| "REPRISAL UNBOUND" Reviews/Comments [ 53 ] |
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Reviewed By: Hunny On: February 03, 2004 17:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please God UPDATE. I know you've got your own life to live but PLEEEEEEEZ. I love the angst and pain in Vegeta,(and yes I'm slightly sick in the head)and he's always best at the bad ass role. Not taht I don't love the tender side too I'm dying to know what he'll do about this situation. And Bulma, OOOOOHH Please Update. Thank You
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Title: saiyajin_supremacy@yahoo.co.uk
Reviewed By: Nasiya( forgot my password) On: December 14, 2003 12:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is getting better and better, although this chapter left me kinid of hopeless. It s really totally original, which is one of the many aspects I admire this story for. Anyhow, I have no idea how this tragedy could turn out to have a happy ending. I hope you ll update soon, this long breakes in between the chapters are slowly driving me insane!!!
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Title: vejita_sei@yahoo.ie
Reviewed By: Neon-Mercury On: December 14, 2003 12:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was really happy ou updated, but this chapter left me so utterly hopeless...I mean, who of the remaining z group should be able to finid out the truth???It seems like Vegeta's and his family's downfall couldn't be stopped. I just hope it somehow will, since your very well done character descriptions and plot made me admire and love your characters even more. ´Therefor I just hope there won't be a tragic ending to this. I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Snazzy On: December 14, 2003 09:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is getting better and better. But you need to update more often, cause I'm going crazy waiting 2 months for a chapter!
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Title: Finally
Reviewed By: Nasiya-not logged in On: October 07, 2003 07:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg, so Vegeta wants Goku to kill him to face hell as the only punishment he finds to be proper? Will Goku see through Vegeta s behaviour? I really wanna know and hope they will figure out the true cause for the Saiyan No Ouji s behaviour. Please don t take that much time for updating again, I truely missed that story and am very glad you re back!
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Title: Just a little note...
Reviewed By: Pi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2003 08:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well... I just passed by and thought: Hey, why don't you look what Imajineer is doing all the time. ^^ Oh, and I also just wanted to say that's september.. you know, s-e-p-t-e-m-b-e-r! *lol* Ah, can't wait for the next chapter, that's all.
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Reviewed By: love-princess On: August 09, 2003 09:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is so good. The styly of writing is pretty interesting and I enjoyed it very much. The spelling and grammar were almost perfect and it was so easy to understand because the were verylittle mistakes. It was very creative and original and I really think it was brilliant. Overall this story is exceptional. Just write more. I can't wait until the next chapter.
lots of love from
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Reviewed By: Snazzy On: July 17, 2003 10:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please tell me you're kidding... I can't wait until september !! That's wayyyy too long ! I wanna know what'll happen in the next chapter !
*sigh* The only thing for me to do now is wait... a loooong time. Alright, I'll stop whining now. Just hurry up, it's a great story =) |
Reviewed By: Pi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2003 09:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hahaha... you want to kill me, right? SEPTEMBER?????????????? Well, good joke... Ok, I know, I should be the last to say that since I was late myself.
Whatever, there are no great surprises for me in this chapter, except for the twins. Your story is SO amazing and heart touching that I never got it, that Bulma could be pregnant. But I thought Vegeta would go mad and turn into Super-Saiyan or something like that and it's just the next shock in my list. I'm really sorry for Bulma! That's real hell.. I'm just exhaustend and speechless now... Damn, you'r good, you know that? ^__^ I need some fresh air now.. *totally shocked* |
Reviewed By: Pi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2003 08:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so sorry for being SO DAMN LATE!! I had just much to do... I'm really Sorry!!! Oh, and I don't really know where to review... Hard disicion ^^° !
Well.. um, I guess first I should say, that the scene with Yamcha and his "Illusion of Bulma" was really cute. I wanted more to say about that, but.. good god.. I love Vegeta and I adore Bulma/Vegeta, you know?! I guess you do. So.. good god, just what did my handsome and beloved Vegeta do?! I know it isn't really his fault, but damn, that was.. hell!!! Hell for Bulma and hell for me to read it.
"He was completely unreachable." Yeah, it's just like completely black darkness is surrounding him, that's so sad.
God, I hope that nightmare will end soon and Bulma is ok. |
Reviewed By: Nasiya On: July 07, 2003 11:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You aren t serious about not updating till September, are you? This is such a brilliant story, it would be a pity to see it abandoned for such a long time.
Poor Vegeta, what s going to happen, will the z team figure out what caused his behaviour or are they going to kill him for it?And what about his relationship to Bulma, I guess it might get ok again due to the fact that she realised that her tormentor wasn t her Vegeta?
I need more of this;-) |
Reviewed By: Nasiya [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2003 10:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I first saw this on ff.net and you got me hooked, your style is very good, as well as the plot, I can t wait to read more! |
Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2003 14:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wonder what's going to happen in the next chapter...
I hope Vegeta comes to his senses soon, although the damage has already been done. Please update soon and don't keep us waiting TOO long. Nice chapter. |
Reviewed By: Celine On: June 26, 2003 07:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's still a great story =) Please update soon !! |
Reviewed By: Liyah On: May 13, 2003 03:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like it better when you write about Vegeta, Bulma etc. So, I hope you'll write about them in your next chapter. Nonetheless this chapter was good. Can't wait to read the next one :-) |
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