| "Training Skills" Reviews/Comments [ 95 ] |
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Title: COME ON
Reviewed By: Nayna [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2004 16:18 CST
Comment/Review:
hey hurry up! i'm waiting for chapter 25 ^^
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Reviewed By: hisababy On: December 30, 2003 15:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn! you know how to write lemons! and it's just a great fic overall! I feckin love it! Can't wait for the next two chapters!
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Reviewed By: Mya [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2003 20:02 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well mainly I had to give you all 10's. I did not care about style spellng but you made a story with the two sexest guys alive(well kind of alive),but this was one of the best stories I have read. Oh if u can e-mail me i want to know did u write stories in adultfanfiction.net and what the names r? Keep making these stories. They r so good. I can't even explain how much I love this but I cryed by the way Squall was treated by Seifer. But I was glad they got together again. Ps:sn is Passionfire17@aol.com
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Reviewed By: Deceased Laugh [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2003 15:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I can't remeber when I've read a fic with so much hot sex between Seifer and Squall. I absolutely adore the character developement in this; I think you've done a fantastic job... (sorry if I sound like a raving fangirl). Anyways, I'm very much looking forward to the next chapter. Cheers; Deceased Laugh
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Reviewed By: Deborah On: October 04, 2003 14:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o.o ICH LIEBE DICH! ^_^ this was the BEST fic i've ever read! you are my hero. =DDD
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Title: GREAT!
Reviewed By: Echan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2003 20:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okies, it's REALLY me, Angel~Rinoa, but with a different pen name on here. @__@ don't ask... AH, WONDERFUL! You 'never' cease to amaze me! Kami-sama... ^___^ Sooooo, what's the next chappie about? Give me a hint, purty please?!!! Oh yeah, look in the Gravitation section on here, rating NC-17, and look for the story " Good Kitty, Bad Kitty." It's dedicated to you!!! I feel special... ^.^ Write more soon! - Angel AKA Echan ^_~
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Title: Jessica
Reviewed By: starcrest [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2003 16:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEEEEEEEEAAAAH! Excellent chapter! I can't wait for the next one! n_n; I can't say much more than that.
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Reviewed By: Lady Pluto [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2003 09:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HUZZAH! I love you, I love you, I love you. More! More! More! *dies from over-smuting self* |
Reviewed By: Alice On: July 12, 2003 19:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are the best! I've read many more of your stories, but this is by far the best! I usually don't stick with ongoing fics, but yours totally captivated me. I couldn't keep my eyes off the screen. I cried when they went through the bresk up; I laughed insanely when Seifer found Nida talking in the booth at lunch. This is seriously an excellent fic. I wuv you! Keep on writing! |
Reviewed By: Lady Pluto [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2003 17:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*applauds* I haven't read this in a while, so I went back and read the whole thing over again. Still loving it and I adore the latest chapter. I can't wait for more, hopefully I'll remember to check for it. |
Reviewed By: Aria On: May 03, 2003 07:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while. I had been caught up in writing my own fics and midterms and bunches of other crap. I have just gotten away from it and I made my way back here and saw the story was updated. I hope that you write again soon and I want to know the end of this fic and everything has to turn out okay. You have to let the two of them live happily ever after, and I am glad that Nida isn't such an ass anymore. By making him and Squall solve the problems you made him much mor likable. Write more and I will always review. I will give full ratings at the end of the story, but I will tell you this now, unless you make a total dive-bomb with this story you will have straight 10's.
Love ya,
Aria |
Reviewed By: Akurei13 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2003 02:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
I read this all the way through.... I got a kick out of the Gravitation references. It's so weird in the show how Ryuichi changes from childish to really sexy when he sings. Update soon! |
Reviewed By: Angel~Rinoa [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2003 17:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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I am at loss for words, once more. Rain, you are THE best! Boy, do I feel insignificant! Just kidding! I'm okay... but man, I think this is my fifth favorite scene. The first- um, I can't remember. ^^;;; Gomen! It's almost over?!! Whoa, you're working hard, gal. Keep it up! The arc idea sounds really good. ^__^
- Rinoa ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Nayna On: April 13, 2003 06:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
come on, come on.....hurry up, when will you update a new chapter?? |
Reviewed By: Angel~Rinoa [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2003 17:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
... you are cruel. So MEAN!!! Pretty, PLEASE hurry with the next chapter!!! ^____^ Wonderful as always! Oooh, hint:
Okay, Squall's got the- erm, 'thing' her borrowed from Nida- somehow... insert chocolate sauce in there with whipped cream. Just SOMEHOW insert that in there! It might come out good, but if you don't want to,
save it for another chapter! #^.^#
- Angel ^_~ |
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