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 Reviewed By: Tenshi Calli-chan  On: October 18, 2002 09:17 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Loved it! And yes, it was definately funny, had to struggle really hard not to burst out laughing and wake my poor roommate.

Yami Tenshi: While your poor headmate gets to suffer?

Calli: Shut up, person in my head.

Keep writing!
 Reviewed By: Gothic Star Girl [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 18, 2002 08:35 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Pure genious!! OI! XD XD I can't pick a favorite...the "present-day turtles" one was great....and so was...and that one, too...OI! It's all incredible! Keep it up, and maybe I'll draw ya another picture. o^.~o Pink bunnies and sporks! @.o;; *thud*

...And Yami Bakura, is, indeed, sexy as hell. *drools, then takes out a rather large butterfly net* Bishie-huntin' time! *grins*
 Reviewed By: Tefla  On: October 18, 2002 03:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hmmm ... *looks around before snatching entire plate of cookies. Takes cookies and gives half to Yami Bakura and keeps the other half.*

Keep it up DarkGatomon. I am really enjoying this. My fav scene now is below.
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*Scene: Dark, dirty hallways once again, where Yami Bakura is running down the hall, panting.*

Yami Bakura: *thinking* Where are you, little Mokuba?

Bakura: *unperturbed* May I ask why you're going after him? Does someone older, stronger, and fabulously rich have no appeal to you? If you're going to take over the world, that's not a bad place to start from.

Yami Bakura: *sarcastic* And why are you being so helpful all of a sudden?

Bakura: *shrugs* Bored.
 Reviewed By: ZeroSystolic [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 17, 2002 22:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Heylo! I'm in a sickeningly good mood right now... so I'll make this Quick.. and.. errr.. painless.. I guess...o_O (referring to an oncoming headache from my reviews.... Yeaah... that's it...) err...uh... ~_~ I lost my good mood. err.. Now I'm just confused.. (PS: Yami Bakura aint sexy...o_O SUNFLOWER BOY IS! And no I'm not referring to that freaky kid... thing... Yugi nor his queer Yami...) umm... This was a very irrelevant review...so...err.. I think you are updating pretty damn fast....o_O I congradulate your...um... Enthusiasm... Is that the word? whatever... You see...zZZZzzzZZZzzz....


Are you Listening? Okay... well. FINE! *leaves*
 Reviewed By: Gothic Star Girl [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 14, 2002 18:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oi oi oi!! Hilarious! XD XD I especially liked the one where Bakura is yelling at his Yami to let him out. o^.^o Pure genious! Keep it up! o^.~o
 Reviewed By: Bronze Eagle [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 13, 2002 21:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
This ep finally had some parts with Ryou-chan in them!!! Yayyyyyyyyyy!!! I love what you did with the "jumping's out of the question" thing, by the way. ^^ Hehe. Poor Ryou-chan. ^.~ Which "we" was Yami Bakura talking about in that last one, though? Him and Ryou? ::is clueless:: Well, ja ne, minna-chan!! Hope to see the next one out soon!! (It's Rebecca HOPKINS, goddamnit, not HAWKINS!!! AAAAAAUUUUUUUUUGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHH!!!! ::gets dragged off by goons::
 Reviewed By: Shadow Vitani  On: October 13, 2002 19:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yay new chapter!! Even though mediaminer e-mailed me three times to tell me this fic was updated. Dont know why though!! Anyway cant wait to see the next chapter.

So your going to steal that idea from me?? Hmmm okay but can I have a cookie too?
 Reviewed By: tefla  On: October 13, 2002 19:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey DG. *lmao* I love those scenes with Yami Bakura. *glomps her fav char*

I am not sure whether or not I could suggest scenes ... oh well. *sighs*
 Reviewed By: loanshark [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 13, 2002 16:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
great new chapter!! i love it...and you're welcome! *grinz* well anywayz...i must go off now to write update my own story...so...great chapter! i love it, it's really funny! *grinz*
 Reviewed By: ZeroSystolic [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 12, 2002 23:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
I bet _I_ Can do something about poor AY and his lack of a Yami right now... But... Then Again... I'm... not appreciated... so.. blah. Great job... Updating so fast is scaring me... @.@
 Reviewed By: Tefla  On: October 07, 2002 21:33 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Heya DarkGatomon ... me again.

*Grins* I liked the new chapter and I have found out a few memorable scenes from the other chapters. But I won't discuss them now.

Can't wait for your new chapter ... oh ... I have a story at ff.net (YGO ... It's under tefla for pen name)
 Reviewed By: loanshark [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 07, 2002 21:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
GREAT STORY!!! i've had to read the whole thing over a course of...well...i think four days, would have been less cept that i became sleepy...*sighz* and with school the next day...*sobs*
well, yes, you can change the chapter of ur fic. you have to click on the one that says My Fanfiction, then when ur list of stories show up, you click Chapter Management of the story you want, then you click edit on the chapter you wanna change, then there should be a pull down list of the chapter. i think you should be able to change it there. of course, i'm guessing, coz i've never had to change my chapters b4, so...yeah! anywayz, GREAT STORY!! i really love it, can't wait for another chapter!
 Reviewed By: PharaohYami [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 07, 2002 14:26 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love it! I can't stop reading -needs sleep- NO! NO SLEEP! FANFIC!! My Hikari is bugging at me cuz hes sleepy..but ITS MY BODY! Or would it be HIS body since I am the Yami...er... I think I really need sleep. Meet my Hikari -pulls out a guy- He is Dominick and he's my hikari and we eat hotpockets ^____^ Anyway! Your fic rocks...that is just too funny. I love the package scene over and over..
Grandpa: I don't know. It just came in the mail

Yugi: What an odd thing for a package to do.

That always cracks me up. Dominick is pestering me..so I think I will just go eat.
 Reviewed By: Shadow Vitani  On: October 07, 2002 13:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great chapter I've been waiting for an update...you know the only thing that I found remotley funny about part 4 was when that Relinqushed (spelling ahhh!) swallowed Yugi's monsters I honestly was waiting for it to burp! Really 0.o Strange huh?
 Reviewed By: LiMeiling [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 05, 2002 17:42 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*laughs* I can't believe how FUNNI that was!!!! ^_^ DG!!! That was just great!!! Can't wait until you post up the chapters with Pegasus vs Yugi!!! ^_^
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