| "Path of Seduction" Reviews/Comments [ 100 ] |
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Reviewed By: Chibichibikawaii(too lazy to log in) On: September 27, 2004 22:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mmmm....What a yummy chapter!!! It was beautiful!!! I can't wait to read more!!!! (I would write more, as usual, but my nails are wet...)
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Reviewed By: Messiah of Darkness On: September 27, 2004 19:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is by far one of the best fanfictions I have ever read. This story is so beautiful with the right amount of each element. You managed to write an excellent lemon without turning it into a complete, full-blown sex scene. Overall, beautifully written and I hope you continue writing.
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Title: Wow...
Reviewed By: Echan2 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 21:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now, I'm not one for Aerith/Sephiroth couplings... but this one is might damn fine! I simply adore this fanfic! I've been trying to keep up with you and also, I was too lazy to sign in to properly review. ^^;;; Gomen! But, I love the way you write everything. I could actually 'feel' Aerith's anger in Chapter Sixteen. I'd be pissed off too! Continue the great work! Echan ^_~
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Reviewed By: swtlil_azn On: September 03, 2004 18:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww... this is such a GREAT story!!! i love it! you're such a great writer, and i love how you use so much detail... it's just awesome! anyways, great job, and i hope u update soon, im just dying with suspense to see wat happens next!
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Title: yay!
Reviewed By: chibichibikawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2004 23:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter, as usual! I can't wait to see what Aeris is going to do to Sephiroth!!! Oh, the suspense is killing me!! But I have to admit I do feel bad for Aeris, I had a feeling Sephiroth was going to come up with some lame excuse for ditching her. Well, I can't wait for the next chapter!!! Oh, and about the featured fanfic thing, I hope you get in! If anyone deserves it, it's you!
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Reviewed By: Seph groupie On: July 12, 2004 05:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok i will! *Spanks sephiroth* *spank* *spank* *spank* *spank* spank*
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Reviewed By: chibichibikawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2004 21:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, That was absolutely the most beautiful thing I have ever read. Seriously, I don't think I have ever read something that took my breath away like that. Yet, I still feel bad because I have a bad feeling either Sephiroth or Aeris is going to mess this beautiful relationship up. Please please, I beg of you please, prove me wrong! ~I suppose sleeping with Sephiroth is like sleeping with a tame tiger. He looks perfectly calm and peaceful, yet you can't help but notice that he has the ability to kill you at any instant.~
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Reviewed By: Emochick On: June 03, 2004 13:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely beautiful. Amazing style, I must stay. Perfect retelling and attention to the game's little intricate details, all the while skillfully weaving in your own little twists. And you present it in a perfectly feasible manner, it doesn't seem far-fetched whatsoever. It's brilliant. Especially the last chapter. Don't get me wrong, I LOVE the Aeris and Sephiroth scenes... but you present the energy and flow of the planet, and Aeris herself so well. If you aren't a spiritual person (not religious, SPIRITUAL), I'd be surprised. Isn't it amazing how closely the powers of the Centra reflect what we all are capable of? Well, except for the materializing elements thing. That would be pretty sweet. :) I'd be setting people's heads on fire all the time though, so I guess it's a good thing. Add me to the mailing list, I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm going through withdrawal even now. emochicknc@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: Devilchu On: April 14, 2004 06:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is absolutely stunning...brilliant!! O_O I think it's the best Aeris/Sephiroth fanfic I've ever read. You describe them so perfectly. I could read for days if only there was more to read. ^_~ Now I'm going to sketch a little..this story gave me some inspiration for a good drawing. =^.^= Keep up the good work! =D
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Reviewed By: SweetEvil On: March 29, 2004 22:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is fantastic! It's hard to find well written Final Fantasy 7 fiction.. especially ones revolving around Aeris. I find the pairing with Sephiroth plausible and explained wonderfully. I'm nervous about how it ends up and hoping you veer away from the story line of the game when it comes Aeris' death. I'd hate to see her die- it was bad enough in the game and it'd be worse in your wonderful fiction. I'd love to be on your mailing list so I know when the next chapter is out! (sweetevyl@yahoo.com) I eagerly await the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Elzar On: March 07, 2004 18:23 EST
Comment/Review:
Not bad.
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Reviewed By: sneakyknave On: January 22, 2004 14:16 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a very beautiful story, but the waiting for the next chapters would be killing me. Please write on as soon as possible !
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Reviewed By: Ai Yuukan On: November 05, 2003 21:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very well done! Beautiful! I like the story about the 'darkness'... Is Aeris still going to die? If she does it'll be so sad... Sephiroth and Aeris are the perfect couple... please write more soon! Thank you for such a wonderful read!
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Reviewed By: Raye3k On: September 21, 2003 12:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a beautiful story..........please keep posting! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Leena On: July 29, 2003 01:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, the manner in which you describe their love is amazing. The recent chapters have simply taken my breath away. I always look forward to reading your fanfic; I may have said this before, but you are a fantastic writer. I can't wait for the next chapter. ^_^ |
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