| "Red D-Arc Diaries" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] |
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Reviewed By: Peter Kim On: April 04, 2003 21:42 CST
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I think Canis Black does have a point about Megidramon,I think one of the digimon saw or heard about Takaoto turnig Guilmon's perfect form to ultimate and hate him and guimon for what happened,this is my viewpoint. I would like to see Ai and Makoto taking more active roles as a Tamers and Lee's sister and Impmon can
teach them how to do that since Impmon was almost at the beginning of the Tamers's adventures and knows alot about Tamers or so. I SAID AGAIN,I'M SORRY FOR MY OUTBURST TO EVERYONE INCLUDING CANIS BLACK. |
Reviewed By: Peter Kim On: April 04, 2003 21:35 CST
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I said agin,I'm sorry for my outburst to everyone including Canis Black. |
Reviewed By: Canis Black [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2003 14:49 CST
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I kind of like to see what people say about my favorite fics from time to time, and I saw Peter Kim's review and just had to ask,
What gave you the idea that it was a Tamers fic?
Canis Black
"Beware the rabid black mutt puppies."
-Anonymous Mental Ward Escapee- |
Reviewed By: oxygene_iv [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2003 19:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
not as good as the red digivice diaries but still, is a great fic well worth your time reading |
Reviewed By: Peter Kim On: April 01, 2003 22:24 CST
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Sorry for my outburst. |
Reviewed By: Lord Archive [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2003 23:23 CST
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Peter, the Diaries world setting is my creation. I allow other authors to work in the world. If you have any ideas on working on a Diaries series, I am the one that needs to be approached at archive@mich.com
As it stands, the ideas you posted do not work with the existing continuity. Canis's series only needed a few minor tweaks to work it into world.
BTW, Canis's series is not exactly Tamers related. |
Reviewed By: Peter Kim On: March 28, 2003 23:09 CST
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I have plans of having Wild and the Tamers with their digimons in the Red Digivice world but that plans are ruined because of Canis Black writting a Tamers fic in Red Digivice setting! I have plans to have Wild creating a portal to the Red Digivice world,Tamers and their digimons are sent to that world,etc and Wild will make a base there in support of the world governments in the Red Digivice world since Wild knows alot about digimons,Chosen Children,etc and I was planning to have the Tamers with their digimons save the French Chosen Children from the evil mega digimon,etc without reveling who they are and CANIS BLACK RUIN THE WHOLE THING! I was even going to find authors who write Red Digivice world setting and ask them to put the tamers and their digimons in their fictions. Lord Archives,please ask Canis to change it so that Canis's Tamers is working for Wild and the leader of Canis's Tamers is in charge of the base and no Continent coming out of no where and no Izzy saw it on the news. WRITE CHAPTER 7 OF RED £Ä£É£Ç£É£Ö£É£Ã£Å £Ä£É£Á£Ò£É£Å£Ó £Ö£Å£Ò£Ù £Ñ£Õ£É£Ã£Ë£Ì£Ù £Á£Î£Ä POST £É£Ô QUICKLY£¡¡¡ |
Reviewed By: Alan Wilkinson On: March 23, 2003 07:15 CST
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Exactly what I said; Thought you were someone Archive made up. Sorry... |
Reviewed By: Canis Black On: March 02, 2003 14:24 CST
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Great chapter. One thing has been gnawing at my mind for a while now. The Dramon are attacking Guilmon and Takato and calling them blasphemers, could this have anything to do with Megidramon? It seems that way right now, mainly because most of the Dragon's have been dark dragons. This chapter weakens that theory but it could still be the case. |
Reviewed By: Peter Kim On: January 07, 2003 22:59 CST
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What do you mean I exist Alan Wikinson! Of course,I exist! What do you mean about that comment Alan? |
Reviewed By: Alan Wilkinson (cont) On: January 04, 2003 07:30 CST
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P.S. Peter Kim? You exist? I thought Archive made you up! Then again, this is stil,possible... |
Reviewed By: Alan Wilkinson On: January 04, 2003 07:29 CST
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RE: The Edge of Tomorrow.
Inbteresting idea, as brilliantly done as always. Nice to see Alice and Dobermon are around. As for Ryo, looks like he's headed back to... :)
RE: The Call of Duty.
Another interesting format, but the bouncing around tine doesn't work. You know Takato will live by about halfway down, making the rest rather moot...
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Reviewed By: Peter Kim On: December 11, 2002 22:45 CST
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The mega/ultimate digimon that showed up should be the one who's causing the digimons that are after the tamers and Ai and Makoto and their parents just happened to be there as well and saw the tamers and their digimons fighting the mega/ultimate digimon and Ai and Makoto reveling that Beezelmon Blast Mode is their digimon and how will their parents will react to that and the other Tamers's parents and the Tamers might help
Ai and Makoto's parents cope with their children being Tamers and how will Ai and Makoto cope with their first digimon death by the Beezelmon Blast Mode and the Tamers's digimons? Will the parents wents to get rid of Impmon or what and you could write about that on chapter 8 and 9 or more where Ai,Makoto and Impmon is the main charaters on chapter 8 and 9 or more. Please write chapter 7 of Red D-Arc very quickly! |
Reviewed By: Flarex On: December 07, 2002 22:32 CST
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Nice to find this again! And a Princess Tutu reference (possibly) in here? You do have good anime sources! But then you always have.
Great series, and I like reading it. The storyline is good, and the characters intriguing. Now to try to understand more of Ryo on the wonderswan games. |
Reviewed By: Peter Kim On: November 26, 2002 23:47 CST
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Well,it have to be Machinedramon(I don't know Japanese name for this digimon)that have make an apperance in Takato's house but it it the same Machinedramon from digimon02? Will Henry(I forgot his Japanese name)explain have the noise that Takaoto and Jeri made to his sister? I would like to see BlackWarGreymon(Digimon02)make an apperance in this fic. Who is the real villian in this fic and the attack on the Primary Tamers misguided like what Phoniex Digimon Sovern
attcked the real world by using the Devas or on purpose? Even if you are busy,please take the time to read and answer our review in this review section. |
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