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Reviewed By: Alan Wilkinson On: January 04, 2003 07:29 CST
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RE: The Edge of Tomorrow.
Inbteresting idea, as brilliantly done as always. Nice to see Alice and Dobermon are around. As for Ryo, looks like he's headed back to... :)
RE: The Call of Duty.
Another interesting format, but the bouncing around tine doesn't work. You know Takato will live by about halfway down, making the rest rather moot...
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Reviewed By: Peter Kim On: December 11, 2002 22:45 CST
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The mega/ultimate digimon that showed up should be the one who's causing the digimons that are after the tamers and Ai and Makoto and their parents just happened to be there as well and saw the tamers and their digimons fighting the mega/ultimate digimon and Ai and Makoto reveling that Beezelmon Blast Mode is their digimon and how will their parents will react to that and the other Tamers's parents and the Tamers might help
Ai and Makoto's parents cope with their children being Tamers and how will Ai and Makoto cope with their first digimon death by the Beezelmon Blast Mode and the Tamers's digimons? Will the parents wents to get rid of Impmon or what and you could write about that on chapter 8 and 9 or more where Ai,Makoto and Impmon is the main charaters on chapter 8 and 9 or more. Please write chapter 7 of Red D-Arc very quickly! |
Reviewed By: Flarex On: December 07, 2002 22:32 CST
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Nice to find this again! And a Princess Tutu reference (possibly) in here? You do have good anime sources! But then you always have.
Great series, and I like reading it. The storyline is good, and the characters intriguing. Now to try to understand more of Ryo on the wonderswan games. |
Reviewed By: Peter Kim On: November 26, 2002 23:47 CST
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Well,it have to be Machinedramon(I don't know Japanese name for this digimon)that have make an apperance in Takato's house but it it the same Machinedramon from digimon02? Will Henry(I forgot his Japanese name)explain have the noise that Takaoto and Jeri made to his sister? I would like to see BlackWarGreymon(Digimon02)make an apperance in this fic. Who is the real villian in this fic and the attack on the Primary Tamers misguided like what Phoniex Digimon Sovern
attcked the real world by using the Devas or on purpose? Even if you are busy,please take the time to read and answer our review in this review section. |
Reviewed By: Jay Man On: November 26, 2002 02:07 CST
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Well though I am saddend by the news of no updates I am glad you updated one last time before you had to go. Great chapter as always. I wish you the best of luck on the resturaunt and happy holidays and happy new year as well. Take care |
Reviewed By: Jay Man On: November 15, 2002 13:15 CST
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Well this was just what I needed ad I thank you. It gave some much needed insight and it gives the hope that Ryo may one day return since his control over time travel is not quite absolute. I hope he can one day control his nutball partner though though I doubt it. Great update great work as usual. |
Reviewed By: Peter Kim On: November 15, 2002 08:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought Ai and Makoto's parents know about Impmon in Digimon03 and in the movie and it would have been better that the parents knew about Impmon but Ai and Makoto's parents shouldn't know
that their children is part of Wild? Does any of the other Tamers's parents know their kids are part of Wild? Neko should have done profiles on the other members of Wild like the Monster Makers.
Please write chapter 6 of D-Arc Diaries very quickly! KEEP ON WRITING! |
Reviewed By: Lord Archive [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2002 14:49 CST
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I got Renamon's quote from someone Zagyg on Megchan's Message Board some time before the site was taken down. I did not translate it myself. Also Megchan's site had numerous people fluent in Japanese who did not make any correction. I do not know whether you're right or wrong, however I will stick with the translation I already have from a site I know to have been reliable. |
Reviewed By: Murgatroyd On: November 05, 2002 12:12 CST
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Having just read a bit further, I see that your mistranslation of that line is based on hearing it as "seibutsu". Grammatically, the line "Dejimon ni wa honrai, seibutsu wa arimasen" doesn't make sense. To say "Digimon are not living things", the particle would have to be just 'wa', not 'ni wa'. |
Reviewed By: Murgatroyd On: November 05, 2002 09:15 CST
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I'm afraid one of your author notes is quite inaccurate. Renamon's line about no gender distinctions existing among digimon was NOT a dub addition. It may be a bit hard to distinguish between "seibetsu" and "seimetsu" just by listening, but by taking the line in context (as a response to Ruki's mother's question about Renamon being female) it is clear that only one makes sense.
"Dejimon ni wa honrai, seibetsu wa arimasen ga"
"By nature, distinctions of gender do not exist among digimon" |
Reviewed By: AniLeah On: October 31, 2002 18:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic! I hope we see more of it! |
Reviewed By: un named On: October 28, 2002 08:42 CST
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Maby ryo could show up and save takto from being killed and please add more soon |
Reviewed By: Peter Kim On: October 11, 2002 05:48 CDT
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I enjoy asking questions about this fanfiction since I'm still a #1 fan of this fic when it started. I think we want to see some of the old Takaoto come in play the same Takoto who gave a inspiring speech and his strong will and determination that allow Takoto to create the blue card and digivoles Growmon to MegaloGrowmon aginest the Tiger Deva in ep number I forgot or how Takoto told Henry that isn't his fault and it is their fault togather in the train when their digimon was facing the chicken Deva,etc and I think Takoto is little OCC and can you make sure some of Takoto's personality in Digimon03 should make apperance in this fic. |
Reviewed By: Sora and Tai forever [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2002 18:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it more. sometimes i get cofussed though.well bye have fun writeing the fic!bye
your friend-Sora-chan |
Reviewed By: Gray On: September 29, 2002 22:52 CDT
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Actually I'd say that the D-Reaper was attracted to Culumon before he released the Shining Evolution. Until he did that, he was the power/algorithm/protocol for evolution, which is argueably the most comlicated/advanced piece of the digital world. And the more advanced it was, the higher priority the D-Reaper liekly would have given it. Afterwards, yeah he was a normal low level digimon and would have been below the D-Reaper's radar for quite a while, until he began actively interfering in things. |
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