| "Forbidden Encounter" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
Title: What a treat...
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2011 08:26 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lady V, I was feeling nostalgic today and got to re-read this incredible story. The frist couple of chapters that I contributed aren't anything compared to yours! You truly embraced this story and made it your own. I really miss writing now, so busy with school. But I just wanted you to know how much I appericate your writing and your continued friendship over the years. And I do hope you will continue this story one day! Take care and keep up the awesome work!!!! ~g |
Reviewed By: 31bravo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2009 19:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sorta new to fanfics but this one is really good and I really like the direction it's going,are you finished with it or will you come back?. I know it's been awhile but could you update soon?
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Title: in short...
Reviewed By: dreamkid21 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2005 14:45 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just had to let you know that I am loving this story. I can't wait to read on.
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Title: wierd nm
Reviewed By: stryderf0 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2005 01:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok so for some reasen i cant e-mail you ,,,,,whatever but i did like the story so,,,,,,,,,ya whats up with that
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Reviewed By: oddone88 On: February 16, 2004 00:19 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic is excellent dont listen to haters... chichi and goku were destined to break up eventually and its great that you took that note and ran with it. keep up the great work
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: September 24, 2003 06:25 EDT
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If it's true that you stopped writing this fic because of people's opinions, it's a real shame. I hope you can continue with this one, cause I'd hate to see this one end up on the floor.
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Reviewed By: dragonzmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2003 00:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you, Lady V! This awesome ficcie's gettin' continued!! (If some intelligent,*snort* peeps don't like a fic, why the bleep would they read it!) Odd pairings- gotta love 'em!! Been waiting for this one!!! ^_^
Take care, Gokusgirl!! The fanfiction world loves you! ^*^ |
Reviewed By: Zodiac On: August 23, 2003 12:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has to be one of my favorite DBZ fanfics. I don't care about the unconventional theme, but I enjoy your style of writing and fleshing out your characters. You've given life to one of dragon balls most prominent character, and in doing so done much more than make a goku/oc story. Keep doing what you feel is right with this story, and stay true to the storyline you started with. Don't let fans ramblings change your "voice". But anyway great story, I love the entire setting, and keep up the great work. (Even if Vegeta is stronger than Goku.) ;) |
Reviewed By: IzAzEL On: July 18, 2003 03:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For the life of me I cannot see why you seased production on this particular fan fiction. The fire and passion contained within your writings nearly braught me to tears at some points and most definatly caused me to cum at others. The descriptive magesty of your gramatical form created in my mind images of heated perfection the likes of which rarely are seen. Its too bad you stoped writing on this titalating tale I would have loved to see the outcome. Besides I always loved stories that got into the sayin mating instincts, the way they envoke a sence of romanticism rarely found in this modern world. You truely must continue writing on this most promising epic. |
Reviewed By: butterflyV On: June 13, 2003 07:59 EDT
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Hope you can update soon. |
Reviewed By: butterflyV On: April 16, 2003 06:02 EDT
Comment/Review:
Great work. I must say I totally agree with Angel Wing's comments in her review about the situation you've written Goku in, and in certain ways the readers who totally love DBZ could see your story as an example of what NOT to do in a relationship that's bound to fail. You see that heartbreaking situation almost everyday, so what's the point of going through it yourself! |
Reviewed By: Angel Wings On: March 31, 2003 17:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really great fic! I like how Vegeta chastizes Goku(Kakarott) for even getting into a loveless marriage in the first place. If your not in deep committed love with your other, then don't bind yourself to them! Look at what's happening to Goku. (it makes me think about my marriage, but I know we're ment to be)Although you gotta make sure that Goku lets his sons know that their birth was not a mistake and it was never their fault in the first place. (If you don't I'll cry) NE ways, again, GREAT FIC! I can't wait for the next update. And to you flaimers, I'm sorry if you are experianceing a similar situation like this but don't let that make you hate this fic. This story has a very important message in it and it's a must read. |
Reviewed By: Cora [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2003 15:39 EST
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Wow...Lady V that was a great chapter. If anyone gives you bullshit about writing bout divorce in this story., they are immature ^^ I write about suicide and depression in my stories quite a bit, because it's something people just can't understand sometimes...um that didn't sound right O_O
Lovely chapter! You write awsome, as always ^_^
~Kala |
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2003 14:17 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Outstanding! I finally left an update!
LadyV you're doing a super job on this...and this chapter was indeed hard to write, divorse is a hard topic to discuss not only in fanfiction, but in real life as well. It does effect everyone. But anyway...great job on working on my 'baby', you really give it justice! Well I'm off to read some more...which I would have read a while ago today but MM.org is loading so slow...grr... |
Reviewed By: little_ninjin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2002 15:39 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to wonder about people who get worked up over fictional anime characters making the make with other fictinal characters they aren't "married" to. Emphasis on fictional. laughing as i read anonymous "oh please :o("'s "review." this is a great ff! I luv it! Expeshalleee the lemons!
Thankyou for telling me about your othe rGoku/ noncc fic gokusgirl! Thanks for picking the story up, Lady V!
And THANK GOD for "odd couples." the same ole same ole is boring. |
Reviewed By: butterflyV On: November 16, 2002 03:41 EST
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Hey, what happened to the continuation to this story, the one where Goku and Jenna are still together, Bra asks her father to teach her how to fight, Pan suffers from withdrawl simptoms and Vegeta plans to take off into space with his family to find the one Pan is bonded to?
Where did it go, I've been trying to find it on other sites. |
Reviewed By: Reese On: November 14, 2002 10:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story, but damn that Jenna character reminds me of that bitch my dad ditched us for! Even still, it's a great fic. |
Reviewed By: butterflyV On: November 12, 2002 19:40 EST
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Please update this soon girl!!! |
Reviewed By: butterflyV On: October 15, 2002 20:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really great story... even if it has that whole infidelity thing, because it's something I'm against.
Please don't think that I'm writing this just to browbeat you over that because I'm not. This is your story afterall, and what you choose to write in it is entirely your choice.
Even though that's in there, there are other things about this story that I've found quite enjoyable to read - especially about how possessive Vegeta is to Bulma and shows just how much he adores her, even if he does it in front of Goku, and how Vegeta is determined to set things right by educating Goku about his saiyan heritage and making him take part in saiyan customs like the hunt. I hope you get to write in a few more saiyan customs for the couples to take part in.
But the thing I like the most about Vegeta and the whole concept of his saiyan race is that they take matters (like the love deep-rooted love he shares with Bulma and the love of his son) a lot more seriously than humans do, and how his honour and dedication to training obviously flows into anything that he does. That is something you rarely see in the world and I think it's rather sad. |
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2002 22:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lord Child! Every time I read this it so damn hot! Very good Lady V, as always you know. It's just such a shame that no one hardly reviews around here...sigh...
Well I'm off to read some more! Laters! |
Reviewed By: HunBun On: October 14, 2002 09:53 EDT
Comment/Review:
Your story is so stupid!EVERY1 KNOWS THAT GOKU AND CHICHI WILL ALWAYS BE TOGETHER! I read this dumb story on ff.net and i don't kno why you bothered putting it here. |
Reviewed By: The reviewer On: October 06, 2002 18:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is rather good, but I was more interested in finding out what happens to Gohan than Goku and Jenna. |
