| "Red D-Arc Diaries" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jay Man On: November 26, 2002 02:07 CST
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Well though I am saddend by the news of no updates I am glad you updated one last time before you had to go. Great chapter as always. I wish you the best of luck on the resturaunt and happy holidays and happy new year as well. Take care |
Reviewed By: Jay Man On: November 15, 2002 13:15 CST
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Well this was just what I needed ad I thank you. It gave some much needed insight and it gives the hope that Ryo may one day return since his control over time travel is not quite absolute. I hope he can one day control his nutball partner though though I doubt it. Great update great work as usual. |
Reviewed By: Peter Kim On: November 15, 2002 08:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought Ai and Makoto's parents know about Impmon in Digimon03 and in the movie and it would have been better that the parents knew about Impmon but Ai and Makoto's parents shouldn't know
that their children is part of Wild? Does any of the other Tamers's parents know their kids are part of Wild? Neko should have done profiles on the other members of Wild like the Monster Makers.
Please write chapter 6 of D-Arc Diaries very quickly! KEEP ON WRITING! |
Reviewed By: Lord Archive [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2002 14:49 CST
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I got Renamon's quote from someone Zagyg on Megchan's Message Board some time before the site was taken down. I did not translate it myself. Also Megchan's site had numerous people fluent in Japanese who did not make any correction. I do not know whether you're right or wrong, however I will stick with the translation I already have from a site I know to have been reliable. |
Reviewed By: Murgatroyd On: November 05, 2002 12:12 CST
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Having just read a bit further, I see that your mistranslation of that line is based on hearing it as "seibutsu". Grammatically, the line "Dejimon ni wa honrai, seibutsu wa arimasen" doesn't make sense. To say "Digimon are not living things", the particle would have to be just 'wa', not 'ni wa'. |
Reviewed By: Murgatroyd On: November 05, 2002 09:15 CST
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I'm afraid one of your author notes is quite inaccurate. Renamon's line about no gender distinctions existing among digimon was NOT a dub addition. It may be a bit hard to distinguish between "seibetsu" and "seimetsu" just by listening, but by taking the line in context (as a response to Ruki's mother's question about Renamon being female) it is clear that only one makes sense.
"Dejimon ni wa honrai, seibetsu wa arimasen ga"
"By nature, distinctions of gender do not exist among digimon" |
Reviewed By: AniLeah On: October 31, 2002 18:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic! I hope we see more of it! |
Reviewed By: un named On: October 28, 2002 08:42 CST
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Maby ryo could show up and save takto from being killed and please add more soon |
Reviewed By: Peter Kim On: October 11, 2002 05:48 CDT
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I enjoy asking questions about this fanfiction since I'm still a #1 fan of this fic when it started. I think we want to see some of the old Takaoto come in play the same Takoto who gave a inspiring speech and his strong will and determination that allow Takoto to create the blue card and digivoles Growmon to MegaloGrowmon aginest the Tiger Deva in ep number I forgot or how Takoto told Henry that isn't his fault and it is their fault togather in the train when their digimon was facing the chicken Deva,etc and I think Takoto is little OCC and can you make sure some of Takoto's personality in Digimon03 should make apperance in this fic. |
Reviewed By: Sora and Tai forever [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2002 18:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it more. sometimes i get cofussed though.well bye have fun writeing the fic!bye
your friend-Sora-chan |
Reviewed By: Gray On: September 29, 2002 22:52 CDT
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Actually I'd say that the D-Reaper was attracted to Culumon before he released the Shining Evolution. Until he did that, he was the power/algorithm/protocol for evolution, which is argueably the most comlicated/advanced piece of the digital world. And the more advanced it was, the higher priority the D-Reaper liekly would have given it. Afterwards, yeah he was a normal low level digimon and would have been below the D-Reaper's radar for quite a while, until he began actively interfering in things. |
Reviewed By: Lord Archive [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2002 11:23 CDT
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Peter Kim, Culumon is in one scene, and displays absolutely no powers. I don't see how you even thing he has Shining Evolution still. He does not. Second, the D-Reaper didn't care about Culumon at all. It was a weak digimon that could do nothing. It only restrained Culumon when he started to help Juri. |
Reviewed By: Peter Kim On: September 28, 2002 02:48 CDT
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Calamon still have his powers as the Shining Evoulation right? Then why did D-Reaper captured Calamon in the first place? |
Reviewed By: un named On: October 27, 2002 20:29 CST
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Perhaps ryo could reapper and save Takoto when he trys to kill himself |
Reviewed By: un named On: October 27, 2002 20:30 CST
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also please put more up soon |
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