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"Crossing Paths Arc" Reviews/Comments [ 45 ]
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 Reviewed By: AnimeDuneJediElf [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 21, 2004 00:04 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I loved this story, simply loved it! *|Mari|*
 Reviewed By: Ep-chan  On: April 12, 2004 18:23 CDT
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
HEY!!! Will you also do a wedding scene!!?? i would love to see (imagine) the two of them getting married in this fic
 Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 10, 2004 17:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ok a proper review (^_^). It goes without saying what my rating of this story is, I'm just so pleased... happy... bouncing in my chair like the little monkey I am that you are continuing this fic. I've read so many of your fics and I enjoyed rereading it to get my mind back in focus on this particular situation for Duo and Heero. Gosh, I remember how shocked I was that they could do such a horrible thing like that to Duo and then the use his cross to control him (I really wanna bop that Relena twit). The throes of emotion and the shifts in Duo's confusion, the damn torment and pain that no-one would believed him, everyone wanted to use him (evil bastards, excluding g-boys and those working in his favor although I was a bit peeved that they didn't let him completely in on the infiltration op). Sooo much I could say but I'll refrain and Just look forward to this particular fic's continuation. So will you keep adding to this fic or in time, separate into a sequel fic? Yea a pretty obvious answer but ya neva know! (^_^) Keep the pen to the paper or fingers to the keys, because you're making them sing and I like the beat.
 Reviewed By: PATTY 40  On: April 09, 2004 15:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
Rating(s): Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I'm still reading and enjoying this story..You keep writing and I'll keep reading... We beleave you are the best because you are the best...Update again soon please...TTFN ^_~
 Reviewed By: Dyna Dee  On: April 08, 2004 21:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
^_^ You have no idea how happy you've made me today. I'm so glad you've decided to pick this story up again. I think the adventures of the tiger and waif are about to get very interesting. How the heck are you keeping your many story lines straight? You amaze me!
 Title: (^_^) >>>proud to be a member of the Kracken fan club (^_^)
Reviewed By: priscilla (priscel)  On: April 08, 2004 20:40 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great fic!! (throws confetti in the air) And you're continuing it...YAHOO!!! can't wait for next update!!
 Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 08, 2004 20:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
You're continuing this?! Wow you're sure making me a happy bunny! This and 'Princes and Soldiers' are two of my favourites of your fics, and you're adding to both *dazzle* Nice (re)start. I really like this variant of Heero and Duo. The former like a force of nature, the latter damn tough too, but hampered by his past, by his perceived inadequacies (which are kinda thrown into sharp focus if you're hanging with Heero Yuy whoever you are). Their's a slight unbalance in their relationship - at least as perceived by Duo - which you highlight admirably in this chapter. I hope this will be addressed? ANd how many more chapters of this can we hope for?
 Reviewed By: Shattered Dreams [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 23, 2004 14:18 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*sniff* that's so beautiful! Excellent story if I do say so myself, which I do. But I can't for the life of me figure out why the hell you only have 7 reviews. Has the whole GW fandom been brainwashed by cheesy romances and clichès to recognise a great fic when the 7 see one?! Oy, I need a drink......
 Reviewed By: Ridertz  On: February 01, 2004 20:17 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great fic, moving story.
 Reviewed By: black beauty  On: October 10, 2003 02:06 CDT
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
That was... Wow! It was a great fanfic. Full of emotion and a great happy ending. I loved it so much that I read it all in one seating. Everything was awesome. Keep up the great job!!
 Reviewed By: Cattu  On: April 13, 2003 07:06 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*sob* AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!
so sweet!!!
Great fanfic as usual, sappy ending but hey, it worked for me!

As usual great character development and interaction, very easy to sympathise with the characters and it's interesting to see a different type of Duo, weak and needy- at least at first although I have to say that I prefer Shinigami Duo, but interesting nonetheless. Heero great!!! *glomp* big kudos for nice, romantic Heero ^_^

Have to say ending felt a bit TOO neat, would be nice to see what happens to them after escape but that’s just me being greedy!

*huggles* well done once again! xXx
 Reviewed By: Lethanon [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 11, 2003 23:08 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
FINALLY! It took me three whole nights to finish this monster! lol. But it was worth it. The story in this was simpy mindblowing. You kept hold of all the intricacies in the plot perfectly and kept the suspense going all the way. Its a massive piece of work, and while the start had me thumping my head on the table, and the ending was a little fast and I had tor ead it twice, it was possibly one of the best fics I've read, and I've read a damn lot. lol. *hugs and kisses and hands you roses* well done,. (I give nines as a rule, so smile!)
 Reviewed By: Robofetus0 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 12, 2003 23:09 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I have been glued to your fanfic for the better part of the day. Everyone and their aunt is going to be angry with me for being on the internet all day, but I just couldn't stop reading. What an engaging story! Without a doubt the best Gundam Wing continuation fic I've ever read.
 Reviewed By: Storm_410 [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 05, 2003 20:24 CST
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Well, that was was long. Took me 3 days to finish and my eyes are SORE! But it was well worth it. The story er... arcs are great. I feel bad for the poor doctor though. He died saving Duo. Poor guy. :(
 Reviewed By: Claudia  On: January 03, 2003 15:51 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Why hasn't anyone else reviewed this? This fic was WONDERFUL!! Seriously good stuff you guys! Read it! Now!
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