| "Sculpted In Gold" Reviews/Comments [ 43 ] |
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Reviewed By: ssj2notz [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2005 09:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please?
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Reviewed By: candygirl On: February 06, 2005 01:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!!!!!!! If I could've rated this 11's I really would have!!!!!! I've never read a Frieza era ficcy that feels like it takes place in such a vast world/ universe as this story does!! I usually hate original character fics, but this one is amazing! Your lemons are devastatingly good and you just can't help feeling sorry and scared for that poor Empress Shinesta!!!! Frieza is a real bastard in your story- I mean you have managed to paint him as an even worse tyrant than any other fic I've ever read does- and yet because you wrote it so well I believe that it's really happening- it doesn't feel like fanfiction because you have such amazing focus and style! plus you write Vegeta better than most people too. All in all I just wanna say.... WRITE MORE!!!!!! I gotta see how this ends!!!!
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: August 03, 2004 19:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Glad to see an update, and hopefully you can keep that "Forbidden Encounter" story and it's sequel going till it's finished.
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Reviewed By: Severina [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2004 18:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know how much of a fan I am of your work honey and this chapter was no exception. The details were great and I love how the plot thickens with the Empress's revelation that she's going to have to end it. That makes me sad but I don't see any other way out of her situation with Frieza. Oh, and can I borrow Raya in my personal life? I think I really need her to work a little bit of her magic and find me a man! LOL :)
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2003 20:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay...I know it's been a while. You can flog me later. But as for right now, I just didn't realize what a awesome piece this is! I forgot the actual story line so I read it from chapter one today! The Originality of this piece is... off the chain, and that's a good thing. :) And even though I'm not a fan of any frieza stories, this one has sparked my interest and you have done very well! Continue to write honey, and may the muses keep you inspired! :) gg
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Reviewed By: | On: October 13, 2003 23:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait for the lemons. Plz do Radditz first!
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Reviewed By: Malystryx On: October 13, 2003 12:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
Absolutely wonderful... pulling Napa into the whole.. love Thing. great stuff, chica. Interested to see how things go more for Vegeta and Shani though.
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2003 21:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woot!!! Jeez girl, I fell out of my chair when I saw that you had updated! :) Ugh - I wish Vegeta and Shani would just find a big bush and get it over with - that UST is driving me (and them) nuts. I liked the interactions between Raya and Radditz/Napa; hn... I wish I really knew a matchmaker like that! O.o Woo hoo - Napa's going to get some! I think this is the first time I've ever read that in a fanfic! ;) So come on, sweetie, you aren't going to take as long for the next update, are you? :(
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Reviewed By: Demetz On: July 07, 2003 23:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please, please update, its been more than a month and I really want to read another chapter of this. Please Update? |
Reviewed By: Malystryx On: July 02, 2003 22:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. Please, continue writing more!!! I can't wait to see the rest of the party. ;) |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2003 00:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
I was so glad to see that you had updated, Lady V! I had waited so long to see that idiot gladiator get what he deserved... >:D
It was also sweet to give us just a hint of Vegeta/Shani... no wait, that wasn't sweet - that was downright mean of you! :(
I hope we'll see a bit more action between the betrothed in the next chapter.
(Hey, y'all, do you think that was subtle enough?) |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2003 23:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Those two are adorable. O_o Never thought I'd use that word to describe Veg-head! Anyway, great job. |
Reviewed By: Shiva-kun [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2003 00:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nicely done. Can't wait for the upcoming fight scene. I suppose the only thing that would have made this better would be MediaMiner being faster, but then that can't be helped. Anyway, thank you for the beautiful story, and keep it up! |
Reviewed By: butterflyV On: April 10, 2003 18:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, what ever happened to your "Random Lemons" set of stories?! |
Reviewed By: Kalea2882 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2003 23:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!! |
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