| "The Legend of Link: Lucky Number 13" Reviews/Comments [ 330 ] |
| Pages (22): [ « ‹ 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 › » ] |
Reviewed By: Safus On: December 13, 2002 20:25 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You didn't think I forgot about you, did ya? Well, that is if you remember talking to me on e-mail. Well, I can't say there was an improvement...but it definatly wasn't worse. So.....confused, I cant grasp the concept of it being better than before. In my mind that was an impossibility, but here is the reality in my face. So I think I'm just going to shut up and go into mental meltdown. |
Reviewed By: Shinigami_chan On: December 11, 2002 15:40 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic is a good one, there is only one thing I did not like and that is that you portrayed Zelda as being malevolent and evil, please don't do it again. Other than that the story is good. |
Reviewed By: DJ On: December 07, 2002 11:14 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Link really needs to wake up! Destiny doesn't control him, its the other way around! And also, I hope he and Nabooru hit it off well. Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: reed On: December 05, 2002 09:37 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think you are doing a grest job with this fic and i look forward for future chapters also fuck fanfiction.net for kicking you off. you were their best fanfiction atour there anyway |
Reviewed By: reed On: December 05, 2002 09:37 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think you are doing a grest job with this fic and i look forward for future chapters also fuck fanfiction.net for kicking you off. you were their best fanfiction atour there anyway |
Reviewed By: reed On: December 05, 2002 09:37 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think he is doinga grest job with this fic and i look forward for future chapters also fuck fanfiction.net for kicking you off. you were their best fanfiction atour there anyway |
Reviewed By: Redstreak On: November 22, 2002 12:01 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I used to scorn most lemons. Most of them
were made only as bad versions of a porn script,
but this...this story was in depth, man. Almost
nothing in the damn thing was predictable and
that was what interested me the most. Especially
the curve you threw us just before those a-holes
on FF.net started getting kid friendly.
Your style of writing is the most creative I've
seen yet. You capture the personality and emotion
of every character I've seen so far. I mean, going
through all of Link's mental defects was incredible.
This is the kind of thing that inspires, man. I
can't wait for you to post the new chapters. It's
like waiting for a dub of an anime you've seen in
another language.
Oh well, I've rambled long enough. Keep the good
stuff comin'. |
Reviewed By: Korisovra On: December 06, 2002 15:10 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always, these fics are an interesting read. I can't wait untilyou finish updatig the LOZ fic as well as The Clone Chronicle One. You've improved over the time that I've been reading your fics and as a result they have become clearer, more concise, and less......cluttered, I guess would be the term. Continue with the good work and please do try to finish uploading all these chapters and then perhaps finishing them off. Need any suggestions or someone to bounce your ideas off of, you know where to find me.
Ciao,
Korisovra |
Reviewed By: DJ On: November 13, 2002 08:47 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty sweet fic here! Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Rena On: November 11, 2002 15:25 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a way cool fic. I love the pov on this. I love how you portray Link as something as naive as the game has him as. I am so looking forward to reading more. |
Reviewed By: dark angel of the night [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2002 13:15 PST
Comment/Review:
can you write some more please |
Reviewed By: ahRul On: November 03, 2002 01:17 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Whoa this is good, but i need the rest! Only up to chap4 anit good where can i find the rest? or when is the rest uploaded? |
Reviewed By: CheeseAndCrackers On: October 31, 2002 23:54 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fan from ffn. I agree with AceMan. You don't need the Hentai for this to be a good story. Heck it might even make it more tastfull. Anyway, whatever you decide to do it's a great story. |
Reviewed By: Nexus On: October 30, 2002 21:04 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really cool!!! rite more!!! |
Reviewed By: Valcrist God of protection [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2002 12:51 PST
Comment/Review:
Hello. noticed that Fanfiction.net took off the NC-17 thing. heh heh really like your story from there but now I can't read the next chapters. i mean I read all of the chapters that I knew, 36 or 37 if I remember right. Well jsut wanted to give you another review.
V
--)---- |
| Pages (22): [ « ‹ 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 › » ] |
