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Reviewed By: Shadur On: November 06, 2002 03:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Glad to see Grey for once *not* getting the short spiky end of the stick slammed into his groin and other vulnerable parts repeatedly, to mangle a metaphor.
(theory: Isn't this also the first fic where the Phoenix Mage didn't make an appearance? Not that he means ill, but between Grey's customary bad luck and Jared's incredible good luck it's always the latter coming up 6 and the former coming up 0, with a six-sided die...)
anyways, kudos to one of my favorite authors for another highly enjoyable fic. I can't wait to see what you're going to tackle next. :) |
Reviewed By: hmswhitestar On: November 02, 2002 00:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kudos Metro another wonderful fanfic, with most of the loose threads being resolved nicely. A minor quibble with the fact that I thought Frost, Sugar and Spice where chasing Ryouga and Sash/Bane Na and Azure were chasing Ranma, well I guess in all the weirdness stuff chould have gotten confused. I wonder how the "other" Senshi and Hotaru work out with work out with Grey, perhaps some of the souls that entered the replacement Senshi would be parts of Senshi that Grey loved and cared for in the past, the not senshi of the 2nd labor, the dragon senshi of the 3 labor and the lost fiancess of the 4 labor, hmmm. Maybe this is Project Payback, just a thought (that I have been keeping to myself since I started reading this). Anyway this has been a very entertaining read and I have really enjoyed Grey and his misadventures, and I hope you don't retire him, he is a lot of fun and a character I can certainly relate to. Hopefully this is not the end.
HMS White Star |
Reviewed By: Piccolo181 On: November 01, 2002 21:17 CST
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Funny. I especially liked the idea of a Tuxedo Turtle mecha.
So grey finally completed one of his trials. Now into Vandread?.... That will *not* be pretty.
I can't wait. |
Reviewed By: zRX278 On: November 01, 2002 14:18 CST
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That was... Wow. Great. Fantastic. You've still got my number one arthor spot. Probably a little higher now. There had better be a sequal, though, or you'll just go back to number one. |
Reviewed By: Skyfox On: November 01, 2002 08:14 CST
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Yay! Grey got a happy ending.. ^_^ And he got Hotaru! |
Reviewed By: CRose [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2002 08:01 CST
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You ended it? AGHAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!! (Sobs) I loved it, you better have another one of these in the works ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Gneryu On: November 01, 2002 05:49 CST
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o_O
Did I read well?!? Grey, for once, doesn't end up screwed at least forty times over?!?
^^ Joke asides, still a vry well done chapter, nice characterisation of how Haruka could accept that Grey is not Evil incarnate. Speaking of which, I would have liked to see the reaction of Warnas to see the god of this dimension going at war like that. Maybe beating his head on a wall for letting Grey live when people like Thor come knocking on his door? ^^ |
Reviewed By: CRose [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2002 01:30 CST
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Baseball? What is a dragon's idea of Baseball? This should be pretty interesting indeed, can't wait to see more of this. o_O |
Reviewed By: Jenova Silverstar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2002 12:08 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy shades of Urusei Yatsura! *roflmao* Perfect! |
Reviewed By: CRose [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2002 19:13 CDT
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Sailor Moon Transport: Moon Wing Minivan
A minivan? -_^ HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!! I don't know why, but that just fits her for some reason. HAHAHAHAHAH!!! |
Reviewed By: Bob On: October 23, 2002 16:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
best fanfic series ever |
Reviewed By: Rodon On: October 23, 2002 11:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can just see Venus act like that in the subway car. *snicker* Now for Grey's position to come into the light. I wounder if Juria with the princesses will become involed, after all the King of Juria will want a strong relation a equally powerful empire. ^_^;; |
Reviewed By: CRose [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2002 10:58 CDT
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...^_^...
I like it! More, more! Mars next :) |
Reviewed By: zRX278 On: October 22, 2002 01:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, another fine chapter. Keep up the good work. I enjoy reading and rereading most all your works. |
Reviewed By: CRose [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2002 21:56 CDT
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Great new chapter, I can't wait to see what happens next. This just gets more and more interesting ^_^ |
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