Anyway. Back to my review of this!
I still think you should have a double wedding, I'm glad Seifer finalllly kissed Squall and his... *tries to think of an appropriate word* ...*gives up* cock. "It's all about you tonight" Love it.
A little Quote from my story jsut for you.
"Guys are like stars, did ya know that Seifer? There's a million of them out there, but only one makes all your wishes and dreams come true." |
Reviewed By: Sili On: November 24, 2002 13:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh. My. God. This fic has made me, a girl who couldn't stand Seifer or most yaoi couples, into a TOTAL Seifer x Squall fan. T_T |
Reviewed By: MelAngel On: November 19, 2002 18:39 CST
Comment/Review:
Is this ever going to be updated again? It was updated fairly frequently before... and now there's a nice gap. *pout* I miss the updates!
Anywho... great fic! Nice, fluid style of writing and a good mind for words. Please, keep writing! |
Reviewed By: Rissa On: November 16, 2002 19:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's wonderful! I gave spelling and grammar a 9 because it's almost perfect, but everybody makes mistakes...
I started reading this on FF.net and am so happy that you told us all where to find you. I've never been to this site before, but I'm glad that I can read your awesome story here. The lemon in the last chapter wasn't terrible, it was one of the best I've ever read! What's going to happen next? It seems too easy for happily ever after for them...Of course that's what I want for them! Looking forward to reading more! |
Reviewed By: Jaelyn Crosswinds [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2002 16:09 CST
Comment/Review:
You bring yaoi to a whole new level with this. I love it! ^__^ Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: mtlxiaoangel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2002 20:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I was being stupid before...and I put in the wrong email addy! hehe...sorry! It's REALLY (I double checked...) xoEnchantedAngelxo@yahoo.com
^_^;; I know, I'm a moron, but please update!! I love this fic!!
~*EnchantedAngel*~ |
Reviewed By: Shadow Runner On: November 05, 2002 15:55 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow! |
Reviewed By: Goddess Riley On: November 01, 2002 19:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is the best fic ever of SeiferxSquall! I can't believe they took it off of FF.Net! My heart literally stopped when I couldn't find it! I'm glad it's here though1 ^__^ I'm happy again |
Reviewed By: Vickie On: October 27, 2002 15:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hot Danm! That was one of the best lemons I've ever seen! I think I'm getting addicted to you! I love lemons, the world would be crap without them all to keep us "warm". (LOL)
Pickle: You're great baby, I love you soooooo much! I'd give you all my cookies if you ever needed-
Vickie: Quit with the flattery pickle brain! It's my turn to flatter her! You get to flirt all the time!
Pickle: Icky Vicky! Anyways, I love you gurl, your amazing and talented and beutiful and just pain wonderful! I'm a one woman pickle now!
Vicky: Done?
Pickle: Never!
Vicky: Too bad! Anyway, we love you so much, and I hope you come out with another lemon soon! you're my hero! |
Reviewed By: Aequanoctis [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2002 23:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
The lemon was still yummmmy even if you're not happy with it!
By the way, there's a new website jusss for lemon fanfics! http://www.buffysmut.com/adultfanfiction/
It's still small but sure is promising!
See you next chappy ;) |
Reviewed By: Leifang On: October 24, 2002 19:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well now, I have reviewed in a long while! Well, I just wanted to say that you are an awesome writer and you keep on getting better. So, Seifer and Squall and finally together? Yay! They are so they best couple ever! I gave you all tens because you can make Seifer sweet and Squall naive...and they are still in character! Plus, this fanfic is wonderful!!!!!!
Leifang |
Reviewed By: Mai Ling On: October 24, 2002 02:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAYAYAYAYY I love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! pika-pika!!! You ROCK!!!!!
Member me? I still challenge you that treesome w/ Squall, Sefer, & Nida...but Nida sucks eggs!!hehehe |
Reviewed By: Ceranja On: October 23, 2002 14:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love this fic!!! Really, I do! ^_^ I think the lemon was great and I like the way you write Seifer. The song is also good. I had to download it because I wanted to know what was the thing that inspired you to write this chapter! Ok, maybe you found the song after you wrote this but anyway, you know what I mean ^___^ |
Reviewed By: Lady Pluto [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2002 22:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
*pouts and eyes get all watery* That was a beautiful chapter. You keep writing like this and I'll keep reading! Oh my... I just realized! I haven't even gave you one little critical remark, and it seems to me that I can't even THINK of one. Now THIS is a first. Love ya lots!
-Pluto |
Reviewed By: tnn On: October 22, 2002 17:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.o Oro... I've never thought of it like that before. But, yeah, I guess that makes sense... ^^;;; I'll certainly never be able to think about the dairy process the same way again...
And I've never really seen a guy act like that... Must be incredible. Maybe it has to do with the fact that all of the guys at my school are pricks...? Most of them, anyway. It would be unfair of me to assume that all boys are that way...
Another wonderful chapter. And why you thought the lemon was all that bad, I don't know. Maybe it was because I took up on your suggestion to listen to the song while reading...? It was a nice touch, by the way.
I really don't have too much to say... My brain's mush right now. I hope to see more of this again- it does say 'to be continued' toward the bottom, so I'm assuming that I can expect at least one more chapter. |
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