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| "The Legend of Link: Lucky Number 13" Reviews/Comments [ 330 ] | | Pages (22): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Title: Another awesome chapter
Reviewed By: Daimyo On: February 19, 2006 20:15 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't review often, but I have followed this story since the beggining and have had this story bookmarked for what seems like years, checking every day for updates and re-reading old chapters all the time; this is by far the best Legend of Zelda story ever written. Now that thats out of the way, another excellent chapter; I loved the unexpected shift to Dark Link and the idea of a shadow living inside Link for all his journeys feeding off fear: a truly imaginative and innovative concept. I can't wait until the next chapter to see what happens to the universe without Fate and Destiny and to see what the Gods and Goddesses do about Link's newfound power.
| Title: Merick Zann
Reviewed By: Merrick Zann [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2006 19:57 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU SON OF A BITCH!!!!!!!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OR SHOULD I SAY OH MY LINK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I SPENT MONTHS OF PLAYING THAT GODDAMN GAME TO FIGURE THAT OUT AND IT WAS DARK LINK!!!!!!!!!!! NO... DARK LINK WOULD BE TOO EASY!!!!!!!!!!!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I BOW BEFORE MY MASTER. PLEASE PARDON THIS POOR FOOL'S IGNORANCE. I BEG OF YOU. Absolutly perfect in every way. I think I love you. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! -Merrick Zann
| Reviewed By: SilentPredator [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2006 19:42 PST
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...Wow. I think I may have to reread the earlier parts, because a lot of that went over my head. I like the idea of the demonic being in Link. The conversation between the two was fun to read. I hope there is more of it in the future chapters. I wonder though, where does it go from here? Is Link's daughter really gone? What about all those people that died? What will Link's role be in the grand order of things?
| Reviewed By: LokiNishizaki On: February 19, 2006 18:44 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I tried to lower the score a little, just to make it seem like I had put more thought into it. I couldn't. Anything else doesn't do this fic justice. It's simply the best fic I've ever read. Bar none. And I've been reading fics for the last 7 years. It's hard to describe explain just how much I love this story, but if it's any indication, I check for updates once a day. The fic's true greatness come from it's characters, especially Link. Link himself may not consider himself a Hero, but I do. He's the most realistic hero I've ever encountered. He perfectly personifies the fact that to defeat the evil, you must commit evil. You can't defeat evil with good, it doesn't work like that. And the sarcasm, I can't forget the sarcasm. I could go on and on about what I like about the story, but it really wouldn't do much more. I'm waiting for the ending to this story, there shouldn't be many chapters left. Congratulations on a fantastic adventure.
| Reviewed By: I Come Anon(ymously) On: February 10, 2006 20:18 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just to prove that your story is anything but forgotten, I've been reading it since about chapter 13 way back in the day before Xing buckled like a belt and decided nc-17 fics were bad for ff.net. The first few chapters annoyed me, seeing that it was a Nabooru fic (even though I knew what I was getting into from the start) when I was looking for something more along the lines of Link/Malon, but it kind of grew on me as I progressed through later chapters. Later, I realized that it was about the only damned Nabooru/Link story out there and that it was good, especially compared to so many others. So I've been reading and waiting (im)patiently since then for the next update. After finding out that you'd written Outlaw Star and Tenchi Muyo stories, I read those as well and loved what I found. So yeah, your stuff is great and there are still people reading... and waiting on the next update. Speaking of which, the Tenchi fic could use some attention... but I know how hard it is to balance a job, school, and still find time for writing, so no pressure from me. I'm not one of those bitchy reviewers screaming like mad for updates every five seconds or I WILL HAVE BLOOD. *ahem* In short: keep up the good work, try not to lose sight of what you're working on and let yourself get too distracted (which is the case with me), and above all else... don't push yourself too hard on a project like getting out a new chapter just for the sake of making someone else happy. That's the quickest way I know of to breed resentment towards your readers and/or reviewers, and anyone else demanding things of you. So, good luck getting the next chapter out. I'll be waiting.
| Reviewed By: shatter the sky comes quietly On: February 10, 2006 11:40 PST
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WOO-HOOO, an update!!! I was hoping you wouldn't give this up!! The shadow-dude sounds like Dark Link, but that was just a creation of Gannondorf...right? Have to admit, this story DOES get a little confusing at times, but I've enjoyed it from the first pages. Looking forward to the next update!
| Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: KurayaminoVariant [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2006 23:53 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Best written fic I've ever read. Awesome style, with shifting perspectives adding a lot to the feel. It gives it an almost cinematic quality. Never in a million years did I think that someone could take a game with such a relatively simple story and turn it into a full length novel epic. Delving into the psychology and life of a man with near infinite power but proportionally extraordinarily limited mental capacity makes for an astounding story, and because the world was a little contrived in the game, it makes it all the more believable that it was really contrived by these gods. I've throughly enjoyed this story, and I fully believe that with some editing it would be publishable. Looking forward to the next chapter.
| Reviewed By: saldeas On: February 09, 2006 09:54 PST
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Nice as always. Can't wait to see more
| Reviewed By: Norton Porter On: February 08, 2006 20:56 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been reading and checking in on this fanfic since chapter three, maybe chapter four; maybe even chapter 2. I didn't feel like reviewing at the time... So, no, there is one more reader you haven't chased off... He just hasn't reviewed yet. So why review now? Because I resolved myself to do so, thinking this the last chapter. But it isn't... and thank goodness for that. This is the longest, most well-written I've ever read, and even though when I found it I was looking for mindless sex, I was surprised to find something that goes beyond anything I could have imagined a fanfic having. It appeals to the side of me that is the Zelda fanatic, and the side that is the avid reader. It is, in my eyes, the ultimate fanfic: it takes the ideas of another, the stories told by someone else, and shifts and bends them until they resemble something that can only be called their own. An example of this would be the logic added to the land of Hyrule. Hyrule didn't need logic to be the setting for one of the greatest games in history; but when logic was added to it, it became more fleshy. Switching between first- and third-person narrative, while confusing when done by other authors (myself included), is successfully pulled off by you. The drama, the action, all of it... I can't get enough. So if this amount doesn't keep you writing this, then nothing will. Keep up the good work, and if you ever decide to write anything outside of fanfiction, know that it will be a best seller.
| Reviewed By: froop [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2006 01:39 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sexy as always good sir.
| Reviewed By: Long term fan :D yay On: February 05, 2006 19:06 PST
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Ahhhhh I love it I love it I love it! I can't wait until the next chapter.
| Title: What the hell?
Reviewed By: Neo-Shadow On: February 04, 2006 21:53 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just so you know, I have been reading your story for a long time. I just now decided to review (How nice of me, huh?) You have been doing a WONDERFUL job. Each chapter I read causes so much emotional joy, I cannot think of any happier days. This lastest chapter has gotten on the edge of my seat, wondering what the hell is going to happen next. I had just finished your Author note and I must say that I have no words to describe what I am think or feeling. I just cannot think of where you will take this story next. I simply love everything you have done with this. This is what writing is all about. Continue what you are doing, because it seems to be what you do best. Now, if you excuse me, I must go change my pants for I have shit myself.
| Reviewed By: SilentPredator [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2006 20:42 PST
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So Link has finally snapped and is about to destroy all his enemies. All I can say is: it's about time. Looking forward to more of this. I have to admit though, I was starting to worry that you weren't going to finish this.
| Reviewed By: Valcrist God of protection [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2006 17:41 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice, good to see that Link is back and has the ability to keep on going. --)---- V
| Reviewed By: Laos Sheperd On: September 15, 2005 19:45 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'd like to thank you for giving me a way to spend my free time for the past week and a half. This is one hell of a story. It's great to see an author turning out so much material for so long on one tale like this. Please don't stop anytime too soon, because I look forward to following this saga now that I have found it.
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