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| "Birth of a Prince" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] | | Pages (4): [ « < 1 2 3 4 > » ] | Reviewed By: Winged Revenge On: October 26, 2002 08:54 CDT
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You know what? I think MediaMiner cut off the last bit of my last review *growls* I hope it didn't... but just in case any of you were wondering *which you probably weren't* I was just saying what a hottie Vegeta was and praising Talon for the addition of these new chapters *smiles* Yay Talon-chan! Although, since you're a mother *babies are so cute ^_^* then I guess I should call you Talon-kun or sama ne? *giggles*
You'll be glad to know I've had my morning intake of coffee and that all madness will stop... for a few more minutes anyway!! So remember this review because at the moment I'm sane *am I?*
*starts looking at her mug* Oh Kami!! I can hear it calling out to me... *rushes to the coffee pot* | Reviewed By: Winged Revenge On: October 26, 2002 08:34 CDT
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Okay, the talk was good, and although I think Bulma's an okay character... she was about to tip away coffee *goes pale* That's just nasty! Evil, horrible and down right wrong, even if it was lukewarm! Hell I like coffee cold! ^_^*yum*
*madness kicks in yet again*
*stands on a tall rock* as god as my witness all those who treat coffee with direspect shell pay and pay dearly *huggles her mug and pot*
*takes a minute to straighten herself and shakes her head clear of madness* Umm, about the above ramble... no comment >_ | Reviewed By: Winged Revenge On: October 26, 2002 08:09 CDT
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I'm back *cackles evilly* did you miss me? *giggles* once again me and my sidekick *mystical never ending coffee mug* have come to sample the wonderful works of Talon Sage *smiles widely whilst taking a tiny sip with the sugar Talon offered* MMMM!!
Anyway... I've just read chapt 30 and it was ... *beautiful* just the right amount of angst and fluffiness and I enjoyed it greatly!! Now I'm off to read the other chapters before I'm overcome with coffee madness... uh-oh! To late! *WHEE* *Starts bouncing off the walls*
Note: Never give Winged Revenge coffee *ever* especially when she's reading a story as good as this!! ^_^ | Reviewed By: Winged Revenge On: October 26, 2002 06:53 CDT
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Morning!! *yawns as she steadies her coffee mug, then starts to cackle* Looks like I have even more chapters to read *smirks* Don't worry Talon!! More reviews from me to come ^_~ *searches for some sugar* @_@ | Reviewed By: Dark Serapha [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2002 03:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dear Talon,
I am sitting here on my desk and I am crying. Why is that so, you may ask? Well, it is because I was both so unbelievably happy and sad at the same time that it just came to me. It is, I must put it that way, EXTREMELY rare that anything does this to me, and it's even more rare that something does this to me because I am happy and sad at the same time.
I am happy, because this story made me smile and even laugh.
I am sad, because it is finished now and I am not able to turn back the hands of time and discover it again for the first time.
I.. I am at a loss of words here. I just wish I could describe how I loved this story. How the details caught me, how I could see everything in front of my inner eye, which is something seldom achieved even by professional writers, and which has always been my measure for brilliance.
I was reading this last three parts and I could see it all. I saw Sage clinging to Gohans Arm, his cute little tail wound tightly around the muscular biceps. I saw Goten and Trunks playing with those odd installations Dr. Briefs did for them. I saw the afternoon sun send it's rays through a window, casting delicate shadows onto a bed with two forms in a tight embrace.
Even the lemon was special to me. I have red a lot of lemons in the relativeley short time I have spent in the realm of DBZ-Yaoi (I think I might have mentioned those thousand pages once or twice already...) and I've red probably every possible sort - romantic, rough, sad, brute, kinky, hot - but never somthing so.. delicate and full of love.
Ah.. now I think I've thought of something appropriate to say:
It is as if you have written the whole story with a smile on your face. And just as you can hear it in a singers voice wether he or she smiles while singing, I think you can read it from a story wether the author has smiled while writing it, and wether he or she put some of his/her heart into the story or not. It may sound odd and a bit trashy, but I think I've seen the heart in this story.
And that's what made me smile with tears in my eyes.
I thank you for this story which was the light of my day, something I was really looking forward to.
I already miss Sage and his happy little family and I will definetely stick around to see where it's all heading towards.
This is special. You are special.
Keep the magic working...
Your's truly deeply motioned half fallen angel
Dark Serapha | Reviewed By: zingzinglee [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2002 16:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Normally I don't read yaoi fics, but this one caught my eye and I must say, it is worth every word. Not only is it amusing, romantic, and angsty, but it has a well created Saiyajin culture behind it, which makes everything more agreeable. Now, if only everyone didn't hate Chi Chi. True, she has a tendency to violence and shrieking, but it would be refreshing to have a story where she isn't a total bitch or totally insecure.
Anyway, all of the above is just a long explanation for Sage's favorite word:
MORE!
O^_^O | Reviewed By: autumn On: October 24, 2002 08:00 CDT
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Oh! I really loved the talk between Vegeta and Bulma. It was so well done. I think you've really captured their relationship so well. Because of the way they have acted toward each other this entire story, it is completely believeable that this talk went as well as it did. And of course there is always something so nice about a Vegeta who genuinely cares for Bulma... even if he doesn't love her. Look forward to the next chapter :) | Reviewed By: Crafty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2002 01:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just finished reading up to the last posted chapter...this is absolutely incredible! I couldn't have stopped reading, even if I wanted to. I love Sage! He is just so adorable, I can't stand it! And of course, there's the whole unresolved V/G thing. I can't wait until they finally get together! They *are* going to get together, right? Please? ::begs:: Speaking of begging, please please update soon! ^_^ | Reviewed By: autumn On: October 23, 2002 16:33 CDT
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Just thought I'd tell you I'm really enjoying this story. Not quite caught up, though, I'm only on chapter 17. I'm glad I didn't shy away with the yaoi warning... normally don't read those but in this story it's very subtle and somehow sweet and certainly understanding. I love your new character Sage, you've done a great job giving him depth even though he is just an infant. That can't be easy! :) | Reviewed By: BlackAzurite [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2002 15:19 CDT
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Yeeeeeeeeeeeeees it IS awful being blocked!!! *growls @ her router*
I was just planning on writing another review yesterday, because I was lagging behind and then I got blocked ... T_T And I have school until 5 p.m almost every day T________T *hits herself*
Enough complaining... I'm here to review the last chaps, aren't I? *asks her other personalities* *nodnod* Yes I am!!
*cheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeers* Yessssssssssss, finally there's some progress!!!
*gets all mushy*
But DAMN do I hope Chichi fucks up soon... *hopehopehopehopehopehope*
Damn but I'm still some reviews behind... sorry perhaps I can write tomorrow at school *g*
And I have to be quick because my router will block me off again soon.... *waves* | Reviewed By: Dark Serapha [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2002 16:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I shouldn't. I know, I'm not supposed to. Heck, I even promised I would wait for Azurite to catch up before I write another comment. BUT I CAN'T!!!
AAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWW...!!
There, I just had to say that! Chap 28 and 29 were just so damn adorable cute that I might very well have gotten permanent damage to my kawainess-sensors!
But the end of chapter 29 was soooo sad! Sheesh.. talk about Goku and his devotion to his vows! *kicks Goku* Gomen, you know I love ya, dear, but ya really deserved that!!
Have you red that story I talked about two reviews back? Isn't it scary?
Okay, now off I go before Azurite finds out that I've been breaking my promise! (she can't get into the net in the evening, poor dear, her router blocks her. Mine does too, but at least it waits till one o'clock am to do so..)
*quickly scuttles off and hides behind a pile of Sage-proof diapers | Reviewed By: Winged Revenge On: October 22, 2002 15:47 CDT
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Talon!! That was just so kawaii!! ^_^ I really can't wait for more!! *suggests you hurry with the next chapter* ^_^ Unfortunately if you put them up now I won't be able to read them until tomorrow *sighs* my pops needs the phone! *squeals* I absolutely love this fic and hope to see more *eyes coffee mug... empty yet again* Perhaps I should try going to sleep instead of drinking coffee to manage with college and my many other things?... *giggles* hah!! *Hopes to read more later but rather sooner than later, hint, hint ^_^* | Reviewed By: Winged Revenge On: October 22, 2002 15:07 CDT
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OOPPPSS!! sorry!! ^_^ I shouldn't be giving the plot away *bows* NO ONE READ MY REVIEWS IF YOU HAVEN'T READ THE STORY!!! *writing that was a little bit pointless ne? -_-;;* | Reviewed By: BlackAzurite [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2002 14:37 CDT
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Again... I didn't see your newest two chapters until after I had reviewed the four before ^^;;;
How should I know you're soooo nice ^___^
Well now I know and I'll make sure I'll refresh everytime I come here.
And WHAT, I'm falling behind??? *looks*
*gulps* cough...you're right... *sweatdrop* But I plan to make up for it, REALLY!
But first, let me read the new chaps ^^
*starts reading enthusiastically* | Reviewed By: Winged Revenge On: October 22, 2002 14:35 CDT
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*Sniffles* chapter 25 is so sad *wipes eyes* poor Vegeta and stupid Kakkarot! No one in their right mind would have the dark haired harpy instead of Vegeta *nods head* Off to the next chapter ^_^ *is all grins as eyes scan her coffee cup* and they say cafine isn't dangerous ^_~ | | Pages (4): [ « < 1 2 3 4 > » ] |
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