| "Training Skills" Reviews/Comments [ 95 ] |
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Reviewed By: mtlxiaoangel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2002 20:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I was being stupid before...and I put in the wrong email addy! hehe...sorry! It's REALLY (I double checked...) xoEnchantedAngelxo@yahoo.com
^_^;; I know, I'm a moron, but please update!! I love this fic!!
~*EnchantedAngel*~ |
Reviewed By: Shadow Runner On: November 05, 2002 15:55 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow! |
Reviewed By: Goddess Riley On: November 01, 2002 19:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is the best fic ever of SeiferxSquall! I can't believe they took it off of FF.Net! My heart literally stopped when I couldn't find it! I'm glad it's here though1 ^__^ I'm happy again |
Reviewed By: Vickie On: October 27, 2002 15:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hot Danm! That was one of the best lemons I've ever seen! I think I'm getting addicted to you! I love lemons, the world would be crap without them all to keep us "warm". (LOL)
Pickle: You're great baby, I love you soooooo much! I'd give you all my cookies if you ever needed-
Vickie: Quit with the flattery pickle brain! It's my turn to flatter her! You get to flirt all the time!
Pickle: Icky Vicky! Anyways, I love you gurl, your amazing and talented and beutiful and just pain wonderful! I'm a one woman pickle now!
Vicky: Done?
Pickle: Never!
Vicky: Too bad! Anyway, we love you so much, and I hope you come out with another lemon soon! you're my hero! |
Reviewed By: Aequanoctis [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2002 23:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
The lemon was still yummmmy even if you're not happy with it!
By the way, there's a new website jusss for lemon fanfics! http://www.buffysmut.com/adultfanfiction/
It's still small but sure is promising!
See you next chappy ;) |
Reviewed By: Leifang On: October 24, 2002 19:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well now, I have reviewed in a long while! Well, I just wanted to say that you are an awesome writer and you keep on getting better. So, Seifer and Squall and finally together? Yay! They are so they best couple ever! I gave you all tens because you can make Seifer sweet and Squall naive...and they are still in character! Plus, this fanfic is wonderful!!!!!!
Leifang |
Reviewed By: Mai Ling On: October 24, 2002 02:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAYAYAYAYY I love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! pika-pika!!! You ROCK!!!!!
Member me? I still challenge you that treesome w/ Squall, Sefer, & Nida...but Nida sucks eggs!!hehehe |
Reviewed By: Ceranja On: October 23, 2002 14:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love this fic!!! Really, I do! ^_^ I think the lemon was great and I like the way you write Seifer. The song is also good. I had to download it because I wanted to know what was the thing that inspired you to write this chapter! Ok, maybe you found the song after you wrote this but anyway, you know what I mean ^___^ |
Reviewed By: Lady Pluto [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2002 22:02 CDT
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*pouts and eyes get all watery* That was a beautiful chapter. You keep writing like this and I'll keep reading! Oh my... I just realized! I haven't even gave you one little critical remark, and it seems to me that I can't even THINK of one. Now THIS is a first. Love ya lots!
-Pluto |
Reviewed By: tnn On: October 22, 2002 17:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.o Oro... I've never thought of it like that before. But, yeah, I guess that makes sense... ^^;;; I'll certainly never be able to think about the dairy process the same way again...
And I've never really seen a guy act like that... Must be incredible. Maybe it has to do with the fact that all of the guys at my school are pricks...? Most of them, anyway. It would be unfair of me to assume that all boys are that way...
Another wonderful chapter. And why you thought the lemon was all that bad, I don't know. Maybe it was because I took up on your suggestion to listen to the song while reading...? It was a nice touch, by the way.
I really don't have too much to say... My brain's mush right now. I hope to see more of this again- it does say 'to be continued' toward the bottom, so I'm assuming that I can expect at least one more chapter. |
Reviewed By: blu bebs On: October 20, 2002 23:59 CDT
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you updated!! yeay! can't wait for the next chapter. you did promise you'll try to post faster. i'll hold on to that promise!^____^ |
Reviewed By: *Twiggy* On: October 18, 2002 18:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Rain, it's me! Were talking right now LOL! I love your story doll! You are super great!!! |
Reviewed By: tnn On: October 13, 2002 22:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
^^ Phwee, I've really enjoyed this fic thus far. It's gone from adicic to angsty and sad to sweet. ^^ I hope that you continue it... just don't make it too utterly mushy where it rots all of our (the readers) teeth out? I mean, sure, it's meant to be romantic, but they're guys, and, well... I guess that sums that up, pretty much. *sweatdrop*
What can I say? Most men have stunted emotions and are limited to a few basic drives. I'm not trying to be rude or pregidous against guys, but all of the ones I have met so far are like that... -_- It is a sad, sad world.
Btw... I have a question. Why won't Squall eat cheese/butter? *is confoozled* It must have to do with the vegetarian thing, but since I don't know any vegeterians personally, I don't understand the importance of not ingesting dairy products.
Andyhow, that's it for now. I hope I didn't rub off as too stupid... |
Reviewed By: Instructor Quistis On: October 09, 2002 23:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's me again! I'm still llovin this. I'm just biding my time before they close down the smut on FFnet. Oh well. not much I can do. But As soon as I ger started on that story, witch will be soonk, I promise, I'll let ya know |
Reviewed By: BlizzardAngel On: October 09, 2002 00:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh this chapter was cool. I like how Seifer is trying so hard to get Squall back but there's gotta be something else in there, where he really gets his trust. I don't know, but I can't wait for the next chapter. I also like how you talked about their lives at Garden. That was a nice touch. Oh, Seifer gonna get him!!!!
Can't wait! Can't wait!! |
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