| "REPRISAL UNBOUND" Reviews/Comments [ 53 ] |
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Reviewed By: Snazzy On: April 05, 2003 06:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter again. I wanna read more!!! |
Reviewed By: Snazzy On: April 02, 2003 10:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Again, I loved it. I really like your story, it's not an original story, I mean, other people have written stories like when someone of Vegeta's past is out for revenge, but it's written very well. I like your story the best of the ones I've read so far. Which are a lot ;-)
So please keep on writing, you're doing a great job! |
Reviewed By: sk8erboi On: March 15, 2003 19:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chapter. Can't wait for more! |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: March 15, 2003 11:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yeah...let the lemons and violence commense. *lol* I really like your story, and glad to see you updating. |
Reviewed By: Loulou On: March 15, 2003 10:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like where this is going. Please continue soon... |
Reviewed By: Snazzy On: March 16, 2003 07:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ah yes, really nice ;) Loved it as usual. Please update soon. |
Reviewed By: misty On: February 24, 2003 18:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
well, i don't give 10's, cuz im just that picky, but ur fic is the only one that i check for updates regularly, so please keep writing, it better than i had expected it to be, but it is kinda dragging on, but great. |
Reviewed By: maiyuan02 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2003 15:11 CST
Comment/Review:
i love this story!! it's soo cool!!! i can't wait to read more!!!! please update soon! |
Reviewed By: Snazzy On: February 25, 2003 05:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I still love this fic, please keep writing =) |
Reviewed By: Kat On: February 07, 2003 16:00 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm glad to see you updating this fic...I really like it. |
Reviewed By: Moonshine587 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2003 14:48 CST
Comment/Review:
Really liking the fic so far. I'm curious as to why the chemicals are only affecting Vegeta and not the other saiyans (Vegeta can't be the ONLY one with a dark side). Please update soon. |
Reviewed By: Chibionna [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2003 00:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay I was only able to read up to chapter four cause its almost two in the morning and I need some sleep before I go to work at eight. Anyways, That little bastard! What does he want with Bulma?! I dearly hope Vegeta finds him and rips him to shreds! And what is with Bulma's Dad, what he doesn't have time for his daughter anymore? I mean I know she is grown and all and he sees her at home, but he can't pull himself away from his busy life to eat lunch with her? I mean he eats with the damn man all the freakin time, for cryin out loud spend some time with your kid!! Sorry for that rant, but that kinda pissed me off. I hate it when parents do that. At least Bulma and Vegeta made up. I can't say write more now, cause I have to read the other eight chapters. Don't worry though, when I'm done I'll make sure to politely, but firmly as for more! ^-^ Ja!
~Chibionna |
Reviewed By: misty On: January 03, 2003 21:00 CST
Comment/Review:
im reveiwing since...there aren't any since nov. listed here...i just wanted to say ur fic is interesting, and to continue to update :D |
Reviewed By: loulou On: February 07, 2003 16:01 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter, update soon |
Reviewed By: Gary On: February 07, 2003 16:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Bulma-san, someone needs to do something to help her....
Please post again soon |
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