| "Crossing Paths Arc" Reviews/Comments [ 45 ] |
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Reviewed By: priscel **HI** On: July 13, 2004 15:20 CDT
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Dang they're in quite a situation.
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Title: at Ch. 29
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 11:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I discovered this fic last night when I couldn't sleep and read ALL NIGHT!!!! Wonderful!. I really like what you did about Duo not growing, when all the others did. It really made for some interesting character conflict. Great romance, too. But Wu Fei bald!?!?!?!?! LOL! Dunno about that bit. Glad you've decided to add more. I think I am. If you kill them off all bets are off.
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 00:35 CDT
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"Definition of Gundam Pilot," indeed. But GAH! What a cliffie! Growl! Great action scenes and space battle, but please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Dyna D On: July 13, 2004 00:12 CDT
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Talk about a cliff hanger. Hurry... get the next part out.
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: July 12, 2004 23:02 CDT
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Rating(s): Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I know this review should be longer ..But I'm really in a hurry ,So I'll just say I red this chapter and really liked it and please update again soon so I can read more...Thank you for updating...
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: June 14, 2004 19:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great please update again soon...
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Reviewed By: RaceUlfson@pacbell.net On: June 13, 2004 01:52 CDT
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Love this fic, have loved it since the beginning and all through the painful parts. Still loving it with Heero trying to teach Duo his value and strengths. Thank you for the upbeat end to the chapter!
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2004 13:53 CDT
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Ah, was wondering when Heero would offer to be uke. And it did give Duo a hell of a morale boost...just not in the way Heero intended. Lol, I love the phrase 'don't go for the throat when you can only bite their ankles'! And I also love the image of Duo standing, gaping, in the corridor with the lube in one hand and his wrench still in the other. And the lemon of course...*mrowr* Next chapter please!
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Reviewed By: Dyna D On: June 12, 2004 11:58 CDT
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Great chapter and it looks like there's some adventure ahead. Sorry about ff.net. My friend, Swordy, also had all her stories removed and was quite upset about it. It's their loss and I'm so glad you're still updating your stories. You're the best!
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 13:00 CDT
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Yikes, angsty moment there! Poor Heero must feel really helpless. Of course Duo's not having a party either! Hmm, you ARE going to give us a nice ending with this, right?
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Reviewed By: AnimeDuneJediElf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2004 21:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sighs* I'm so happy that you've updated this fic. *|Mari|*
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: May 17, 2004 19:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You sure have updated a lot of stories.. And thay are all great .. This one to... keep up the great work and writing and update again soon...
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Reviewed By: Dyna Dee On: May 17, 2004 18:40 CDT
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Nothing comes easy for Duo, does it? I love this story!
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Reviewed By: Destiny's Lot [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2004 22:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a well thought out story, very well written and intriging. Favorite part: The way Duo was written. I really like the way you write Duo and heero in all your stories. The personalities are very well defended. Ja ne
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Reviewed By: Shattered Dreams [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2004 04:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*grins* so very happy that you're still adding chapters to this story. Its amazing that you have managed to keep the story line straight and keep all of the character's feelings and attitudes throughout the whole story. Kudos to you! I spent so long looking for this story because I wanted to read it again and it turned out I could have just gone to 'favourites authors' and saved myself a whole heap of grief!^_^
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