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| "Dragonball Z Boot Camp" Reviews/Comments [ 103 ] | | Pages (7): [ « < 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 > » ] | Reviewed By: Saikono [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2002 10:02 CST
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WOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! I didn't review last time because I was being stupid.
Piccolo: You couldn't find the 'submit' button.
Reikon: Doesn't matter! That's in the past! I found it today! Guess what, everyone?
Piccolo: ...What?
Reikon: IT'S CHRISTMAS! Merry Christmas everyone! Or Happy Hanukkah! Or... Kwazy Kwanzaa! You know... the thing that Krusty the Clown says?
Piccolo: Krusty... the... clown?
Reikon: Hoo hoo hoo haw haw haw!
Piccolo: WHAT THE FRIGGIN' HELL?!
Reikon: ^-^
Piccolo: You're kwazy.
REikon: HA! You said 'kwazy'!
Piccolo: No I didn't! You didn't hear anything! Shut up! Leave me alone!
Reikon: You're just upset because you didn't get anything for Christmas. But that's okay. You can have a kiss!
Piccolo: NOO! *runs around in a circle* No kisses! I'll be fine! Don't come any closer!
Reikon: *puppy eyes* You're making me sad now, and I'm the one who got three stuffed doggies for Christmas and a little polar bear.
Piccolo: *glares* I don't need lipstick decorating my face. It's stand out too much.
Reikon: I told you this before, I hardly wear lipstick! I like lip gloss! Though I DO wear lipstick occasionally.
Piccolo: Are you wearing it today?
REikon: ...That's beside the point.
Piccolo: Look at you! You're taking up review space! You're supposed to be telling J'Dee how good her story is!
Reikon: ...
Piccolo: SAY SOMETHING!
Reikon: Not until you let me give you a kiss.
Piccolo: *twitch* ...Fine. But on the cheek, and be quick about it.
Reikon: YAY! *smack*
Piccolo: ...Now say something.
Reikon: YAY J'DEE! YOUR STORY ROCKS!
Piccolo: That's better. Now let's go before people start thinking this is another 'war of the long review' thing.
Reikon: BYEE!!!!! | Reviewed By: Sayuri-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2002 23:08 CST
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yay! thankies j*dee!! lol this chappie didnt show up the first time, it was wierd.. n e way THANKIE SO MUCH!!! *happy* lol u made my..week..year.. bah.. mmm..handcuffed...
YEE!!
now i send the chappie to stina cuz net nanny is evil..
JA! hahaha.. submit.. *points at it* *poke* | Reviewed By: SayinAngelPrincess On: December 17, 2002 11:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just curious, what happened to Cheetah, Jillitude, and myself. If at all possible do you think for the next chapter can I glomp Miari and cling on to him for the entire chapter that would be really cool. (drool) Please email me and let me know. My email address is Saiyanwa@aol.com Thanks | Reviewed By: BananaGirl On: December 16, 2002 15:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Quorky: I guess I better review...
Hmph
Quorky: Well...it was a good chapter! No Bulma though *scowls*
*Glares at Quorky*
Quorky: Hey, you're too busy sulking!
But...but she gets to be handcuffed to Skittles Tis not right!
Quorky: oh shut up!
WELL! *sings* Denver, the last dinosaur. He's my friend and a whole lot more!
Quorky: A whole lot more? Isn't that rather suggestive?
HEY! Denver was cool! Twas my favourite video! He had the cutest voice
Quorky: *insert jealousy here* | Reviewed By: Asilin On: December 16, 2002 08:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOOHOOO!!!! I got GOKU!!!!!! YAY!!!!! Now, if i can just latch on to veggie and hiei i'll be set!!!!! YAY!!!! ^____^ i'm thinking the guy in charge is bulma or yamcha...more than likely yamcha. but anyway, can't wait for the next chappie j'dee!!!! btw, I STILL WANT PLUSHIES!!!! I want a Hiei plushie...Inuyasha....goku.....vegeta...ummm...yami...all the cute ones...*drool* | Reviewed By: Yugiboy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2002 16:29 CST
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Platton Chibi Goten I would like that | Reviewed By: Saiyan Genius [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2002 15:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Isn't it Dino the last dinosaur, he's our friend and a whole lot more?
Maybe im thinking of a different dinosaur...and if i am thinking of the same dinosaur...IT WAS NOT BEFORE MY TIME!
HEH
Newho!
Guess what!
Its my birthay tomorrow!
YAY!
But this wont b long, cos i am not really allowed on the net, Ask S'rac if u want the full story, or the slightly longer then this story.
Wicked Chapter J'dee
I DISAPPEARED!
GO ME!!
DANCES AROUND HAPPILY!
O and i have a theory about Mediaminer, it isn't the computer that freezes, its just this particular story and reviews.
Theres so much there that the page needs 10 min to catch up ^_^
Neway
I WON!
YAY
I will catch u later cos i got 2 go
Laterz
**Arty fades away in a puff of Orange smoke**
**giggle is heard...hehehe orange like Gohans gi in the Bojack movie** | Reviewed By: Sayuri-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2002 21:15 CST
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w00t! j'dee strikes again w/ another ultrashibby chapter! yee.. new comp actually *lets* me review on mediaminer and doesnt freeze up! *smacks old compie* evil, evil machine.. n e way.. yatta! ja ne.. | Reviewed By: Jesscheaux [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2002 00:53 CST
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*Jesscheaux walks out followed by Davey with her hand behind her head, Son style*
Jess: Hmmm Davey? Do you think my application for bootcamp got lost in the mail?
Davey: Dunno, give the author some time!
Jess: *sweatdrops* Sorry sorry, just that I really want to join! You wanna be in a Platoon don't you?
Davey: *thinks* er...Yeah! course I do...*whistles*
Jess: Yeah, you better! BWA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!!!! Oh, now where did he go! SPAAAAARRRRKKY!!!!!!!
*the little fire weasel comes out and jumps into her arms*
Jess: there you are, you n aughty little weasel! *pets* Wanna pet him, Davey?
Davey: *backs away slowly* Uh...nope.
*All of a sudden the Inspector Gadget techno remix starts playing*
"THIS IS THE POLICE!!!! THIS CLUB IS CLOSED FOREEEEVVVVAAAA!!!!!"
Random voice: "HACHA!!!!!!!"
Davey: *shudders* The Police!!! RUN FOR IT!!!
Jess: *covers his mouth* Hush fool..they'll know about the *whisper whisper* HEE!
Davey: *nods* Ah yes...
*Vegeta appears*
Vegeta: Spectronian! And Weak earthling baka..what are you doing.....
Jess: Ah Veggie, how nice to see you *rolls eyes*
Vegeta: *glares*
Jess: Uhhh....what am I doing here? A better question is What are YOU doing here!
Vegeta: The Prince of all Saiyans answers to no one! NOW SPEAK!
Jess: FINE! If you must know you baka, we are signing up for Platoon Yamcha or Chibi Trunks.
Vegeta: *harrumphs* Weak minded human and Chibi brat? What on earth would you want to be in their platoon for!
Jess: *shakes head* For crying out loud, your 'Majesty" that Chibi 'brat' is your SON! | Reviewed By: Shinieblue On: January 23, 2003 17:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHHH Gohan is gonna get it!!! MUWAHAHAHAH i can't wait untill feb. 7th..that's my Birthday!!!! anywayz Gohan needs to be punished......i need my weapon!!! hmmmm..... | Reviewed By: stina-chan On: November 25, 2002 14:31 CST
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i have something important to say....*cough cough* touch my avocado's and die!!!! anyways i want a ryoga plushie nod nod,
and i'd like to go psychotic on someone...doesn't matter who a dbz guy would be preferable...
yes that would be excelent... and i'd like to have an evil sheep if its not too much trouble cuz they be soo cute...
great chappie j'dee, *grinz evilly* i'll be seeing you soon... BUAH AHHAHAHAHAHA... sorry evil laughter got the better of me
stina-chan | Reviewed By: PhoenixStarr On: November 25, 2002 11:40 CST
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I KNOW WHO IT IS!!!!!!!! THE HEAD OF BOOT CAMP IS VIDEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THAT IS RIGHT!!!! VIDEL SATAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'm right, aren't I J'dee? For my prize, I WANT 3 BILLION PLUSHIES OF GOKU-KOI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HE'S SO KAWAII!!!! I ALSO WANT THE ^REAL^ THING TOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 *head explodes like that guy singing Spy Hard*
from
The Totally And Awesomely Clever, and Original #1 Goku-koi Otaku,
PhoenixStarr | Reviewed By: Saiyan Princess TRF [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2002 14:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey J'dee! Nice new chapter! And...*dramatically* I've been captured! *giggles* Coooooool!
Heero: *rolls his eyes*
Oh, and you said you lost the plushie list? I had a Heero plushie and I'd like a plushie of James from Team Rocket (yes, I mean the one in Pokemon. He's...like...HOT!) and he and Heero plushie can keep me company while I'm a cell with the evil one aka Yamcha. Juunana plushies are cute too...and since the REAL one won't shower for me *tear*
Heero: I commend him. He's smarter than you make him out to be in "The Return" where he falls madly in love with you.
B-but...he IS madly in love with me! *drags Juunana over* RIGHT?! *Threatening glance*
Juunana: *casually* Only when she screws up my programi-*TRF glares* Oh, I wasn't supposed to say that?
I take offense! I do no such thing as mess up your programing! You just don't wanna admit the passionite, undying love you have for me Juunana-Chan!
Juunana: Where, praytell, do I have this "passionite, undying love" for you? In your NC-17 rated dreams? In your screwed up fanfiction? The time when you purposely gave me amnesia and told me we were lovers?
It ALMOST worked. But somehow your amnesiatic mind picked up on the fact that I was just a bit too young for you *hmph* what nonsense.
Heero: You really, really, scare us. Point proven. Don't say any more.
*eyes widen* But I have so much to say!
Juunana: You have one minute.
Ok, sooo is the cmap "head" Chi-Chi? If I recall correctly you called her "human" once and Juuhachigou is an artificial human! It's not the same! Not the same I tell you! *Gets dragged away, James from TR walks up and sees this* Jaaaaaaaaaaames, saaaaaaaaaaaave meeeeeeeeeeee!!!
James: *raises eyebrow* Aren't you the scary person who's always stalking me and telling me I "look nice in spandex and probably look nicer in a shower" then winks a few times? Jessie says to get away from you as fast as possible.
So what?! Jessie isn't here right now!
Jessie: *Comes up and whacks TRF over the horizon* Want a bet? Stay away from my man, girlie.
*'Blasting off'* AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!
*All anime characters, especially hot male ones, in the land cheer because TRF is gone for the moment, James kisses Jessie and Rocketshippers all over the world praise TRF for making it happen, then torture her remembering how she made it happen exactly*
*Strung over a bonfire with people chanting "burn, burn, burn" around her* I'm a Rocketshipper, I swear! I...er...did that on purpose to set them up! My fellow authors, HELP MEEEEEEE!!!
Random person: Where you're going, no one will be able to hear you scream.
*Pleads* No! Not there! Don't send me there! Uh...where are you sending me? And why am I making the review long and corny?!
RP: Because you feel hyper and weird and Team Rocket-oriented?
Aaaaah, yes. I see now. *Nods as if this is perfectly normal* | Reviewed By: Saiyan Genius [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2002 22:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This be an official review from the computer of Arty…
Arty: I be back
Taigore: Why are you talking like that?
Arty: Well I hath just speaketh to S’rac, and he was speaking in ye ole English, and it be a thing that if one of speaks thee ole English, the other tends to as well
Taigore: Umm right
Arty: Doth not taketh that tone with me Tai
Twitch: So I take it that I am allowed to take part in this review?
Arty: Indeed ye art
Twitch: You talking like that freaks me out
Arty: Doth it? Why be that?
Twitch: it’s unnatural
Arty: It be natural, thee Britons or as they art now known Welsh used to speak similar to this.
Taigore: No they didn’t they had a completely different language, you are just adding the basic stuff into English
Arty: Doth not speak out against me you fluffy cat.
Taigore: If you are following the rules of old English you should know that you can’t hurt me, women had no power then unless they were a lady, queen, princess, or hailed a goddess.
Arty: **smirks** What makes thou think that I art none of those?
Twitch: Now you’ve done it
Taigore: Well you may be a lady, but not one of any status, so you may be known as female.
Arty: That be an outrage, for thou hast just accused me of not having status, yet I have the power to summon or conjure vegetables.
Taigore: So what?
Arty: That would be considered godly, or in my case, goddessly.
Twitch: **snorts**
Taigore: That is a lame power
Arty: Better than any that thou hast, and besides, it would be beneficial to everyone, especially if there wast a famine.
Twitch: there won’t be any chance of that
Arty: but if there wast, I would be hailed a goddess, for I would hath been a saviour.
Taigore: Can we drop this?
Arty: Thou doth not like thee fact that thou art wrong
Twitch: Is it just me or does my head hurt?
Taigore: How am I supposed to know it’s your head.
Arty: Thou shalt see my knowledge be infinite
Twitch: I know what’s really wrong with you
Arty: And what would that be?
Twitch: you are just bored
Arty: Thou dost speak thee truth, thee television be only playing sport, and my sister dearest (Bleargh) be playing Shrek in thee VCR
Taigore: What be wrong with Shrek?
Arty: Absolutely nothing, but I hath seen it so much that it hath lost its charm.
Twitch: I’m not a puppet I’m a real boy, all right 5 shillings for the possessed toy
Taigore: Don’t quote stuff from Shrek, as funny as it might be, I think that’s Arty’s job.
Arty: That be true, and besides it doth not sound correct when a dragon speaketh like that.
Twitch: And a human talking is much better?
Arty: that is be
Taigore: How long is this review gunna be?
Arty: Thee idea hath not occurred to me yet.
Twitch: Typical
Arty: Thee ole English factor is quickly becoming ole
Taigore: Then stop it
Arty: No I doth not think that is a good idea, but maybe if I combined it with military speak
Twitch: This should be interesting
Arty: Will thou drop and give me twenty? Doth not work dost it? Too polite
Taigore: Thou be right there
Arty: Mwhahaah
Taigore: Damn thou art contagious
Arty: **smiles evilly**
Twitch: So what has everyone been up to?
Arty: Well I hath been busy, homework and all that whatnot, then I hath been organising my birthday celebration very hard that is ‘cos there is so much happening all those surrounding weekends, chatting, internetting, schooling, boring stuff like that
Taigore: You almost sounded normal then, I have been sleeping, eating, sleeping, and eating moths, the usual.
Twitch: Interesting, I have been setting fire to stuff, my latest escapade setting fire to Arty’s bed.
Arty: Right, thou know what I think it would be interesting to hath a tail and speaketh in old English, in BootCamp.
Twitch: That was very subtle
Arty: I thought so to
Taigore: Maybe she won’t get the hint maybe you should spell it out to J’dee
Arty: Thou thinks so? I think having a tail would be a good idea so if I win that lockup with a character thing (hehehe) then I will have something in common with Gohan, even if he doth not hath his any more. And speaking in thee old English would just be plain funny and annoying, but I will just be content with the tail.
Taigore: That’s not spelling it out.
Arty: Oh, J-‘-D-e-e- - I- W-o-u-l-d- - L-I-k-e- -2- -H-a-v-e- -A- -T-a-I-l- -c-a-n- -t-h-o-u- -a-r-r-a-n-g-e- -t-h-a-t.
Taigore: Mush better.
Arty: Smarty
Twitch: Yeah this is boring
Arty: Yes it be boring, but what else am I going to do? Thou must understand how bored I am, I went through BootCamp, correcting grammar and spelling, checking mistakes that confused me, I shalt not go into details
Twitch: you must be very bored
Arty: Very very
Taigore: Don’t you give me attitude
Arty: That’s my line, you’re just like S’rac, except he be a person, not a tiger, and he be more normal than you, but not that much more.
Taigore: how am I the same as him? I do not like Kuno
Arty: Doth not say his name
Twitch: I know you hate it
Arty: You are like him because you steal my lines, he continuously robs me of them, I made exceptions on his birthday, ‘cos he was the birthday boy, but he does every other day of the year.
Taigore: Example?
Arty: Okay I say **nods** a lot when we be chatting, when I doth not know what to say or when I agree with him, and he stole that line. Another example, when I got complimented or he said something that made me feel special, I would say, I feel special. He hath taken to that line to.
Twitch: o poor you
Arty: I know, so I hath taken to stealing his line, when he steals mine
Taigore: o an eye for an eye that kind of thing?
Arty: Precisely, and when I accuse him of stealing my lines, he just laughs with his evil mock laughter
Taigore: Heh
Arty: yeah, I hath an idea, I shalt give a description from my point of view of some of thee characters that I find amusing in BootCamp
Twitch: why would you want to do that?
Arty: yet again I say that I be bored
Taigore: Ah
Arty: here I go. BananaGirl! She be completely and utterly obsessed with Vegeta, or should I say Skittles, that completely confused me, why would you call Vegeta a skittle? He doesn’t look a thing like a skittle! Except for being small. She hath a small and adorable muse, Quorky. If I was in her Platoon I would get extremely frustrated with her, because she is so obsessed with Vegeta that she doesn’t care much about Gohan, even though she’s supposed to be rescuing him. She also has many characteristics of a cat. Like her rubbing against the poster of Vegeta and purring, and hissing at the books. She also likes to pounce on things, like J’dee in her Vegeta shirt. Sounds like my cat.
Taigore: That was detailed
Twitch: I thought you meant like 1 line
Arty: well thou were wrong, and onto thee next character. Quorky
Taigore: I wouldn’t mind eating him
Arty: ^_^;;;;
Taigore: You got to think about it, I am a tiger, I like meat, and he is a monkey. A food source.
Arty: But he’s a muse like you
Taigore: Your point?
Arty: Never mind
Twitch: I have to admit, he does look appetising
Arty: thou be shocking.
Taigore: I am not an electrical appliance
Arty: I never said you were, Anyway, Quorky: Okay he be smart, and funny. I think he should watch out with Bulma manga though, since Vegeta is out of imprisonment. I can just see BananaGirl turning a blind eye on Vegeta hurting him because she loves Vegeta or Skittles so much.
Anyway sometimes he is treated really rough.
Taigore: That was a short one, are you sure you don’t like that monkey? If you want I can eat him
Twitch: I can help
Arty: No that shalt not be necessary
Taigore: Aw
Arty: J’dee: Well this one is…well…hmmm…there’s not one word by itself that describes J’dee. I mean she’s got to be great, I mean she’s friends with me ^_^ so yeah. She smart, I mean look at her writing material. She gets lost heaps, I wouldn’t trust her with any delivery of mine, thank Kami she doesn’t work for a pizza delivery place. No one would ever get their pizzas. She’s quite evil to tell you the truth, she plots against people **does funny eyes shifty thingy** you can trust her.
But she’s there when you need her; she’s a good friend. I mean one time she beat S’rac up with a kitchen sink when he made me sad. It wasn’t a good thing ‘cos he made her do it ‘cos I refused to hurt him. I was annoyed but happy to know that she would beat someone up with a kitchen sink if was hurt enough and she knew them.
Twitch: Now someone obviously wants to be descriptive
Taigore: No she’s greasing
Arty: Ignore them. S’rac.
Okay, S’rac, too Goku like. He’s like Goku. So naive, he’s funny. He eats like Goku to. One problem is Kuno. **Shudders** that name gets me every time, but I will say his name to get S’rac back to normal.
^_^
He’s a good friend and platoon leader. And my PLATOON IS COMING TO RESCUE ME! YAY! Well probably not just me, I bet they’re just coming to rescue Goku, and I’m just a bonus **Sniffles**
J/k Like I said, S’rac has taught me well
Taigore: well that was quite short
Arty: well I’ve talked a lot about him before, so you get the idea
Twitch: True
Arty: Shinnie or the Evil SB, hehehe does not go well with Tanti! DO NOT COMBINE OR YOU WILL BE MET WITH AN EXPLOSION! Lol.
Taigore: they’re getting shorter.
Arty: Tanti! Mwahahaha, bwhahaha, ha. She’s not the only one who can laugh evilly. ^_^. She’s one of the greatest rivals in BootCamp. A Veggiepants fan. We too are quite explosive when combined. Like an all out war per say.
But we can get along when necessary, as much as it pains her to agree with anyone from my Platoon.
But I mean we fight a lot to, I mean remember that’s what got us thrown in our cells.
I got better luck then her, she got a green bean fan, no offence to that, I just thought I’d spell Piccolo wrong, hey I spelt it right.
But I think it’s a good thing that we got our cells that we did.
If she got thrown in with Goku, she might have killed him, and thought wouldn’t have been good.
Taigore: Well that was interesting.
Twitch: Yeah.
Arty: Wildthing, she’s wild and she’s a thing. Hence the name I guess. She’s quite funny.
Taigore: back to the short again
Arty: Yeah
Taigore: I think you ran out of things to say
Arty: damn straight
Twitch: yeah I don’t say much do I?
Arty; nope
Taigore: Hey you got out of your English stage
Arty: don’t remind me
Twitch: This is only 3 pages!
Arty: that’s kind of sad
Taigore: Yeah but what can we do about it?
Arty; I don’t know, I need a hug
Twitch: well I still haven’t forgiven you so don’t look at me
Taigore: I would but Tigers are kinda not equipped in the hugging department.
Arty: Okay, well ill just hang out and wait for a hug then, I WANT A TAIL!!!
Twitch: You won’t let that die will you?
Arty: No I keep imagining people’s faces when I hang out of trees and start talking to them. Especially if I do it to a Saiyan. Mwahahaha. Or if got locked up if I win (hehehe) you know the character thing, ‘cos I want to be locked up with Gohan, and at least I’d have something to talk to him about, even though I am quite smart and strong, so those are other things we have in common.
Twitch: You’re not very modest are you?
Arty: you got no chance in hell of me being modest
Taigore: Lol
Arty: Anyway this is the end of this review! UPDATE J’DEE OR I WILL HAVE TO TAKE REVENGE! AND I AM NEAR YAMCHA THIS TIME ‘COS HE’S IN PRISON TO. SO I WON’T TAKE IT OUT ON THE LAVENDER THIS TIME!
O DID I TELL YOU B4 THAT LAVENDER IS MY FAVOURITE FLOWER? JUST TO CHANGE THE SUBJECT DRAMTICALLY! O AND MY MOTHER GAVE ME A REALLY COOL NECKLACE! IT WAS MY GRANDMOTHERS AND IT HAS AN OPAL IN THE CENTRE, ITS SHAPED LIKE A FLOWER AND THE OPAL IS THE CENTRE, AN THE REST GOLD! I REALLY LIKE IT! I ACTUALLY CONNED MUM INTO GIVING IT 2 ME! BUT ITS STILL COOL ^_^! | Reviewed By: juuachi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2002 21:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is really great. most of all the plushie
thing! *squeals hugging her Chibi Trunksie plushie* I hope I'm going to be mentioned and have a least a semi-important role in my platoon
soon. I'd like to have my very own plushie named Chibi Trunksie and...*hides face blushing* I've never had a boyfriend yet in reality and I'm 14 already. I know how embarassing!! *hangs head ashamed*~anyways~ I was thinking since Trunks and Goten are the best of friends it wouldn't seem odd that me and a member from Chibi Goten got together. Of course that's if he wants to *waves hand franticly* wouldn't want to force anyone *laughs nevously* and if he agrees then I will be forever grateful that at least I have any kind of boyfriend even if it's only in the story.
~anyways~ great strory and please consider what I asked you*gives the dreaded Puppy Dog Eyes*TM* | | Pages (7): [ « < 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 > » ] |
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