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| "The Legend of Link: Lucky Number 13" Reviews/Comments [ 330 ] | | Pages (22): [ « ‹ 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 › » ] | Title: Fate's Sage
Reviewed By: OmniMagi On: November 13, 2003 00:48 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just a few things to say. First, probably expected, is the praise. Don't let me disappoint. Superb fanfic, been following it since Chapter Twelve back on FF.net. Gotten several buddies hooked on it, too. I thoroughly enjoy reading it, and, as odd as it may seem... I take it as what really happens moreso than the games. It is, flat out, the best fanfic I've had the fortune of coming across on the vast internet, and I applaud you. Next, I have to say something to the other people reviewing on here. I know it seems like a compliment to say that this should be made into a movie, or a game. Truth be told, it wouldn't. Almost all of this is introspection on Link's part, and it really wouldn't make a good movie. Sure, the action-scenes, and the sex scenes would be great to see, but, on the whole, the plot is mostly Link's thoughts. A game simply wouldn't exist, based on this. It couldn't. Nevermind the copyright infringements. A published novel wouldn't exist. In case you haven't noticed, this is an NC-17 story based on a PG series. Nintendo would be upset if Mr. E proposed to have it published. No, I think it should remain here, on the net, freely accessable to all who wish to read it. But, there is something to be said. Mr. E., your writing style is very good. Very easy to have something published. The wit, charm, and plot of this, and your other stories, all scream novel. If you could come up with something original, perhaps based on your system of Gods (which I find most interesting), I do believe that it could be published very easily. Anyways, I just felt that this needed to be said, and I apologize to anyone who's offended by what I said, particularly if Mr. E himself is upset. Signing Off, OmniMagi
| Title: NEW CHAPTER!
Reviewed By: Valcrist God of protection [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2003 11:57 PST
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Cool. Good going with the new chapter and the revisements to the other chapters. I like the changes because it made Link's aging seem more dire than it did initially. Hopefully the next chapter will come soon. It does seem to be winding down but hey what do I know? ^^() Though I'm still curious as to weather or not Link is going to stay with Nabooru or Nocturna. It's obvious he loves him both but the godly love thing...oh whatever ^^(). Keep it up and I await the next chapter. V --)----
| Reviewed By: Gopu On: November 10, 2003 10:35 PST
Comment/Review:
Still going good.
| Title: DRod5@msn.com
Reviewed By: DJ Rodriguez On: November 10, 2003 05:56 PST
Comment/Review:
This is getting awesome!! Man, you are one heck of a writer!! I think you should publish this or something, because this is too good to be merely mentioned as a fanfic!! You got talent here, that much is clear! I really enjoyed it all!! Keep it up!
| Reviewed By: earthdrake531 On: November 09, 2003 21:17 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow you tell the story incredably. The cliffhangers are at the right spot and the character developement is incredable. I always look forwad to the updates. Please continue with your excelent work.
| Reviewed By: Gopu On: October 25, 2003 10:05 PDT
Comment/Review:
Another Good Chapter.
| Reviewed By: Gopu On: October 14, 2003 23:16 PDT
Comment/Review:
More great chapters.
| Title: DRod5@msn.com
Reviewed By: DJ Rodriguez On: October 09, 2003 07:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was all good! Thank you so much for the updates, and so many of them! Yes, this is one fanfic that should be either a game or a movie! You got talent here, and I'm glad I got to read it! Please continue with this story! Keep it up! You got my full support on this one!
| Title: odd
Reviewed By: Valcrist God of protection [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2003 19:21 PDT
Comment/Review:
As usual it's good and I remember the chapter pretty well (surprising since I can hardly remember what I had for breakfast -_-()) and I really liked how you had written it. You show that even though Link is a god, his life isn't perfect or by any means smooth. Which makes in intresting. I just want to get to the point where he does the bnig rant and explodes (although it is a little cruel) it still is a major story plot. Well I rambled enough ^^() keep writting. ^_^ V --)----
| Reviewed By: Donkey Kong Song On: September 27, 2003 04:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best Zelda fanfic I have ever read. I have been looking for a Link/Nabooru romance one and when I saw a lemon, I KNEW I was in luck.
| Title: *Sobs*
Reviewed By: Tessa On: August 31, 2003 10:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
.:Awesome story, here! I've been keepping up with it since the beginning, and it continues to get better and better. Link and Nabooru are a phenominal couple, and you've made Link an even more awesome character by giving him godlike powers. But what's this? You haven't updated since July? You're TORTURING all your loyal readers! *Glares daggers* Please update this story again, and soon. I cannot take the suspense! Your story is too wonderful to take to this point, and then drop off into oblivion! Besides, you said you'd be putting out the last 15 chapters in quick succession...I'd love to read them. Please continue to update-- I'm begging you. I'll even promise to leave more comments if you do. *Grins* Take care, and keep up your writing. Your skills are both creative and wonderful. I especially love how you keep the audience involved in the story by having Link talk to them. It enhances the story even more:. | Reviewed By: Gopu On: August 22, 2003 13:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lookink forward to more chapters | Reviewed By: JC On: August 20, 2003 04:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude, it rocks, keep it up! | Reviewed By: X On: August 19, 2003 19:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great work luved the last chapter thought it was funny with the kid link part. dont have to rush with ur work i rather have quality over having a bunch of new chapters that arent good. great work man | Reviewed By: MazokuRanma On: August 10, 2003 21:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this fic has gotten even better since the first time I read it on FF.net. I can't believe they censored the site, talk about hypocritical. Ah well, nothing to be done at this point. Anyway, I love this story, it's one of the greatest pieces of read of fan fiction, not just in the Legend of Zelda category. The plot kept me reading and it's incredibly well written, always a fantastic bonus. My only complaint is that Chapter 37 still isn't out! The suspense is killing me! Keep up the fantastic work, I check back at least 2 or 3 times a week for the updates, and I can't wait to see what happens when Link returns to Gerudo Valley. | | Pages (22): [ « ‹ 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 › » ] |
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