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Reviewed By: ZeroSystolic [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2002 23:36 CDT
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Eeeh.. It's me again. HOW COME _I_ Was never informed about that Angel yugi piccie? WHHHHHYYY?! --;; I made the original for you, and NO ONE told Meeeeeee.... ;-; *whack*
And How much space did saving all those reviews take...? o_O;; |
Reviewed By: Bronze Eagle [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2002 21:41 CDT
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^^ That was kawaii, with him hiding behind Ryou-chan. ^^ I think I read into these things too much. ^^;; I'll eventually read all the old ones, to see if you made any kind of changes, but I hafta go to bed right now. ^^; Hope to see more chapters soon!! Ja ne, minna-chan! |
Reviewed By: ZeroSystolic [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2002 22:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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You are CRUUUUUUEL!! >.<!! YOU DIDN'T TELL ME YOU HAD THIS POSTED ON MM?! GAHHHHH!! *punch kick whack*
Anywho. Be warned. I might have to throttle you if you don't update. [And it's Garoozis... not.. um... however you spelled it XD.. I'm picky] |
Reviewed By: tefla On: September 30, 2002 23:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello again DarkGatomon.
Thanks for the link to this site.
I loved the last two chapters you did. (Although I wouldn't mind seeing more suggestions with Bakura and his little 'obsession' with ledges)
Hmm ... I think there is a possible scene you can use that for ... Tristan, Yami Bakura and Mokuba being chased by the Goons ... (Part 2 of the Yugi/Pegasus duel)
Anyway ... keep on writing. |
Reviewed By: Bronze Eagle [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2002 21:32 CDT
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*Scene: Yugi stands on a rooftop, surrounded by a high fence, looking out at the sunset, and thinks about his life.*
Yugi: How did I get into this mess? Everyone always told me not to come up here, but how was I supposed to know that the door automatically locked?
::dies:: I laugh every single time I read that one. Don't ask why; even I can't fathom the depths of my wacked sense of humor. ^^;; Love these. Please get more up soon. ::finally goes to finish her homework:: |
Reviewed By: Bronze Eagle [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2002 20:56 CDT
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XD I never get tired of reading these. Hehe. ^^ I'm avoiding homework, so I think I'll go on to the next chappie .... ^.~ |
Reviewed By: Bronze Eagle [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2002 15:18 CDT
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This got deleted because it was a bloopers fic, right? ::sigh:: I guess I understand why the admin made that rule (some of them are really bad), but yours is good. And you lost all those reviews, too ... T.T Hope to see the next chapter up soon!! |
Reviewed By: Shadow Vitani On: September 29, 2002 13:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this is a much for sophisticated reviewing system then ff.net.
Joey da Pingwin: Yeah so don't mess it up V.
Vitani: Dern Pengwins! You already know how much I love this ficcy! I'll tell you again! I LOVE THIS FIC |
Reviewed By: Sashii On: September 29, 2002 12:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it! ^_^ Hope you get the rest posted soon... ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Shadow Vitani [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2002 14:24 CDT
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I'll go with that! Bakura was a stow away sounds good to me. Anyway great new chapter. I think for now on I'm going to post on both mediaminer and fanfiction.net just in case. ::shakes head:: They've been getting to uptight at ff.net. Oh and I'm glad you liked my idea I told you in your last ff.net chapter. About Bakura calling dibs on the next ride down Pegasus' little trap door.
Joey Da Pingwin: WHERE THE HELL ARE WE?!
Vitani: o.0 No worries Joey it's just a different site.
Joey: I'M LOST!!!
Vitani: Okay fine! |
Reviewed By: Shadow Vitani On: November 01, 2002 23:29 CST
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I wandered back here and now I am stuck...Ah oh well I like this fic anyway might as well waste my insomnia reading it again right? Then again the first new episode, where I live, is at eight in the morning so I better go to bed. I am sure you already know that I love this fic and me and Joey da Pingwin have something to give you!!
Joey: ::holds up a trophy with an adorable little Yugi on top:: Ta-DA!!
Vitani: Isn't it sooooo cute? We present this to you for being the best Yugioh humor fic we've read!!
Joey: We also brought cookies!
Vitani And I leave you now with a random bit of humor from Yugi V. Pegasus part 4
*Scene Yami Bakura has just used the Morphing Jar*
Yami Bakura: There now there is nothing left of those pathetic fools.
Tristan: Uh....There's a pair of sunglasses.
Yami Bakura: ::growls and throws sunglasses off the ledge:: *Ahem* THERE NOW THERE IS NOTHING LEFT OF THOSE PATHETIC FOOLS. |
Reviewed By: Bronze Eagle [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2002 21:47 CDT
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Yay!! Ya got the next one up! ^^ ::munches cookie:: Mmmmm ... Thanks, Ay!! ^^ Hehe ... I don't know if you can change the order of the chapters here ... O.o 'Course, I don't have any fics up yet, so that's not much of a surprise ... ^^;; I hafta go to my homework now (it's 10:50 on a Sunday night ^^;;). Hope you get the next chapter up soon! Ja ne, minna-chan!! |
Reviewed By: Bronze Eagle [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2003 22:39 CST
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I'm so glad you're continuing this fic (if only for a few more chapters). Hehehe. Velly funny. By the way, Time Magician is a monster card, not a magic card. ^^; Dunno why, but it is. Oh, and just in case anyone cares, I've written a rather angsty Bakura/Ryou piece on FFN. ^-^ (Sorry, just had to stick in the plug.) Can't wait for more chapters!!! Ja ne, minna-chan. |
Reviewed By: tefla [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2003 17:29 CST
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:: wipes tears from her eyes ::
That was a great chapter. My favorite scene would have to be the following:
*Scene: They get a rousing send-off by the people of Sin Lau -- who are far more brightly colored and multi-gender than the people of Virtua Town. Adena, seemingly, has a closet full of identical dresses.*
Joey: Hey, look who it is!
Yugi: Earu! I guess this means you want to come with us!
Earu: *flutters around, smiling happily* *silently* I like your hair... It will make a good nest for my young.
Keep up the great job Deeg. |
Reviewed By: tefla On: November 24, 2002 23:13 CST
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*waits patiently for the next chapter to come out* *eyes the gang and goes away for some time before returning a few hours later with bags of chips, bottles of pop, and other party supplies* *sets the bags down and spreads out a banner which reads 'We want ESotR'* *Opens up all the food and hosts a party for anyone wanting to join while waiting for said chapter*
(Deeg ... this isn't meant to be rude just in case you think it is) |
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