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| "Dragonball Z Boot Camp" Reviews/Comments [ 103 ] | | Pages (7): [ « < 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 > » ] | Reviewed By: Washu Kobayashi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2002 19:26 CST
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Kawaii! Kawaii! I know who the mystery person is. ^^
Another thing, I want to talk to this guy Tobias. I just find it all to weird that my friend has dreams about this guy who's name is Tobias, he goes by Toby, and he acts like Vegeta. 0-o De ja vu?
~Washu K. | Reviewed By: Jesscheaux On: November 21, 2002 00:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HI J'dee!!!!! I've seen you on OFUD, and you were really cool! You go gurlllll for liking Yamcha because he is cool and he's not the bad guy that people make him out to be! I REALLY REALLY wanna be in the bootcamp!!! Can I lead Platoon Yamcha???? Or maybe even, *gasp* Platoon Krillin? hehe, gotta love the little guy! But if I can't lead Yammy's group, I would like to be on Chibi Trunks' Platoon :)
I must confess, I am a huge Piccolo, Vegeta, and Goku fan. (not as obsessed as some) but STILL OBSESSED!!!! I love DBZ sooooooooo much! PWEASE I WANNA BE A LEADER!!!!
BTW, you pronounce my name "Jesscheaux" And in one of my fics I'm married to the one and only Piccolo-san! (dai dai dai dai daiii suki) And my sis gots Yamcha. I think he's cool! Especially his outfit in DB, totally stylin'
ANYWAYS!!! LOVE THE FIC AND IT'S JUST SO GREAT! Oh yeah, and that Legendary part, has to do with my fic too! I'm an alien, ya see! A Spectronian to be exact. A rival of Vegeta! BWA HA HA! But for this I shall bring along my dearest Davey! I guess you couldn't really call him my muse because he's my boyfriend! :)
Davey: *waves* Hi
Jess: Hiya sweetums!
Davey: *sweatdrops* Hello, love
Jess: So, which team do you think we'll be on?
Davey: Not sure just yet...didn't you want Chibi Trunks?
Jess: I do like the Chib-ster, but if I could be a leader, OH YEAH THAT WOULD BE GREAT! BWA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAA!!!! (look, I followed the rules :p)
Davey: hehe, I love it when you laugh e villy! I think I"ll do it too! MWA HA HA HA HA!!!
Jess: Good job, Davey!
*all ofa fire weasel come out and jumps on her shoulders*
Jess: SPARKY!!!!! *pets him* Hey J'dee! Meet my fire weasel Sparky! Isn't he the cutest????? (if you've ever played on Yahoo! games, the fire weasel is the icon that's really a dragon but it doesn't look like a dragon to me so I call it a fire weasel!)
Davey: AH! Don't let him touch me!
Jess: NYAH! :p Fire weasels are soooo nice and sweet! Right Sparky???
Sparky: *pants like a dog*
Jess: Nice boy! Good Sparky! I can't go to bootcamp without him!!!! Davey, don't you like him?
Davey: He scares me :p, But he's cute anyway.
AH! I want to guess who the HEAD IS!!! I WANT 3RD PLACE!!! It is obvious #18!!! AM I right? AM I AM I? It CAN'T Be Chi-chi or Videl! They would be too hyper and mean! It MUST Be #18! Ok then J'dee! I hope to hear from you soon! Let me give you a description of me and Davey now.
Jesscheaux: Age 19, 5'6 1/2" Dark long curly hair, pale skin, green eyes, large frame. Wears a white karate gi with blue shirt underneath and blue trim on the shoes.
Davey: Age 18, 5'11", short short dark hair, pale skin, hazel eyes, round-rim glasses. Wears a blue hooded sweatshirt and jeans.
THERE YA GO! If you have any questions or wanna chat, feel free to e-mail me at: purpleEclipse22@yahoo.com and my AIM is "camoCajun"
JA NE!!!!! | Reviewed By: Saiyan Genius [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2002 18:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
J'dee just 2 bug the hell out of u, CAN I HAVE A TAIL!!!
O and 315315 1631619!” (Caecae Afcafai) THAT IS NOT A CEREAL!!! AND IF IT I HAVE NEVA EVA HEARD OF THAT b4 IN MY SHORT LIFE, I ASKED TWITCH BUT SHE WONT TALK 2 ME COS SHE WASNT ALLOWED IN THE REVIEW AND TAIGORE HAD NEVA HEARD OF IT B4 EITHER!
Im probably the only one who will bother 2 translate the number but hey thats me for u.
I was wondering well what his her favourite cereal.
But of course i was seriously disappointed, J/k it was kool, the whole chapter was | Reviewed By: Tanti [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2002 16:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.O WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Aakeido- oh god
WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH *hugs the Tamahome plushie crying* WHY ISNT HE TO LIFE YET!!!!!!!
Aakeido- you shouldve seeeeeeen how hyper she was when she got the update email...she was dancing and singing 'Tamas gonna be alive! Tamas gonna be alive! TAMA TAMA TAMA!' -.-;; really annoying
*cries louder* I WANNA HOLD VEGETA TOO!!!!!
Aakeido- *covers his ears* make it stop!!!!
and....um....*grins and takes out her box of plushies and starts lining them all out* theres
Tamahome
Hotohori
Nuriko
Chichiri
Tasuki
Mitsukake
Chiriko
Amiboshi
Suboshi
Nakago
Tama-neko
Vegeta
M.Trunks
GT.Trunks
C.Trunks
Goten
GT Goten
Inuyasha
Sesshomaru
Miroku
Shippo
Hiten
Naraku
Eiri
Ryuichi
Hiro
Shuichi
Tohma
Tachi
K
Suguru
Keiichi
Tenchi
Gene
Jim
Harry
Ron *thinks* oh ya!
Spike
Vicious
andddddd
i think thats it
Aakeido- 0.0 ur a psycho -__-
i KNOW! WELL! Must go now! TTYL! Love the story! Bye bye....remember i wanna bring Tama to lifeeeee pleasseeeeee
--Tanti-- | Reviewed By: Epona On: November 20, 2002 16:00 CST
Comment/Review:
WHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!! *runs around like the insane little girl she is*
Nika: ......I WANNA RUN AROUND TOO!!! *runs around with Epona*
Megan: Oh great...
*stops running for a sec* SB, that was a stupid review....maybe if u'd put different songs then it'd be cool but...argh...so boring...
Kayla: quit lecturing her
alright...oooh ooh wanna hear about my day?
Jenna: no
*glare* i was talking to J'dee....anyways, I woke up at 6:25 and i actually wasn't sleepy O.o but i was cold... and then i got dressed...i wore my DBZ t-shirt, and a pair of baggy blue jeans ^_^
Kayla: *sarcastic* how fascinating...
shut up. i bet J'dee thinks i'm interesting. anyway, it was really really cold outside this morning so i was freezing my butt off. and then on the bus there was this guy who accidently left his violin outside on the curb, so he had to run back outside to get it. in school, a bunch of guys in my homeroom were talking about Michael Jackson and saying stuff about his kid and saying that he'd been hanging out with Bobby wut's-his-name too much. Chorus we basically just sang...we sang A La Nanita Nana and Up On the Housetop and our warm ups and random other stuff. ^_^
Spike: *plays with mouse*
Spike's my imaginary kitty by the way...anyway, after Chorus was Computers ^^ i got to surf the net all period since i did all my work last period. i tried to read ur fic then but they have something installed that won't let me on mediaminer cos it has adult stuff and crap like that...-_-"
Nika: *chases a butterfly* FLUTTER-BY!!!
and 3rd period we talked about how evil our teacher is ^_^ he used to ask for 25 cents from each student to buy a new clock...then he'd pull an old new looking clock out of his closet and hang it up after the kids had left ^_^ and then he had like $100 to spend O.o
Megan: *jousts with Kayla*
and 4th period we had to fill out some notes on a paper...LA class...-_-" irritating...she's normally a fun teacher but today was a boring day
Megan: *wins*
5th period is Spanish... LOL!!! we were doing this thing where we had to take the clothes he said (in spanish of course) and we had to give them to whoever he said (he said like "un muchacho" which means "a boy" or he said "una muchacha baja" which means "a short girl") and i first picked up a really ugly tie and gave it to this one guy...then my friend picked up a TOTALLY FRICKING UGLY SKIRT AND HAD TO HAND IT TO A GUY!!!! she gave it to this one kid, PJ but he didn't want it so he threw it at this tall guy and HE PUT IT ON!!! OMG OMG OMG!!! IT WAS SOOO FUNNY!!!
Kayla: *gets mad at Megan for beating her and chases her with her mallet*
it was a really ugly skirt too...and then we handed this pair of ugly tan pants to this really short kid...the pants were huge too O_O it was freaky!!! he was so short and stuff and the pants kept falling down...... *cracks up*
Megan: O.o *runs away from Kayla*
then this one kid had to go up and he picked up a pink shirt (O.o) and a pair of black velvet pants cos the teacher told him too.... and he put them on...and then he was told to act like a MODEL!!! and he was walking around and acting all girly and junk!!! it was soooo hilarious!!!
Kayla: *catches up to Megan and smacks her with the mallet*
and me and my friend cold not look at that tall guy without laughing...and the short kid wore those ugly tan pants all day.....
Megan: *.* *falls down*
6th period, science, i had a test...-_-" i think i'm gonna fail it..(it's over 2 days) cos i dun understand electricity stuff...
Kayla: ^_^ *looks proud of herself for hitting Megan*
and in geometry we did nothing really important..i did forget my homework at home tho -_-"
Jenna: are u done yet?
yeah pretty much... but...i still say that the person running the camp is Chichi...did i win? ^.^ did i did i did i huh huh huh?!
Kayla: ........-_-;;
Epona is so sure that she won...
Megan: ...when did u start referring to urself in 3rd person?
Epona is not sure
*the muses sweatdrop*
Hey hey!!! Epona cannot remember if she told you, but she wants to be locked up with her Mirai!!! Mirai is hers, yeppers, yes yes!!!
Nika: Epona has a new word too...
yes yes, she does!!! it's sercuserfated!!! ^_^
Megan: we aren't sure wut it means tho..
Epona does!!! but she isn't telling ^_^V
Nika: i want a new word...
Too bad ^_^
Jenna: this is getting boring now...
hmmmm....ooh ooh Epona knows wut to do!!! she will sing "Wind Nocturne" for u!! ^_^
Megan: not that song again....
oh shut up... it's a pretty song...but Epona didn't think it up, no no...she got it from Lunar 1: Silver Star Story
Nika: can i sing it too?
no, this is Epona's song. u can work the spotlight ^_^
Nika: okie!!! *runs off to the spotlight projecter thing*
Megan, Jenna, Kayla, find the CD player...
*they run off to do that*
wheeeeeeeeeeeee!!! Epona gets to sing the pretty song for u!! ^_^V
*the muses have found the CD player and they come and pop the CD in it*
yay!!! okie ready? here goes!!!
*ahem*
*Nika puts spotlight on her*
*starts singing*
Wishing on a dream that seems so far off
Hoping it will come today
Into the starlit night
Foolish dreamers turn their gaze
Waiting on a shooting star
But...what if that star is not to come?
Will their dreams fade to nothing?
when the horizon darkens most
We all need to believe there is hope
Is an angel watching closely over me?
Can there be a guiding light I've yet to see?
I know my heart should guide me but
There's a hole within my soul
What can fill this emptiness inside of me?
Am I to be satisfied without knowing?
I wish then for a chance to see
Now all I need
*muses sing in background* (Desperately..)
Is my...star to come....
*is done singing* WHEEEEEEEE!!! DIDJA LIKE IT? it's a pretty song...here's a site where u can see a cute little kitty singing it ^_^ it's so kawaii!! of course Luna doesn't sound like that but that's the background music and the words...
Megan: sheesh...are u done jabbering now?
not at all!!! ^_^ anyway this is the site: http://www.geocities.co.jp/Milkyway-Lynx/9043/c-song.htm check it out!!! it's soooooooo cool!!!
Kayla: yes it is...the little kitty is named Shii... quite adorable
such a pretty song...^_^ i loooove that song....
Megan: she also likes the nut song....
ooh ooh!!! do you wanna hear that one too?! ^.^
Jenna: *quickly* no she doesn't!!!
Megan: yes!!!
Nika: yes!!!
OKIE!!! WE WILL SING IT!!!
*Epona, Megan, and Nika start up on "the nut song"*
I'm an acorn small and round
Sitting on the cocoa ground
I'm a nut, I'm a nut, I'm a nut nut nut nut nut
Call myself on the telephone
Just to hear my golden tone
I'm a nut, I'm a nut, I'm a nut nut nut nut nut
Take me on a little date
Pick me up at half past 8
I'm a nut, I'm a nut, I'm a nut nut nut nut nut
Take me to the movie show
To stay out and say "Let's go!"
I'm a nut, I'm a nut, I'm a nut nut nut nut nut
Spend the night out on the town
I will wear a long ball gown
I'm a nut, I'm a nut, I'm a nut nut nut nut nut
*they are done singing*
WHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!! didja like that one? i know i know...they both were short...but i really can't think of any to sing that are longer...maybe if i put a bunch then they'll be long... I KNOW!!! I'LL SING "I'M WITH YOU!!!" with those idiots *indicates muses* singing the chorus ^_^
*the muses sigh*
Megan: how did we get caught up in this?
Kayla: i dunno
READY?! TOO BAD!!! HERE WE GO!!!
*singing*
I'm standing on a bridge
I'm waiting in the dark
I thought that you'd be here by now.
There's nothing but the rain
No footsteps on the ground
I'm listening but there's no sound
Isn't anyone trying to find me?
Won't somebody come take me home?
*muses join in now*
It's a damn cold night
Trying to figure out this life
Won't you take me by the hand
Take me somewhere new
I don't know who you are
But I...I'm with you...
*muses shut up*
I'm looking for a place
Searching for a face
Is anybody here I know?
'Cause nothing's going right
And everything's a mess
And no one likes to be alone
Isn't anyone trying to find me?
Won't somebody come take me home?
*muses join in again*
It's a damn cold night
Trying to figure out this life
Won’t you take me by the hand
take me somewhere new
I don’t know who you are
but I... I'm with you
*muses shut up again*
Oh...why is everything so confusing?
Maybe I'm just out of my mind..
Yeah yeah yeah (etc etc)
*still just Epona this time*
It's a damn cold night
Trying to figure out this life
Won’t you take me by the hand
take me somewhere new
I don’t know who you are
but I... I'm with you
*muses join now*
Take me by the hand
Take me somewhere new
I don't know who you are
but I...I'm with you
I'm with you
take me by the hand
Take me somewhere new
I don't know who you are
but I...I'm with you
*just Epona*
I'm with you
I'm with you...
*is done singing* wheeeeeeee...are these songs getting irritating? ^_^ gomen if they are!!!
Nika: i think it's fun....
so do i!!!
Nika: wheeeeeeeee!!! *runs around in circles with Epona*
ooh...as much as i'm enjoying this, i have science homework and geometry...so i must be going...ja ne, until u update next!!! | Reviewed By: Shinieblue On: November 19, 2002 18:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o0o0o pretty green!!
well i was wondering that could me evil side visit Tanti in her cell?!?!?! please please please?!?!
I didn't get mentioned in the last chapter! *pouts*
Hey Tanti pink hair iz kool!!!
i am hyper!! i just had 10 packets of SMARTIES!!! MUWAHAHAHAHA and now i hear voices in my head that tell me to do things...heheh aka Evil SB!! lol | Reviewed By: bura400 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2002 21:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry I havent been around been Busy ......Cute chapter! Lucky girl! Locked in a cell with Bar-kun!!!!!! *giggles with hearts in eyes* brb a min. *scuffling and fighting noises heard*
*drags out Bardock on a dog collared chain, in leather pants and no shirt*
Bardock: *crosses arms and scowls like the big bad saiya-jin he is ^_~*
Anyway J-dee-chan my absent muse Bar-kun says hello. great chappie! I loved it......hehe We were so evil......Especially Banana Girl MUHAHAH!!
Gottsa go Im me!!!! See yers girlfriend! Bura-chan
Official glomper of Bardock ^_^ | Reviewed By: bura400 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2002 21:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry I havent been around been Busy ......Cute chapter! Lucky girl! Locked in a cell with Bar-kun!!!!!! *giggles with hearts in eyes* brb a min. *scuffling and fighting noises heard*
*drags out Bardock on a dog collared chain, in leather pants and no shirt*
Bardock: *crosses arms and scowls like the big bad saiya-jin he is ^_~*
Anyway J-dee-chan my absent muse Bar-kun says hello. great chappie! I loved it......hehe We were so evil......Especially Banana Girl MUHAHAH!!
Gottsa go Im me!!!! See yers girlfriend! Bura-chan
Official glomper of Bardock ^_^ | Reviewed By: Epona On: November 07, 2002 18:13 CST
Comment/Review:
...I can't remember if i reviewed or not...and i can't find one. so....GUESS WHAT!!! I'M REVIEWING!!!
Megan: ........
Heehee ^_^V
Kayla: Do u see what sugar does to this girl?-_-"
Hehehe.... ooh...can we have an Inu Yasha plushie running around? and i figured out who Kuno is!!! all by myself too ^_^ aren't i special?
Kayla: No
*glares at her*
Kayla: I mean...yes... -_-"
^_^ I want my mirai!!! and i want inu yasha too ^_^ *drools over piccys of mirai and inu yasha*
Megan: ........
well it's true...can i have a mirai and an inu yasha plushie? *big shiny eyes* pwease?
Kayla: don't give them to her
PWEASE?!?! and i want my REAL mirai too.... *big starry eyes* I'LL RESCUE MY MIRAI!!!!!
Nika: MIRAI!!!
MY MIRAI!!! *bitch slaps Nika*
*Nika and Epona get in a bitch slapping contest. Epona wins*
^_^ My mirai....
Nika: *_*
*Everyone else sweatdrops*
....What? He's mine......
Megan: Ok, it's time to go away now...
NOO!!! I DIDN'T GET TO SAY HOW MUCH I LIKED THE CHAPPY!!!
Megan: fine but u need to go soon...
FINE!!! *ahem* I really loooved it!!! ^_^ especially the rules for writing a successful review... ^_^ coolio!!!
Megan: now u told her, now lets go!!!
*the girls drag a babbling Epona away* | Reviewed By: stina-chan On: October 22, 2002 22:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
since this fic is so fantabulously shibby, i'm letting my new muse Hogosha (a little, black and navy blue dragon) do this review with me,
Hogosha: *looks bored* yeah whatever
tsk tsk thats not very nice J'Dee puts alot of quality time on her fics she deserves better then that! Now what do you say
Hogosha: *sits up straigter and talks like reciting a script* I apologise for being a prick, your story is the shibbiest thing around J'Dee *mutters under breath* stina baka mitai....
Hey you take that back Hogosha
Hogosha: Make me
Why you *pounces Hogosha*
Hogosha: GAK
Take it back! TAKE IT BACK!!!!
Hogosha: AHHHH alright alright i take it back
Good Hogosha have a snack *tosses a coffee crisp*
Hogosha: Coffee...Crisp *lounges at the bar*
-_-;; Heh...we have so many things in common, anyways i'm here to give you inspiration *hands J'Dee inspiration* Happy writing
stina-chan, the one and only
p.s ahhahaha SUBMIT, i will never get tired of that... | Reviewed By: springwarrior On: October 19, 2002 13:54 CDT
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I know! i know! It's Radditz! I want Mirai! MIIIIIIRRRRAAAAAAAAAAIIIII!!!!!! *drool* | Reviewed By: Saiyan Genius [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2002 19:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Arty: I CHANGED MY MIND IF I WIN THAT COMPTETITION ABOUT GUESSING THE MYSTERY PERSON I KNOW WHO I WANT 2 B LOCKED UP WITH, COS NOW I WANT MY PRIZE IF I WIN
Taigore: I feel sorry for that character
Twitch: **nods**
Arty: MWHAHAHAHAHA, I will tell J’dee and make it a surprise for u all, MWHAHAHAHAHA
Taigore: Good Kami, we’re all doomed… and that Dbz character won’t live to tell the tale
Arty: Yeah if u say so, I was thinking about it last night… and I decided that I could do some major annoying or something, so I’ll tell J’dee, I actually have 3 characters but she can pick which one would make the story weirder…. MWHAHAHAHA and two of the characters are actually the same
Twitch: ATTENTION ALL DRAGONBALLZ CHARCATERS HEAD FOR THE HILLS ESPECIALLY IF YOU VALUE YOUR LIFE!
Arty: I’m not that bad
Taigore: RUN!
Arty: Honestly I don’t know what they’re on about
Twitch: WE DO! BYE
P.S. Arty: S’rac is an evil line stealer so beware…. MWHAHAHAHA, he’s stealing my lines left and right
Taigore: you do it to him to
Arty: Er…bye | Reviewed By: Phoenix Starr On: October 18, 2002 16:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY!!!!!!!! ITS ME!!!!!!!!! EEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'M HYPO!!!!!!!
OK, enough. Dudette! This is SOOOO kool!!! I love this fic, and you won't believe this but SO DOES CACHOOKA!!!!!!!!!!!!!! He thinks that this fic is "although very random, very good, and inspiring" Can you believe it??!!! Normally he is really grumpy and hates everything that I like.
OK, so when Chinow is out of Platoon *p horns* Goku/Kaky-chan *p horns* can I BE IN IT!!!!!?????? PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Just use my stats from Trading Places, OK?
Oh yah, I think that the black haired person who is now running the camp is dun dun DUUUNNNNN!!!! HERCULE SATAN!!!!! Or Videl, or Death Frying Pan Bitch Who Forces Homework On Everyone, or Turles, or Radditz, or Gogeta, or Vegitto, or the reporter from the Cell-baka games, or Mirai Gohan, or a random citizen. AND IF IT IS ANY OF THESE CHARACTERS I WIN AND I WANNA BE LOCKED UP WITH *P HORNS* GOKU/KAKY-CHAN *P HORNS* FOR EVER AND EVER AMEN!!!!!!!!!!! EEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
FILTRIDGED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MWAHHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
from
The Saver of the Universe from The Evil Death Bitch Obsessed With Frying Pans And Studying Who Stole The Hottest Guy To Have Ever Walked The Face Of Multiverses Across Time
Phoenix Starr; The Kick Ass Saiya-jin *p horns* Goku/Kaky-chan *p horns* Otaku Who Will Kill Said Study Freak Dragging It Out For As Long As Possible Making It The Most Painful Death Ever. | Reviewed By: Saiyan Genius [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2002 01:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Arty: hey I’m feeling better…but I have some devastating news…. Prepare yourself.
Twitch: Actually I don’t really care…’cos it doesn’t concern me
Taigore: It concerns me…’cos when it happened Arty was in hysterics… she was crying NOOOOO! And yelling that she needed a hug.
Arty: **sniff** It was tragic
Twitch: So tell the people already…
Arty: You ready?
Taigore: Just say yes
Arty: You sure?
Twitch: Say yes
Arty: THEY TOOK DRAGONBALLZ OFF THE AIR IN NEW ZEALAND AND REPLACED IT WITH SOMETHING CALLED ZIODS NEW CENTURY…I MEAN THAT ISN’T EVEN A COOL NAME, THAT IS NOT A VERY NICE THING TO DO…. I MEAN WE’D ONLY SEEN UP TO WHERE VEGETA BLOWS HIMSELF UP FIGHTING BUU, AND THEN IT STARTED AGAIN…AND IT WAS ONLY UP TO NAMEK WHEN GOKU HAS JUST ARRIVED… AND I DIDN’T EVEN GET TO SEE MY FAVOURITE SAGA… THE CELL GAMES…
Taigore: You see what we have 2 put up with
Arty: So I’m going to need lots of hugs… I mean … come on…. I’ll never see Goku or Vegeta or Gohan or Trunks or Goten… Or Bulma or any of the gang again…
Twitch: Don’t forget that you taped Dragonballz since it has been on… and you’ve downloaded a lot… so you will see them again.
Taigore: Yeah remember that
Arty: YOU DON’T SEE WHAT IT MEANS TO ME TO COME HOME FROM SCHOOL AND WATCHING DBZ, BUT NOW I CAN’T
Twitch: Aw
Taigore: You’ll live
Arty: Will I?
Twitch: Yes remember, you’ve got to live for all your fans of your story…and to help J’dee with your ideas for Boot Camp… And so you can talk to S’rac.
Arty: Those are all good points
Taigore: And if you die you won’t be able to talk to your friends…or read the next chapter of Boot Camp.
Arty: That’s right I have to pull through **smashes fist into opposite hand** But I will have my revenge.
Taigore: You just keep on believing that
Arty: Yeah so that’s all the big news I have
Twitch: That’s pretty boring.
Arty: You don’t need to tell me that
Taigore: So do we have to do a long review?
Arty: I don’t know… I mean I said I would and all…but I don’t really have the time … but I will try
Twitch: Damn and I thought I was going to get off lightly
Arty: Oh I had a good day today… I’ll tell you about my day
Taigore: **rolls eyes** Here we go
Arty: First I went to school on the bus… and I had my hair done all pretty in plaited pig tails…don’t look at me like that… and I was all happy … then I went to form class, and that was boring… but then I went to English and made my friends do impromptu speeches in front of the class ‘cos I got to pick the first person to go… and then I picked my friend… and then she picked my other friend.
Then I had science and we were doing chemistry… and we burned magnesium and I got blinded cos it was really bright. The other day in science my teacher filled a balloon with hydrogen and tied a piece of string and lit it on fire and then it exploded. Totally cool
Then I had interval… and well I ate my lunch… and I’m not going to bore you on what I had for lunch.
Then I went to social studies… and we were studying the treaty of Waitangi… it’s a New Zealand thing… so I don’t know if you’ve heard of it…. Yeah and I answered a few questions… yeah same usual class… except I got my marks back from a test… and I got the top mark in my class. ^_^ YAY!
Then I went to P.E (physical Education or Gym) and I had a substitute… that was cool ‘cos we didn’t have to do Athletics… and we got to play basketball…
Then I had lunch, and one of friends was sad… so that wasn’t good…so I helped to make her feel better.
Then I went to Drama, and my group got in trouble for not working properly… it wasn’t me really.
So that sucked.
Then I went to Economics… THAT WAS THE BEST LESSON EVER.
We had a farewell party for one of my classmates… so we had munchies and watched not another teen movie, lots of fun.
Then I went home… yeah that was my day pretty much… except for when I came home and found that DBZ WASN’T ON ANY MORE!
Taigore: GET OVER IT!
Arty: Yeah I’ll try
Twitch: Yeah you do that
Arty: Yeah, I was going to go out tonight… But I don’t know… I don’t think I will
Taigore: Won’t Dani kill you if you don’t?
Arty: Yeah most probably but I’ll live
Twitch: That makes NO sense
Arty: Do shut up, you know what I meant
Twitch: I’m bored
Arty: What should I do my speech for English on? I was going to do Philosophy or Psychology but I don’t know.
Taigore: Do it on your loveable muses
Arty: No, it has to be informative
Twitch: Oh, umm do it on the relativity of the molecules that make up a subterranean alloy
Taigore: WHAT!?
Arty: I don’t even know what you’re talking about
Twitch: Heh, never mind
Arty: Oh OKs… theories on this mystery person… and why they could be that person…
Okay… Gotenks… well you were going to about the chibi platoons joining forces… well what if when they did that Gotenks suddenly popped up and said HELLO! I know that makes no sense
Chichi, Well psycho, wouldn’t want to have her running the camp, and scary… I mean she would frighten even Kuno into submission, oh and she has 2 save her baby’s
Yamcha, J’DEE IS OBSESSED WITH YAMCHA I MEAN WHAT OTHER REASON DO YOU NEED?! But if u do need another one… well who else would outrage Veggie-pants fans more then Bulma’s ex?
Krillin, Er I guess this would piss Veggie fans off to
Android 17, I don’t know really he was just a black haired character from Dbz, so I guess he’s ruled out… but there is always the possibility.
Videl, EVIL, Um I don’t know… I guess ‘cos she’s evil
Hercule, NOW THIS WOULD PISS VEGGIE FANS OFF, IN FACT IT WOULD PISS EVERYONE OFF, I NO I WOULD B PISSED OFF, I WOULD EITHER BE SHAKING FROM UTTER FEAR, HUMILATION TO GOT TO SUCH A CAMP, OR ANGER
Yajorobe… now what can I say… it would bug everyone…
King Yemma…. NO COMMENT
Ox King… umm he came along for the ride
Saiyaman: FOR THE PURE FACT THAT IT IS EVIL TO MAKE SUCH A GORGEOUS CHARACTER LIKE GOHAN INTO A GINYU FORCE WANNABE, AND I WANT HIM BLOWN UP
Bubbles: THE SUPREME THING TO PISS VEGETA OFF, I MEAN I CAN JUST SEE HIS FACE IF HE WAS TOLD THAT A MONKEY BEAT HIM
Dende with a wig: He for the plain fact that I like Dende… and I reckon he’d make a good camp leader… but he didn’t have hair so I improvised.
Mr. Popo without his turban: REVENGE! I MEAN ALL THOSE YEARS WORKING FOR KAMI AND NOW EVERYONE WILL GET HIS OR HER COMEUPPENCE… SORRY MY BRAIN’S WORKING IN OVERTIME, I NEEDED TO THINK UP AND EVIL PLAN AND THIS IS IT APPARENTLY
Brolly: um I don’t know
Turlus: Heh KAKAROT LOOK A LIKE DIE… ANOTHER VEGGIE PISS OFF MOMENT
Chibi Gohan: Aw I can just imagine us all stuck in a classroom doing math cos that’s all chibi Gohan knows… and it would piss Vegeta off, and it would be sooo cute.
Oh and if you couldn’t tell I really want to piss Vegeta off, I reckon I could get away with it, ‘cos I am sooo sweet and nobody can stay mad with me… and I just rule.
Twitch: Someone is too full of themselves
Arty: well I like getting smart to Veggie, I do a lot with S’rac… I asked Vegeta what’s his favourite colour, and he said what do you care? And I said Im allowed 2, that’s why, and he said, grrr........blue, and I said me 2, and then I asked if that’s why he wears blue spandex a lot... I’m guessing he wasn’t very impressed.
Taigore: It would have been funny if he had blasted you to kingdom come.
Arty: No it wouldn’t because you would cease to exist, so HA, Newho I got 2 jet, ‘cos I’m busy so I’ll catch ya later, Ciao 4 now, lots of hugs, all my love.
Arty | Reviewed By: Saiyan Genius [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2002 23:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oH YEAH i just thought i'd point out that i adore Goku he's soooo sweet and noble...and cute and trusting...and sexy...did i say that...newho...i thought i'd say that...im still sick though...so this isn't long...yeah so i like Goku...he's cool, i thought about this when i was in bed last night...when i was wearing my Buffy pj's...
Newho...yeah i'll write more later
Lots of hugs (or there will be in the future)
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